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!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) (Page 14)

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
lovely....................

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
a very sweet part
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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 12:07am | IP Logged
very nice part..................
sujal ki haalat abhi se aise?????????????wow so kashish has got her first break......................sujal dear apna business bhi sambhalo..........looks like sujal is getting very attached to kashish...........haiiiiiiiiiiii..................cont soon dear...........................
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Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged
amazing part
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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 4:07am | IP Logged

PART 9

Next day was very tiring for sujal, at last his meeting finished at 1 pm & he headed to his cabin.

As he pushes in the gate of his cabin, he witnesses kashish sitting on the chair.

s-hey, audition kaisa...

He stops as he notices that she is crying.

He quickly walks to her & kneels down on the floor near her.

s-kya hua kashish? Why are you crying?

She is still sobbing badly, with her face hidden in her palms.

s-kashish, shhh...look at me now..come on, look at me.

He makes her chin up with his fingers.

Her eyes are red & watery with excessive crying.

s-kya hua? Mood kyun kharab hai? Lemme guess, audition acha nahi gaya, hai naa.

She shakes her head.

k-nah...[she unable to speak, her voice is chocked because of her sobbing]..aud...audition hua hi nahi.

s-oh, bas itni si baat, kal ho jayega.

k-nahiiiii  !!!![she squeals]...

she again starts weeping.

Sujal is worried seeing her cry like that.

s-hua kya hai? Tum aise ro kyun rahi ho?

k-main...main jaa rahi hoon

s-jaa rahi ho? Kahan jaa rahi ho?

k-wapas raigaunge...mujhe nahi rehna yahan...mujhe nahi banna koi actress-vactress...

s-kya ? actress nahi banna??? Tum yahan actress banne hi aai thi naa, kashish. This was your dream. Ek film ka audition achcha nahi hua to tum...

k-baat wo nahi hai !!!!!!!!!

s-kya baat hai?..ek mininute..have some water first, phir aaram se just tell me, ok?

He gives her a glass of water, she becomes a bit calm after having a couple of sips.

She looks at him who is still looking at her with patience filled eyes.

k-main..wo..wo..Sudhir Sharma ke...wo..main...

she again starts sobbing.

He is patting her slowly on her back to calm her.

s-kashish I am getting worried, kyat um bataogi kya hua hai?

k-he said..i was beautiful & talented

s-yes you are then?

k-wo..wo...[she is trying hard to control her tears & form a sentence]...he said that..he would cast me in the movie..only..only if...I start living with him till the movie is made..as his keep

she starts sobbing again.

s-shhhhh kashish, don't cry, people here are....

k-mujhe..lagta tha..wo kitne achche hain, kitne experienced hai, kitne responsible hai ki women issues par movies banate hain, I respected him..& he...

she is softly crying, hiding her face.

s-kashish [says in a caring manner], listen to me...

but she cuts him.

k-main, bass tumse aakhri baar milne aai thi.

s-akhri baar?

k-aaj meri shaam baje ki train hai

s-no ! [he protests] you are not leaving. Just..meri baat suno...

k-mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai, kuch nahi samajhna hai. Maine faisla kar liya hai, bass. Ye jagah mere lie hai hi nahi, mujhe jaane do.

She abruptly gets up & walks out of his cabin.

Sujal remains sitting at the same place with a pensieve expression, he does'nt know why his hears feels so heavy.

+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

After about an hour sujal walks into kashish's place.

She is busy in her hasty packing in a simple salwar kameez

s-kashish !

she looks up. The usual cheerfulness & joy in her eyes are missing.

k-tum? Yahan?

s-socha tumhe station tak drop kar doon.

She nods.

k-thanks.

He notices her broken mobile phone lying on the floor.

s-ye..? phone kyun toda?

k-mujheyahan ki duniya se koi vaasta nahi rakhna hai.

She replies while throwing away the sim from her balcony.

s-kashish, ek baar phir se soch lo, please.

k-main faislaa kar chuki hoon.

s-ek failiure ka matlab....

k-maine kaha naa, bass.

Sujal doesn't say anything

 



Edited by storywriter - 13 January 2011 at 4:10am

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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 4:19am | IP Logged
hi
the up is very emotinal
kashish is so hurt for that idiot sudhir sharma
sach mein yaar yeh kuch log hote he aase haai hypocrate
becchare ka dil he tut gaya aur heemat bhi
and she is going back
and for this sujal is also very dishearted
i hope that sujal kashish ko rokh lee
plz cont coon and pm me
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Posted: 13 January 2011 at 5:33am | IP Logged
its nice part
i want to say its beautiful in a sene d way u portray each n every emotions of both..i had dis doubt frm the vry prt in which u mention abt sudhir mishra n his so called offer but its gud ki usne k se sidha hi baat karli bina ball ko ghumaye as other 1 ,,acha isiye ki k phasi nai aur waha se safely n soundly nikal aayi aur ye aur bhi acha ki she directly cums at s place.the way she's crying is vry heart aching but s knws hw to calm down his lady.but he also kw abt all this n casting cuch stuff.u really r on rgt track dear...i hope u r not in making of page3 or fashion istyle;)but  agar karne ka soc rahi ho to bhi hamare liye bahutttttttt acha h reson bcuz u r vry well n much much better den 'mb' are  for me atlst...
well  so k has decided to go back n leave her dreams well ye wo glat kar rahi h n yaha par hi s ka role hai i knw ki wo toot gayi hai aur kuch nai sujh raha useabhi but s has to do sumthg for her..ya to realise his love ya ohir realisse d power ,power of love,frndship,youth,humanity n most of all power of dreams...
well so k ja rahi h ek baar bhi she not said   ki i'll miss u sujal.but again not her fault but phir the way she  said na ki sirf tumse milne aayi hon aakhiri baar dat is all whih give me or makes happy  happy..c tu udas part main bhi kuch happy daal hi deti h...
well ab ye dekha hhai ki chalti ka naam gadi h ...ya hum he rahi pyar ke...weirdddddddddddd
pls cont soon na...

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