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Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 (Page 76)

lovelycactus IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 10:44am | IP Logged
lovely part !!
nupur and her nautanki bit lol...

Edited by lovelycactus - 25 February 2011 at 10:44am

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-ISakuraS- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Part 8


-Wow! Shilpa aunty just too good, how she handled Mayu was awesome! I'm so like Mayu, I don't like it when my mom says ur decision…

-Mayu is so sweet…he was thinking of her and her dream of prince charming..

-Nupur's dilemma is totally understandable…no girl would want to live with someone who shows indifference towards his wife... but I don't think Mayu will do that atleast not for long..For him, it's hard to not react to her, though it is usually negative…

-It seems to be like both do have feelings for each other though are unaware of it.

-Great part!


Part 9:

-Mayu – Shilpa aunty scene @ beginning was so cute, esp her ruffling his hair…I loved how he said he wanted to ask her…                                                                                                                            

-I loved her expression when she went to answer Mayu's call…lol. She like Nupur!! And I can totally imagine Mayu's irritation…poor guy! Then Mayu's rxn when she said yes…god, this scene was too good!! !Awesome work Payal!!


Part 10:

-Mayu wanted to pat his mom for her cleverness! Looks like someone is very happy with his choice, though he doesn't realize it..

-I'm just loving Nupur..she gives like the oddest rxns in serious moments but that's our Nupur!! They were fighting on their engagement? WOW, only our mayur would do that..I love them and miss them so much!!

-Glad to see Nupur participating in all marriage preparations…and how she is trying to make it work right


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SujaLuvsMayur IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwwwww...........lovely update.
icecream wala part was so sweet.
loved it.
update soon.
thanks for the pm.

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--jiya-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
awww.....Day Dreaming
that was soooo cuteDay Dreaming
loved the ice-cream part....
hmm... so kuch kuch badal raha hain??Wink

thnx for the pm payalHug

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MyInspirationz IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Payal.. First of all, I m so sorry that I didnt comment on the earlier parts... but you write so beautifully..
I love the normal MN with fights and arguments... and this update was damn good.. the ice-cream and the hug part (the one where Nupz felt like hugging him for bringing that smile on her Bauji's face)... veryyyy nice...

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ginny09 Goldie

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
superbbbbbbbbb part !
great going !!!!
thanks fr the pm ! 

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DhanakZ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
Lovely Update 
Ice creme scene was so cute
Thanks for Pm 
Cont soon 

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Alisha-2887 Goldie

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
Nice update Payal
Thanks for the pm

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