!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing part loved it cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Both the parts 18 & 19 are wonderful...I wasnt feeling gud abt Sujal's cold attitude...but the way he was teasing her wid the space  in couch and the popcorn and then usse khana lane ko kaha.....it was all too cute....and showed their comfort wid each other!!

Then of course Kashish uske liye khana le ayi....and that scene that followed....was funny and beautiful in its own way....it was truly sweet!! Kashish wantes him to have that....and he speaks abt having her hand made food all along his lyf...hmm....not bad Sujal!!

But yeah...even I hope all this is for real....pls continue soon....and hoping for sum more progress in their relation...hehe.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Sujal N Kashish both were soo cute !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowwwwwww wonderful yar.............................
 
i think ye trip buhat excitement hogi..........................plz plz con't soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
I really liked the way sujal was teasing kashish but he made the poor girl cry.Things are slowly getting back to how they were between them before.
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 20

They reach, the amusement park.

Both are exploring the place and trying to decide which ride to take up first.

s-lets go on the hulk

k-arre, wo roller coaster? Nahi nahi

s-what no? come

k-noooooooooo, I am scared. We would go on the Paris eye first, then we would ride on the love tunnel, then on the future train.

s-love tunnel? Are you kidding me?

k-no, I am not. I wanna go, I have seen it in movies. I wanna experience. Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

s-OK ! fine ! lets go.

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They sit in the Paris eye.

She is in an awe to see the whole city from the top.

k-wowwwwww ! its soooooo beautiful.

s-yes, lovely

k-mera bass chale to saari zindagi yahin guzaar doon

he chuckles at her comment.

Kashish had decided that they would click a lot of photos of their trip, so they click a lot of photos of each other and also, photos with each other.

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Now its turn to go to the love tunnel.

Sujal is not at all interested in riding the bogus ride.

But kashish is excited as if it would be something out of the world.

There is a long queue for the ride.

Sujal doesn't understand, have all the people gone nuts that so many people are actually waiting for this idiotic ride.

At last, their turn comes and they are made to sit on a ultra tiny boat.

The most hilarious part is that, it is also specified by the people there, that where would the girl & the boy sit, & its also written on the seats.

'some people have really lost it', he thinks.

He somehow squeezes into the boat with kashish.

The boat starts moving, the smell of scent and flowers are engulfing the ambience.

The love quotes are appearing & vanishing in front of them, like the clouds.

Kashish is smiling & losing her herself in the magical ambience.

They suddenly find themselves in a dark tunnel, the sweetness in the environment vanishes.

Everything is dark around them.

K gets worried.

k-sujal, ye..kya ho raha hai?

s-i don't..know

he is unsure himself.

The ambience is engulfed in a deathly silence.

k-kya ride ruk gai hai? Problem ho gai hai koi?

s-pata nahi

sujal starts to take out his mobile from his pocket so as to get some light.

Suddenly, dangerous ghostly face appears out of now where fro kashish's side & gives a scary shriek to her.

Kashish is scared out of her wits.

k-aaaaaaaaaaahhhh ! sujaaaaaal !

 she tightly grabs sujal &

Hides her face in his chest.

he is also baffled at this sudden appearance, he holds her in his arm to comfort her.

She is panting & he can feel her heart beating fast.

k-su..sujal..wo..kya tha..?

s-kuch nahi. Forget it. Its gone. Open your eyes.

He pats her head.

She is quivering of shock.

k-it was scary

s-i know. But its gone now naa.

k-hmm

she is reassured by his words.

She slowly sits straight, slowly composing herself.

As the boat is moving. They could see the sunlight gushing from the other end of the tunnel.

She is relieved that the ride was over.

She is looking at the beautiful sunlight, when she feels something around her wrist.

Something grabs her hand tightly.

k-sujaaaaaaaaaaaal ! [she shrieks]

sujal throws away the ghostly hand that was grabbing her, back into the water from where it had appeared.

Kashish was so frightened & shaken that she hugs him tightly.

She is crying softly.

He takes her in his embrace, & hugs her back tightly.

s-don't cry. Mat ro

he could feel that she has become cold of fear.

He rubs her arms to provide her some heat.

s-kashish, don't worry. Main hoon naa. Kuch nahi hone dunga tumhe.

She had tightly shut her eyes, & her face was hidden in his chest.

Few minutes pass like this.

s-kashish, open your eyes and look

she looks her eyes slowly, and looks up

its written in the mid air, through some cloudy smoke

 

"I know u make me feel complete, deep in my heart; you are the one for me & we can never be apart"

The magical fragrances have again surrounded them.

And, there was a picture of both of them lost in each others arms in the tunnel.

Edited by storywriter - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful n nice part
thy r enjoying with each other n also in each other co, is gud...
like the way u describe each n every moment of love tunnel.id feeling is so nice.wish dat may be thy both were in luv at this moment
but...neways..like the way k wants to vanish in her dream wrld...
like the way s hold her ,calm her so tightly,lovingly,possessively n securely...as if he want to protect her frm evry devil of this tunel n of life too.
the feeling is so pure n calm n beautiful to describe
thanks for updating
bye
tc.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
the up is good
this is really nice sujal kashish went to amusement park and there they enjoyed alot
the love tunnel its really beautiful
it reminded me of my visit with friends to amusement park
i also enjoyed alot
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww that was cute part 😍......... awesome ride πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰............. hope know sujal understood why people go 4 such rides πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
wonderful msg in the end 😳😳..........
so love is in the air πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›.......

continue soon