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Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 (Page 77)

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i think their relationship is growingEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
lovely updateSmile

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hey payal...
i never knew .. u write sooo beautifully...Clap
well...i ws gettin bored...& cleanin my inbox....& saw ur pm... 4 part 16...Embarrassed
i actually .. read all of d updates.....Tongue
must say... i luvd MN's journey frm enemies 2 deir marriage...
luvd it totally..Day Dreaming
wil wait 4 ur next update....
pls do pm me...
 
 

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Fabulous update

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cont soon

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Thanks all for so inspiring comments and finding some interest in such a simple story..Hug


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                                                      Part 17

 

Nupur was in her room arranging her bags and clothes, Mayank was there too busy on his laptop performing some of his important work when he suddenly noticed Nupur trying to climb a stool to keep her bags on the loft, Nupur that she was, never asking for help and attempting everything for she desired to, and was standing in a weird position holding a heavy bag of hers, besides she had kept the fan ON while she performed her acts

Mayank got up to switch the fan Off when she lost her balance and she fell backwards but Mayank came to stand beneath before she falls, so she fell with her back resting on his  shoulders and her long half tied hair all over his face and she looks back at him amazed as to how did he reach in time to save her from falling and also the fact that amazed her was the way he strongly but gently pulled her down..for a split seconds that their eyes met and Nupur saw him seeing her with an expression which said, "Never can she handle things on her own" she remembered how he had once said to her earlier

"Nupur, can you ever take care of yourself atleast..am afraid No" in his anger

Mayank thought looking a her, "why can't she ask for help, I would never deny...always going the adventurous way missing onto the precautions always" and he looked at her in anger

Mayank spoke while Nupur was still silent for a second, "Nupur, please jaakar fan off karo aur main ye sab rakh deta hoon" in a bit stern tone

Nupur replied to him coming back in her usual mode, it was always easy to argue with Mayank, and same for Mayank too.."Nah thanks main rakh loongi"

Mayank replied, "Nupur, please warna iss room ki cheezein todne mein tum waqt nahi lagaogi"

Nupur replied now in complete anger, "main cheezein tod rahi thi?.....ek toh main gir jaati aur tumhein cheezon ki padi hai theek hai lo rakho .ab toh jab bhi aisa koi kaam hoga toh tumhe bhi bulaaongi karne ke liye Office mein bhi phone kar ke" she knew she was going overboard but then...speaking volumes came easily to her..very easily..

Mayank replied, "Kyun nahi, kamse kam ghar safe rahega..itni tasalli toh hogi..warna jahan tum wahan safety precautions ki zaroorat toh padegi hi naa"

Nupur replied, "Mayank"and continued forcing a smile"tum..khair chodo jaane do'kamse kam mujhse ladne ke bahaane bolt oh lete ho'warna tumhari awaaz toh hamesha hi chutti pe rehti hai'"he looked at her in anger twisting his jaws a little when she continued, "Please aap khade rahiye main aapko saaman deti hoon.." in still an irritated mood

Mayank smoothly kept all the bags and small packets on the loft while the both kept a bit arguing and a bit bickering when Nupur placed something soft in Mayank's hands and soon snatched it away'Mayank looked back to see what that was when he recognized something familiar'..

It was a Soft Toy ' a pink coloured teddy bear that she had placed in his hands and then took it away saying, "Nahi isse main bahar rakhongi bed pe.pillows ke beech mein achcha lgega na" with a big wide smile and a dreamy look in her eyes when she suddenly looked at Mayank whose eye balls oscillated between Nupur and the teddy bear as if asking for an explaination'

Nupur replied getting a bit taken aback by his reaction, keeping her hand on her throat she tried explaining, "Jaanti hoon'jaanti hoon ki kabhi kabhi tum bhi galti se achcha kam kar dete ho'.maine Thank you kaha tha tumhe iske liye saalon pehle'aur waise bhi, har achchi cheez ko appreciate krna chahiye'toh, maine isse sambhal kar rakha hai'aur waise bhi ab yeh mera hai.."

Mayank looked amazed at her explanation when she replied, "Aur ye hamare bachpan ke pyar ki nashani jo hai" when she started laughing loudly seeing Mayank's bolwed expressions when he narrowed his eyes on the empty loop attached to a satin ribbon that hung around the Teddy's neck....

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Mayank and his dad had to go to Nupur's birthday party, Shilpa Sharma was at her mother's for some days now'.Mayank and his dad were fully dependent on Shilpa Sharma when it came to things such as gifts, parties and all..she managed all pretty well without any help required of the 2 Sharma men but they did''.always''.

It was Nupur's birthday party and Mayank's dad had sent Mayank to buy a gift for her'he didn't knew what to buy at all'buy he guessed she would do with a teddy bear since she had carried it once or twice at his home too to show it to Shilpa Aunty and he thought that pink being a girly colour should work too but there was one problem'

The only pink coloured teddy bear he found was great but it had a pillow attached to it'to a satin ribbon around its neck'and the problem was it was a heart shaped small pillow which read "I Love You'"

There were other ones too'one which he liked was white but he imagined Nupur replying to hi in return, "Uncle gift toh achcha hai, par lagta hai Mayank rangon mein bhi kanjoosi karta hai baton ke saath saath"

Mayank thought of a logical solution to it'.he bought the pink teddy bear and took the pillow off the teddy's neck just leaving behind a satin ribbon attached to the teddy and kept the pillow into deep debris of the things he felt he would never use but owned'and gifted it to Nupur where she liked it and was very happy with her gift when Mayank felt relieved that she didn't notice the empty loop that was his blunder he knew'...

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Nupur took the teddy and kept it on the bed between the pillows while Mayank remembered the pillow which read "I love you" and her statement "bachpan ke pyar ki nishani"'it was a casual remark for Nupur he knew but he felt odd..really odd'he was not very prone to being at fault usually and here he was, he thought and felt bad'

Both completed the shuffling of things here and there when Nupur said a genuine thanks to Mayank for helping her forgetting the reason that he had said to help her while they both retired to the bed feeling exhausted and thinking of the following day which was to resume them back to work now'

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Mayank got up at his usual time and saw his Mobile buzzing alarming him of the schedule he had for the day'.Mayank got up quickly and moved over Nupur to get to the Mobile phone when she had already woken up and when she opened her eyes she saw Mayank leaning a bit over her to get hold of the phone when Mayank and Nupur both sat up quickly feeling weird to have found each other in this position when Mayank opened his mouth to explain but was cut in by Nupur because she screamed ludly, "Baarish!!!" and ran towards the balcony forgetting every thing else and seeing the beautiful view that Mayank's room's balcony always presented while leaving Mayank amazed behind at her curious reaction for a simple thing such as rain'

Sorry for the mistakes, if anyLOL

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baarish!!
i love nupur in baarishDay Dreaming

and the teddy bear was cho chweetHug

thnx for the pm
do continue soon

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