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FF : Bidding you Goodbye...My love Updated Ch5/Pg5 (Page 3)

durgeshwari Senior Member

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
hey m right here!!! please wait for a few hours and il post the next part.. stuck up in something @ work 

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saomom IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 January 2011 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
I could really use something to read right about now....LOL  Hint, hint!

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durgeshwari Senior Member

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 5:21am | IP Logged
Chapter 2

"Ahem this sari looks so good and I know baby green is your favorite color poochie!!!". Anita grinned as she got a nod from Ahem. She was so excited that she,Ahem,Kinjal and Umang had come for selecting their wedding trousseau. Finally her dream was coming true!

Ahem just nodded as green reminded him of someone he detested. Finally,he had his chance and he had thrown her out of the house. He was thrilled when she had not created any unnecessary drama and had walked out. He seemed amazed that how these days instead of basking in the glory of the wedding which awaited him he was spending more time trying to fight off positive thoughts about Gopi's personality. Like yesterday when the news reported murder of a girl 19 years of age with description similar to Gopi he had felt shattered. He was on his way to Gopi's mama's house when he got to know the girl was not Gopi. He concluded that such feelings are natural since she had stayed in his house and he had known her. You develop such concern even for a dog if he stays with you. He was happy and contend with his explanation and carried on with his work. But sometimes curiosity would get the better of him and he wanted to know how she was? If she was alright.

Why was this Anita taking so much time? He had so much work to do. He went to Anita and told her to hurry up as they also had to collect the ring from the nearby jeweler. Anita asked him to go and collect the ring and come back so that he could pay the bill in the clothes shop and they could leave.

Ahem collected the ring from the jeweler. Krishna Bhai who used to come to their house to show koki and Hetal set pieces since ages entered the shop and Ahem greeted him. He asked Ahem "Bahu ko set pasand aaya jo maine bhejha tha kuchh mahine pehle? Phone par shayad Kinjal beti se baat hui thi us din". Ahem was stunned. He did not need any reminder of that incident. He clearly remembered what had happened that night. What struck him today was that he had become so engrossed in getting to know the fact that Gopi was illiterate that he completely sidelined the information that somebody had swindled her into the whole mess. If Gopi could not read and write then somebody had written that note in place of her. He was sad that he accused her and raised his hand on her. He left the shop and went to the clothes shop,paid the bill and left with the others.

He could not sleep that night. He jogged right into Gopi's Mama's house and saw Gopi there. She was dressed in a simple salwar kurta and looked no more than 16.He waved to her and went to speak to her."Kaisi ho Gopi?Main yahaan se guzar raha tha to tumhe dekha. Sochha haal-chaal pooch lu."She smiled and said she was fine and asked about everybody in the house. After exchanging pleasantries, Ahem did what he had planned before coming here. He placed a bundle of notes in her hand and said that "Tumhaare kaam aayege. Kabhi bhi kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho to mujhe batana."Gopi was shocked,she told him that "main theek hun Ahemji.Aapne mere baare mein sochha,iske liye aapka dhanyavaad. Rest I can't accept anything from you. Please give my regards to Maaji. Ahem was speechless,he nodded and left.

While jogging back,the events of the last few months flashed back. Kinjal and Eileshji broke up after Eileshji's family came to know she was pregnant. Koki broke down. Umang came and put forward a condition that he would marry Kinjal if Ahem married Anita. Ahem was relived, finally he would be free from the bounds of marriage he had to bear with Gopi. She left without a word and the wedding was to happen in two weeks. He had overheard Gopi consoling Koki,saying that this would save so many lives. She asked Koki to swear on her that she would never taunt Ahemji about her. Koki agreed and asked her to keep in touch. Her mama took her to his house.

In the morning when Ahem got up,he heard Koki cry. He went to check on her and found that Gopi had not taken any of her stuff from the house,but a gift that Panna gave her. She had left the clothes,jewelry,money everything. Ahem tried to console his mother who was inconsolable.

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br2499 Goldie

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Another episode which asks too many questions than it answers. Great work and keep it up! 

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LoveMJ Senior Member

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Loved it! Cant wait to know what happens next!
Rafeal. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
That was a gud update. Loved it
durgeshwari Senior Member

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 6:02am | IP Logged

Chapter 3:

Ahem came out of his thoughts and decided to carry on with his work. He thought that within no time he would forget who Gopi was. Elated with the thought that she would no longer come into his mind every now and then he went to take a shower. He had to meet Anita in the afternoon. After he got ready he checked his phone and found no signals. He went to the terrace and got signals there. He remembered the incident where Gopi had stuck her sari in the fan here. Stupid Girl! Used to get herself into trouble every now and then. He smiled. He remembered her eyes,always looking up to him with fear. He admitted to herself that she was breathtaking beautiful. Her skin reminded him of silk and her hair! They were so long and those luscious lips,he wanted to kiss the daylights of out them. He stopped himself to check his thoughts. Then he thought to himself "so what?",I am a healthy man who appreciates beauty. Yes,he had lusted for her once or twice and was struck by her beauty,but she was a "gawaar" and that fact was strong enough to convert any momentary lapses of lust into hatred.

Sometimes the attraction would be so strong that he could not resist himself from touching her. He remembered how he had purposely taken time to put the seat belt around her or how he used to steal glances of her every now and then. Stupid Girl had decorated his room with candles. How dare she? Then he thought of the day he slapped her for no fault of hers. He was surprised when a tear fell down his cheek. He knew that he cared even if he tried to define his feelings for her in a word these days. He called it lust/hatred/etc etc.. but he knew that he cared. He remembered how worried he was when she had saved Hetal from fire. Oh he nearly forgot when she saved himself from a snake. He felt something hit him in the gut. When such feelings gripped him,he felt weak. Ahem Modi had cut himself from feeling remorse but this Gopi, his sole purpose of handing her money was to compensate for his unpardonable behavior towards her. Grumbling he went to office.

"Anita are you mad!!How can you even think like that?"Ahem was flabbergasted. Anita was asking him to open a new company since he was the one who was responsible for all the new contracts and the acclaim that Modi Empires had got in the last decade and leave his Kaka. She wanted Ahem to make her and Umang partners in his new firm. He knew he would never do that. It was out of question. Ahem Modi had very strong ethics which nobody can shatter. Sitting right there in the restaurant, right in front of Anita he thought about Gopi. He had treated her so badly, where did the ethics go then?He snubbed Anita and walked off.He needed time to think,he did not want to be mean to Anita as he had been with Gopi..

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 6:10am | IP Logged
lovely puja....u rocked....
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