Saath Nibhaana Saathiya

India-Forums

   
Saath Nibhaana Saathiya
Saath Nibhaana Saathiya

FF : Bidding you Goodbye...My love Updated Ch5/Pg5 (Page 4)

Rafeal. IF-Sizzlerz
Rafeal.
Rafeal.

Joined: 20 February 2010
Posts: 10074

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 6:11am | IP Logged
Whoa.. Two chapters in one day.. Kewl! Awesome..

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

choti_rani

br2499 Goldie
br2499
br2499

Joined: 18 November 2010
Posts: 2288

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 6:30am | IP Logged
You dared to look into the non-existent heart of Aham Modi and presenting us what you found! Alas! this was in the serial! Fantastic double post Puja! loved it. Now that you have spoilt me, I want more and soon!
saina01 Goldie
saina01
saina01

Joined: 31 March 2007
Posts: 1681

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Both parts were mindblowing puja.. I can't wait to read the rest now..
Please continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon...
choti_rani Goldie
choti_rani
choti_rani

Joined: 05 August 2010
Posts: 1090

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Just read both parts Puja! Can I say fantastic. Loved them. Now you have spoiled us. We want more! Waiting eagerly!
upasana.diya IF-Dazzler
upasana.diya
upasana.diya

Joined: 19 January 2008
Posts: 4434

Posted: 07 January 2011 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
Puja... you are a wonder...
1st chapter i was like... ohh so sweet, they are coming together and you threw a googly in the last para with Mihir... girl you are a Gem... keep writing
durgeshwari Senior Member
durgeshwari
durgeshwari

Joined: 08 December 2010
Posts: 215

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 4:03pm | IP Logged

Chapter 4



Ahem sat in his office. No, he would never do something like that.Chiraag kaka was his mentor and guide.He had taught him the nitty gritties of business.He knew if he went ahead with the decision,Modi parivaar would be shattered.He closed his eyes and rested for a while.

He thought of his life with Gopi.He always carried the grudge that she was not educated and not worthy of him.He had hoped that his life with Anita would be a smooth minus any issues since they knew each other so well and complemented each other in every way. He smiled to himself.Gopi also complemented his temper and inability to express feelings, as she never asked for anything or expected anything from him. 

He finished his work and left the office.He was in for a treat when he saw Gopi,her mama and a lady seated in the main hall with Mom, Kaki and Baa.His gaze did not leave Gopi as he greeted everybody.he was so amazed that when Gopi used to stay in MM he never wanted to set his eyes on her ever  and now when she was gone,he was desperate to get a glimpse of her!!

Mani brought water and to Koki's surprise Ahem settled himself there.Ahem wanted to spend as much time in Gopi's company before she left.

Gopi had her head bent down towards her knees.Ahem tried focusing on the conversation while staring at her petite form.Koki had decided that before Kinjal or Ahem would get married she would make sure that Gopi Bahu is married.Koki would do the needful as gopi's mother.Gopi's mama was delighted as he was getting on with age and did not trust Urmila with Gopi.

Ahem felt somebody had slapped him or hit him in the gut.He was lost in trying to understand his reaction.NO..........he could not let Gopi go away from him.But thats what he always wanted.  But still... He searched Gopi's face for her reactions!!She had her head bent down so he could not see.How could his Gopi go with another man.He would kill the man who touched her.Just then Mani gave him the landline phone saying that Anita was on line and wished to speak to him.He came out of thoughts and went to his room to answer the call. 

Sarita behen was the lady who sat alongside Koki,hetal and the others in the hall.She was Hetal's friend.Her son Mihir's wife had passed away last year after a prolonged sickness and she wanted to see him settled down.She found the perfect match in Gopi. She left after some time.

Koki and the others were lost in conversation when Ahem stormed out of the hall in anger.He could not believe it!!!!

Anita had presented her point of view which he had refused point blank.Now she and Umang had resorted to blackmail and how.!!He marched towards their office for the final confrontation.  Ahem had suspected that the "CD tactic" was an empty threat to make him agree to their demands.WHen he had not succumbed,they had resorted to violence.

He was being bombarded with blows when Gopi had shielded him and he had lost consciousness.

When the doctors splashed water on him he came to his senses.Gopi was being rushed in a strectcher and he was asked to step into the ambulance. 


The following 14 member(s) liked the above post:

krishygruksmtanya.dsouzapallavisarkarElizaKawabr2499crystal30saina01sinaksaomomswasthi-tellyaddict-.Verity.X.shmm

upasana.diya IF-Dazzler
upasana.diya
upasana.diya

Joined: 19 January 2008
Posts: 4434

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
ohhh dear... don't stop it yet.....
you have me hanging by a thread and you take it away too....

Cry
write more soon



-tellyaddict- IF-Sizzlerz
-tellyaddict-
-tellyaddict-

Joined: 02 August 2009
Posts: 17235

Posted: 11 January 2011 at 4:17pm | IP Logged

Puja lovely, awesome, fantabulous.
Plz dont stop here, plz plz plz continue soon

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
ll Gopi and Aehem ~ GoHem Love Paradise #1

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 33 34

Author: Chandni-   Replies: 270   Views: 39420

Chandni- 270 39420 30 June 2012 at 11:38am by NazimKiDewani
~*~ SNS Music Gallery ~*~ Updated 6/17

2 3 4 5 6 7 8

Author: Chandni-   Replies: 61   Views: 22041

Chandni- 61 22041 22 February 2012 at 8:17am by -Cinderella-
~GoHem & RaJi Scenes~ Updated 6/17

2 3 4

Author: Chandni-   Replies: 30   Views: 14302

Chandni- 30 14302 26 September 2010 at 12:04pm by rusha4003
Aug 12 - Written updated - Aham turns the abuser

2 3

Author: Sky23   Replies: 18   Views: 6638

Sky23 18 6638 15 August 2010 at 12:00am by -tellyaddict-
4th August written update part 1/2 /3/4/5 updated

2

Author: suk19   Replies: 15   Views: 6280

suk19 15 6280 05 August 2010 at 5:35am by suk19

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Saath Nibhaana Saathiya Topic Index

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index