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Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 (Page 82)

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Posted: 03 March 2011 at 4:33am | IP Logged

very very nice part..

aww i love teddies

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payalHug amazing update............very beautifully written.....loved it lots..........

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@all i actually had no intentions of continuing with the baarish part but had to coz all waited for it, hope i didn't dis-appoint you'llLOL                                              


                                               Part 18:


Nupur ran towards the balcony towards the rain'it was such a fresh sight'she loved rains, but she didn't knew Mayank's balcony had such a pleasant view which was so pleasing to her eyes'.well now her balcony too'..neatly and equal distantly placed fresh trees'some fallen leaves which had never dreamt of freshness again were once again spreading freshness and the smell of the wet soil since it had rained after a few days now'to add to the beauty was the garden' look from the above from here in the balcony with bright coloured, effervescent flowers'just like the way Nupur felt right now taking  the few drops of water dripping on her hands and taking a round in the balcony itself'.

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Aayi meri subah hasti hasati,

Boli aake tere liye sandesa hai,

Haan hai,

Jaagi aankhon ko bhi sapna milega,

Khoyi khushi aane ka bhi andesa hai

Haan hai

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Ahh haan

Khayaalon se pare

Ah haan

Ye zindagi chale

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She turned to look at amazed Mayank who was now heading her way'

Mayank said,'Tumhara dimag toh theek hai naa'.subah subah puri bheeg gayi'?.......ab sardi toh lag hi jaayegi'upar se room mein bhi paani aa raha hai'.band karo balcony ka door' saying this he halted in front of the balcony with a serious expression'

Nupur looked at him trying to come back from her trance and wondering f such a weather too could leave him unaffected when she spoke, 'Mayank'.tumhara janam insaano mein hua hai taaki tum yeh pyaari pyaari cheezein ' still playing with the rain 'enjoy kar sako, aao naa bheeg kar toh dekho'.main tumhe money back guarantee bhi de sakti hoon''saying this she laughed loudly and sprinkled some water on Mayank too'

Mayank was still in the same serious mode trying to protect himself from the rain'he rolled up the carpet a bit near the balcony and returned to Nupur saying,'dekho sab mess up ho raha hai''

Nupur said,'Mayank dekho, kaam karne wali bai ke liye bhi kaam interesting banne do'kabhi toh use aisa lage ki iss room main koi rehta bhi hai ' she said laughing

Mayank gave an expression of total surprise and stood keeping his hands on his waist and Nupur said 'achcha achcha saaf karti hoon'waise bhi pleasant toh morning already ho gayi''saying this she sprinled some more water on Mayank while Mayank tried to duck it and said, 'Mujhe jogging ke liye late ho gaya aaj'' and went away from there for his daily routine'

 

Nupur stopped Mayank suddenly saying, ""Oh…Mr.Mayank…aapko toh bheegna pasand nahi naa…toh itni baarish mein jogging pe kaise chal diye?"

Mayank stopped smiling and turned back to reply to her query,"Who kya hai naa ki….shayad aapne notice nahi kiya par ghar mein tread-mill namak ek vastu bhi hai…toh bina bheege bhi main apne necessary kilo-metres cover kar loonga roz ki tarah…"

Nupur gave in an expression which said,"Ohh"

Mayank smiled with a matter-of-factly expression and continued,"aur agar aapko bimar nahi panda toh please garam paani se naha li jiye aur garam chai mangva kar pee li jiye…"

Nupur exclaimed,"Itni subah subah nahana...?"

Mayank laughed and replied,"Naha toh tum pehle se chuki ho" showing herself to her by hands…

Nupur looked down at herself and said with dis-appointment to herself murmering,"Woh toh hai, …aur yeh toh mujhe Bauji ki tarah bheegne par dhero instructions deta jaa raha hai.."

Mayank asked, "Kya?"

Nupur replied,"Kuch nahi…tum jao…tumhe toh late ho raha tha naa…"

Mayank shaked his head and turned for his tasks ahead…

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Mayank came back after sometime while Nupur had already taken bath and was combing her hair when he came and announced,"Ma ki tabiyat theek nahi hai…..Main aur Dad unke saath ja rahe hain" taking his clothes from the cop-board while he said this…"Family Doctor ke paas jaana hai…aur kuch tests bhi karane honge Doctor ne phone par kaha…"

Nupur asked worried,"Kya hua unhe?..."and herself decided "Main bhi chaloongi saath mein… "        saying this she left the room in a hurry for checking on Mayank's Ma and he quickly moved to take bath worrying for his Ma's health now…

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The family Doctor of Sharmas had directly called themin the hospital near his Clinic since they had to take some tests and get the results to further proceed with the treatment slowly….

They had already booked a bed for her since she felt like vomiting continuously, had fever and felt very weak with a red face now…

Sameer Sharma was by her side continuously and had sent Mayank to the office to fulfill for the attention that an important meeting needed…he had to leave most unwillingly though…

Nupur ran for the required medicines, fruits, juices..etc…taking care of Ma…

Nupur had cancelled going to her office for the day where she was supposed to resume back just on that day as per the commitment of hers…

 

Sorry for the mistakes, if anyLOL

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 2:51pm | IP Logged
Sorry for the small update again.Confused..but i promise next update will be bigger....Big smile

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
awesum update pallu.. Big smile

do continue soon and yea i demand for a longer one Big smile Big smile

yay me first to comment! Big smile

Edited by VasanthaArTi - 05 March 2011 at 3:16pm

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
SMALL BUT NICE ONE
lOVE BARISH SCENE
THANKS FOR PM
CONT SOON

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 9:09pm | IP Logged
awesome update dear...........

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Posted: 05 March 2011 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
awesome PayalClap
loved the morning sceneDay Dreaming

par Maa ko kya hua?Confused

thnx for de pm
do continue soon


Edited by jiya_angel - 05 March 2011 at 9:31pm

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