Saath Nibhaana Saathiya


Saath Nibhaana Saathiya
Saath Nibhaana Saathiya

FF : Bidding you Goodbye...My love Updated Ch5/Pg5

durgeshwari Senior Member

Joined: 08 December 2010
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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 4:38am | IP Logged
Hey guys.. im writing this new FF ,hope you like it.
I want Ahem to accept Gopi for what she is and not bcoz Koki would like it...
We will tear open Ahem Modi's heart and place feelings for Gopi there.. 
Please enjoy and let me know your thoughts....Hope you like it.

Chapter 1: 

Koki sighed,the family had come out triumphed after facing massive turbulence during kinjal's wedding. Finally the nightmare was over and Kinjal had been married to Eileshji who was a gem of a man. He understood how Kinjal had been duped by Umang and had forgiven and accepted her.

Just then Chirag called koki and she came out of her trance. He asked her to bring some prasad that Ba had prepared in the morning. Koki went to the kitchen and saw Rashi there.

Rashi's eyes were moistened as she supervised today's arrangements in the kitchen. Finally Gopi would get the happiness she deserved. She was happy for her. In trying to ruin Gopi's life, she had forgotten when her own life had become intertwined in the mess. She was happy that Jigarji had taught her a lesson that brought her to her senses. She had confessed her wrong doings in front of the entire Modi family. She could see the loath and hurt in their eyes. All of them except Gopi. She could never bring herself to look into her eyes after that. One night she had decided to leave the house when she was stopped by Kokila. She broke down in front of her. Koki told her "maine hamesha yaheen seekha hai ki agar galti karo to parinaam bhughatna bhi seekho. bhaaghna kisi cheez ka hal nahin hota hai."Saying this Kokila hugged Rashi and told her "tum agar apni galtiya sudharna chahti ho to main tumhaare saath hun. Thodha dheeraj rakho".

Rashi looked up and smiled at Kokila. Kokila smiled back. They both knew that they had to ensure that nobody ruins Gopi's happiness again.

Gopi was in her room. Hetal was helping her get ready. She looked splendid in the "pyaazi" colored lehenga she wore. Kokila had got it designed from the best tailor in Rajkot. Hetal had gifted her some of her own jewelry as Gopi was the daughter she had never had and she wanted to do everything she could to make her happy. Hetal asked Gopi that if she needed anything. Gopi nodded her head in negative. Hetal took her face into her hands and told her not to be sad. "The days of unhappiness are over. Now times will change and you will get the love you have desired for so long."Saying this she kissed Gopi on the forehead and blessed her.

Jigar was taking care of the arrangements. He rushed to Ahem's room to bring him downstairs. Ahem's foot had been fractured after an altercation with Umang. He had suffered many bruises and had been advised bedrest by the doctor. Ahem was ready when Jigar entered the room. He noticed that Ahem was lost in his own thoughts. He knew that Ahem bhai was lost in the events of the day he had a fight with Umang.

Umang had spoilt Kinjal's life. Kinjal had confessed that Umang had brainwashed her and she had lied that she was expecting his child. Things were fine for sometime as Eileshji agreed to marry Kinjal when he came to know the truth. Two days before the wedding,Umang blackmailed the family again when he said that he would circulate Kinjal's compromising pictures on the net if this wedding took place. Ahem was agitated. He went to Umang's office for the final altercation. Things got ugly as both got embroiled in a fist fight. Anita came from behind and stabbed Ahem in the arm. Ahem winced in pain as both brother and sister started hitting him with cricket bats. After some time Ahem realized that something cushioned the impact of their blows. He opened his eyes slowly as he had started to loose consciousness and saw Gopi lying on him and taking the complete impact of their blows. The corners of her face were lined with blood as she had been hit on the head. Her head parting where she used to put her sindoor was full of blood and the droplets fell on his face. He could not believe that this stupid illiterate girl had the nerve to interfere in his business again. He wanted to throw her away and ask her to go away. She whispered to him that he should run away. He saw that her jaw was full of blood as well. Just then Anita was hitting Gopi with the bat again when Ahem caught hold of her arm and grabbed the bat from her. He pushed Gopi aside and hit the brother and sister with some amazing shots. The cops came to their rescue with Dhawal. Umang and Anita were arrested and it was found that Umang had been threatening them just like that since he had no such CD.

Jigar had been besides Ahem when Gopi and he were being taken to the hospital in the ambulance. Ahem had been hurt badly in the foot and some visible bruises but Gopi had turned into a bloody mess.

A doctor was attending to her in the ambulance,she was lying down on a stretcher and Jigar and Ahem were sitting on the car seat opposite to the stretcher. Jigar noticed how Ahem kept looking at Gopi who was mumbling subconsciously for somebody to come and rescue Ahemji. They had both been hospitalized and had undergone treatments. Gopi constantly inquired about Ahem and his well-being and so did Ahem.

Eileshji entered the room and greeted both the boys and asked them to come downstairs at once. As they were coming down from the stairs bringing Ahem on a wheelchair,all three saw Gopi who was coming down the stairs from the opposite end looking like a dream.

Kokila and Rashi were escorting her down the stairs and towards the two chairs in the center of the hall. Seated on the next chair was Mihir Virani Gopi's fiancee...

Edited by PujaThapar - 13 January 2011 at 4:05am

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br2499 Goldie

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 4:55am | IP Logged
Oh My! Puja! Googlie!Clap StarLoved it . Continue my dear!
simran15 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 06 October 2010
Posts: 3700

Posted: 03 January 2011 at 5:00am | IP Logged
awesome piece of continue.
ruksm Senior Member

Joined: 07 September 2008
Posts: 331

Posted: 03 January 2011 at 5:28am | IP Logged

Puja who is this new character "Mihir", Gopi's fiancee????  Is it a dream?? Agar sach hai tho Ahem ne kaise maan liya??

Ur next part would probably clear these doubts..
Well written..ClapClapClap
Rafeal. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10074

Posted: 03 January 2011 at 5:31am | IP Logged
ROFL.. Saathiya meet kyunki saas bhi kabhi bahu thi.. Gud start.. And positive Rashi? My team is honoured
-tellyaddict- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 17235

Posted: 03 January 2011 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Puja......lovely start.......and u left us hanging with Mihir's intro....
please next part soon....cant w8 long
durgeshwari Senior Member

Joined: 08 December 2010
Posts: 232

Posted: 03 January 2011 at 6:13am | IP Logged
Thanks guys!!! yes "Mihir" is the surprise packet!!! The name was chosen as i ran dry of all male gujju names!! the only one i could think of was "dhiru" :))
yeah and i am fed up of this" only doing this for mom ahem".. dude get a life!!!!

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LoveMJ Senior Member

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 6:17am | IP Logged
That was an amazing intro pls do cont soon. Waiting eagerly. Hmm Mihir? Ab aham kya karega?

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