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Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 (Page 73)

Payal-15 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged

                                                                @all...hope you'll like itLOL    

                                                                          Part 16

Mayank  left after lunch towards Nupur's home, he drove off in his car silently knowing the fact that silence was just a guest…now that Nupur would soon be with him, by his side…


At Nupur's home…he had the usual greetings with all and stayed there for a little while after which he took the hold of Nupur's additional bags which surprised him all the more -that there was a scope for more baggage with Nupur always…he took the bag and was about to leave when Bauji smiled at him with a calm satisfied smile…as if he was the happiest seeing his daughter leaving with Mayank to their home…this smile brought tears in Nupur's eyes…she felt at peace with Mayank for giving her Bauji that smile..for being the reason for that smile and felt like hugging him for it…hugging was a simple gesture for Nupur to show away her emotions in the simplest manner…but thinking that it was Mayank she thought of, it made her think many more things…firstly…she wondered if he may jerk her away(unlikely for Mayank to do such a thing of dis-respect but then she was Nupur…) and secondly she thought that it was just a supposition of her mind…she may never do it…..


Mayank was waiting outside the house waiting for Nupur when he had already put her bags in the car when he saw her coming walking towards him, slowly adjusting her Saree she had worn that day, for that was the most appropriate going by the rituals….Mayank saw her walking towards him while she tried to walk properly in her Saree as if she was in the most comfortable gown and trying to smile to hide her inconvenience when he thought that she looked most innocently cute with those expressions of her's…….

Nupur reached the car and said, "Lao chavi mujhe do, main drive karoongi…"

Mayank managed a smile and thinking of how just now she was trying to adjust her Saree and was just trying to to comfortable but now she wanted to drive in it, surprised him...... and also the fact that he always drove his own car and no one else, he replied, "Nahi, tum baitho…main chalata hoon…"

Nupur got a bit angry and said to a passer-by "dekhiye bhai saab…ab maine aisa bhi kya maang liya…sirf car hi toh drive karni ki farmaaish ki hai…kya ek naari gaadi bhi nahi chala sakti…"in a dramatic style

Mayank was amazed at Nupur's sudden drama to an unknown person and tried to smile at him but when the stranger nodded his head in Nupur's direction and told Mayank that she is right then Mayank glared at him making him leave the place for his own good…

Mayank showed the way to Nupur towards passenger's seat and said trying to smile,"Please…aap baithiye"

Nupur made a lost-the-battle expression and went and sat in the seat she was indicated at when Mayank came down towards her side to put the seat belt but then indicated her to put it on her own and went on to sit in his own seat and started driving….

Nupur after a few minutes of silence spoke suddenly, "Mayank…tum apni car kisiko chalane nahi dete hoge hai naa…?"

Mayank was surprised at Nupur noticing it so clearly and just looked at her without saying anything when Nupur continued herself, "yeh kya baat hui…tum aur tumhare rules…"

Mayank replied,"tum bhi toh apni gaadi khud hi chalati hogi naa…" which was most obviously the answer to this according to him

Nupur replied,"haan…"and smiled to herself and continued, "isse achcha toh main apni gaadi mein aa jaati…tumne toh mujhe driving ka chance bhi nahi diya…"

Mayank was surprised at her willingness to drive so much and replied, "kyun nahi…aapki gaadi ko escort karne hi toh main yahan aaya tha…jaise Prime Minister ke aage peeche gaadiyaan chalti hai…waisi hi right" making a sarcastic face at her and continued, "par aap chinta kyun kar rahi hain…Rajkumariji ke liye toh sevak hote hain naa…isliye aapko sahi salaamat ghar pahuchane ki zimmedari meri theek hai…aap aaram kijiye"

Nupur got the teasing tone in his voice and replied, "theek hai…toh sevak…theek se chalao gaadi aura age dhyaan do road par aur mujhe looks dene par kam…..theek hai"

Mayank shaked his head in dis-believe and looked ahead on the road when Nupur suddenly yelled, "Ice-cream!!!" when Mayank brought the car to rest to see if she was officially a child now

Nupur tried to explain herself and her scream when Mayank looked at her for an answer, "woh…..iss tarah jhagad kar ghar jana theek nahi hoga…ye sab vidhiyaan(rituals) hoti hain….toh hamein ice-cream kha kar phir ghar chalna chahiye…aise ruthkar hue nahi…"this gave Mayank an idea that she was actually angry at him very much for not letting her drive but she still wanted to make everything well on her part and also that she so much believed in all the tradition's part which he had been ignoring eversince he remembered…not that he didn't believe in them but hardly paid attention to these things….

Nupur went away and quickly brought 2 scoops of butterscotch ice-cream since she knew Mayank too liked butterscotch like her from Shilpa Aunty and gave one to Mayank surprising him that she had co-incidentally brought butter-scotch for him, the one which he liked…

Mayank started the car and Nupur was busy eating her ice-cream and Mayank was busy driving and thought that finally Nupur was at peace…when she noticed that his ice-cream had started melting and so she opened the cover and kept it in front of Mayank's mouth saying…"Lo khao…pighal rahi hai"

Mayank showed her the steering wheel and indicated that he was driving and so he can't have it right now when Nupur replied to him, "toh lo bite…maine pakad kar rakha hai…khao…"and she said with such an obvious smile that he couldn't deny but took a bite from the ice-cream….and a few more…while Nupur ate her own and fed him his…it was certainly a surprising sight for both of them too though they ignored it…they both felt a bit odd at the sudden change in the atmosphere with no quarrel between them and such a relaxed behavior of each other at something which was not so relaxing…

But then while the car passed over a speed-breaker…ice-cream found its way on Mayank's face and Nupur gave sorry expression to him and Mayank stopped the car to clean his face and finished his rest of the ice-cream himself still feelng odd at the way in which he let Nupur feed him in bites and Nupur was no less surprised at Mayank's calmness over it…

Mayank then started the car again and they both travelled to home in almost silence  until they reached home 


At home Nupur hugged Dad and Ma with such a delight as if they were her own parents and Mayank felt as if he had re-entered Nupur's house instead of his own since hugging on arrival of a member of the house was not a usual practice at Sharma Mansion….

All went inside while Mayank brought Nupur's suitcases to "their" room…

Sorry for the mistakes, if anyLOL


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Fantasia. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:20am | IP Logged


awww...that wa so lovely..the icecream part..Day Dreaming..true whether u are strangers or enemies - the word married brings a strange sense of comfort! - lovely!

Edited by -Mehak - 25 February 2011 at 12:23am

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Silent.Dreamer IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:34am | IP Logged
very nice and sweet update..

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Payal-15 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:38am | IP Logged
Mehak, Moona.....itni speed se padh liya LOL


Mehak Mayur always find their comfort in each other easily naa...Wink LOL
.SA. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:41am | IP Logged
loved the update Payal, so sweet. they are learning to be in each other's company without snarling .
hope they fall for each other sooooon.

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Wings-of-Fire IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:55am | IP Logged
love the way their relationship is growing up.

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_TheJoker- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 12:56am | IP Logged
hey payal
that was really a sweet part
really loved it
continue soon

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-firebird- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 February 2011 at 1:10am | IP Logged
aww.....that was really the way that how the relationship is growing up.... cont soon

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