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Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 (Page 68)

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
Wao  mind blowing update
so cute Nupur Swami ji and smiley part was so cute
Thanks for Pm and cont soon

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
Lovely update Payal
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm Smile

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged
amazing..........

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 4:23am | IP Logged
i dunno for some reason i really loved that smiley part.i was smiling while reading that partSmilelovely update payalBig smile

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 6:54am | IP Logged
Awesome update
loved d shock on mayank's face
The first morning was hillarious, usually the first morning is romantic but this was totally oppostie.
it was nice to read ... awesome...
d smiley was very cute ... loved it.... par phirse sadu mayank wapas agaya.
tray scene was funny, poor Mayank....... puri zindagi dar dar ke jeena parey ga...bechara..........m rofling while reading.......it was really very very hilarious.
loved it.
loved Mayur  nok-jhok  and  shilpa aunty also taking nups side..
bechara mayank
mindblowing update.
waiting for next.
update soon.
thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 6:07am | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwww !!!!!!
gr8 part :D
n abhi more to come :lol:

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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 3:49am | IP Logged
Thank you all for such wonderful comments and for  such encouraging wordsHug

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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
@all...i hope this is a long enough updateLOL

                                                                        Part 15:

New came the event of the ring game where Mayank and Nupur had to find the ring in a small pool of milk and roses, which was beautifully decorated for them. Mayank protested in a glare to Shilpa Sharma but she smiled and indicated towards the bowl which said "there was no getting away" and he gave in to his Mom, which lately he had been doing quite a lot, he thought

Nupur didn't mind playing the game, she loved competion and somehow always wanted to prove herself in front of Mayank, besides she never backed out on anything and never feared these small courses of life

Nupur took out the ring in her first chance showing it off to Mayank with a smile when he realized she was actually competing with him and so he brought out the 2nd time so quickly that she didn't even realize he was back in action and now for the third and the last time 
both were seeking out to sought the ring......even the people around were calling out "this was the decision maker"

When Mayank and Nupur showed out all their attitude to each other looking in each other's eyes and put their hands in the bowl and Mayank seemed to have caught the ring inside the bowl but Nupur reached out her hand towards his...inside the bowl and held the ring too, along with him and Mayank looked at her in surprise when everyone around started a session of teasing them so Nupur brought out the ring out of water which brought the ring out of Mayank's grasp and he looked at her in dis believe while Nupur smiled to all praising her and she smiled at him too making him further out of words but still nervoursly looked down since he had caught it first but tried to hide it and hold onto her attitude still to Mayank....

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Now came the time for Nupur to cook the first sweet dish in her new house, and now even she was getting bored with roaming around in the whole house surrounded by so many distant relatives, she felt bad for Mayank who must have been having the hardest time she thought, still how would she not tease him when he himself showed her his irritation in face...

Shilpa Sharma announced them to make the dish together...she said "That would be the sweetest dish for me, if you both make it together, though it contained minimal sweetness and maximum spices"

Mayank and Nupur looked at each other in shock and then looked at Ma who smiled and looked at the relatives for encouragement who not only encouraged Mayank and Nupur but took them in the kitchen and practically almost made the sweet dish themselves giving innumerous instuctions to them about how to make it and presenting themseves at every step of the cooking part thereby making it easier for Mayank-Nupur to cook but exhausting them in the process at the same time. Finally they served the sweet dish making all happy and mostly Shilpa Sharma who enjoyed every bit of the day with her favourites by her side...

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In the evening Gunjan and Bauji had come to take Nupur home according to the "Muhoorat" and also thereby the guests left too giving a lot of relief to Mayank now, so that he could breathe easy in his own house and Nupur was more than happy to be back at her home which was till yesterday her only home....but not today...from today...
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Nupur was so engrossed in talking with Gunjan that she didn't realise when it was nightfall but their talks were still never ending...
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Mayank came to sleep in his room and lied down on "His Side" of the bed still, he thought, now he'll have to make a habit of it...since Nupur now owned this room too along with him....he felt strange how she found ownership to things so easily and made herself so much comfortable everywhere...it was one thing difficult for him...and how she had always owned a part of his mind unnaturally...even when it was against his will...whether he had to take his important decision of marriage...or maybe the first time he had fought for her....well fought for her...not exactly...but that is what he had been listening to from his Ma's words from a time he doesn't even remember...but one thing was sure Mayank Sharma had never had a "Nupur free" life...she was always there...in a way or other....always...
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Mayank had had a first fight with his dear friend Samrat when they were in class II and Nupur was in class I. Mayank was not aware of what had been going on there but when he came all he saw was Nupur crying because Samrat had pulled out her hairband and in the process had pulled out Nupur's perfectly combed hair making her hair looking wierd and out paining her and she had just managed to get back the hairband from his grip somehow, being the Nupur Bhushan that she was, never giving in to a situation...Mayank had just reached there and seeing Nupur cry like this had pulled Samrat from there roughly, said sorry to Nupur rather softly and yelled at Samrat for behaving so with her...though as a small kid he knew he had to fight for right and he knew we should make people understand their mistakes as his Ma always thought him...he must have had no idea about this incident unless his Ma had constantly repeated this story over the years in front of him...keeping him reminded of his own approach to life, and since childhood how proud he had made her and kept doing so....she believed in giving him inspiration from his own deeds rather than some person he may not know much...that too was important but this made Mayank strongly believe in himself always....this was one incident but many such incidents were  reminded to him...that made him look at circumstances in a different way, much so because his Ma and Dad helped him have a bigger picture of it always and he handled things himself, but their "Larger than Life" thoughts helped him grow to become what he was now...a Strong individual....and Right in all senses...
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Nupur while talking to Gunjan felt asleep in her room itself...Bauji came to see Nupur and Gunjan deep in sleep and turned off the lights with a smile on his lips but a tiny tear in his eyes thinking that this would not be his everyday sight now...he had to get used to seeing her less now at home and miss her more...probably see Mayank in office more than Nupur....but he was firm in his mind about his decision about Nupur...and prayed silently for Mayank and Nupur's life together to be a pleasant surprise everyday...and knowing them both...he had an idea that it most probably will be that....
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One of the days in high school when Mayank and Nupur had had another one of their arguments and Shilpa Sharma cornered her child at home repeating her stories to him about when they were 5 and 6 years old...

"you both had gone to a birthday party of a school mate...yes...you used to attend parties until it was on me...."

Mayank made a face which said..."Oh Ma...please not again"

Shilpa Sharma continued, "Jab Birthday boy ne cake kataa...toh saare bachche tut pade cake par....mano ki akhri baar iss duniya mein cake bana ho....par tum toh tum ho....peeche khade hokar sabko dekhkar expressions dene lage....aur bura bhi laga jab tumhare liye kisine cake nahi choda....."

Mayank was listening surprised, because Mayank hardly got affected by such things...and he couldn't imagine himself feeling bad over not getting a piece of cake...but had to believe coz his Ma said so...

"par jab Nupur ne dekha toh....usne tumse apna cake share karne ki koshish ki...par tumne woh bhi nahi liya..pata nahi kyun....jutha tha isliye....ya male ego beech mein aa  gaya tha isliye..pata hai uss bechari ko kitna bura laga tha....aur aaj usne tumse notes maange toh 
tumne woh bhi nahi diye...tum Mayank hi ho na...phir itne unfair aur wrong kaise ho sakte ho...Nupur se saath specially???"

Mayank tried explaining that she was getting it all wrong and replied, "Nahi Ma...maine usse notes dene se mana nahi kiya...pooch lena usse...kya maine mana kiya tha?"

Shilpa Sharma replied, "toh....kya notes diye?"

Mayank replied slowly, "nahi..."then defending himself spoke a bit fast and hurriedly, "par woh isliye ki notes dene ki khushi mein woh mujhe treat dena chahti thi..."

Shilpa Sharma asked as if accusing, "ab treat dene mein bhi kuch burai hai kya?"

Mayank replied, "Movie ki treat Ma...woh mujhe apne saath Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jaayenge dekhne ki treat de rahi thi...aur maine jab kaha ki "No Thanks...tum aise hi notes le jaao"....toh woh pata nahi kin sapno ki duniya mein kho kar kuch kehne lagi..."Sarso ke khet...Madellin...Raj-Simran...Switerland"....toh bas maine bhi usse keh diya....ke...ke"

Shilpa Sharma completed his sentence..."Ke..."Kaano mein thusne ke liye rui lekar aana...aur notes lekar jaana"...yahi naa...Nupur ne bataya mujhe...aur isliye notes mujhse maange...hurt kiya na usse...tum sab mein best ho par Nupur theek kehti hai...ke tum Sadu ho...specially uske saath...ab jaana...aur usse notes dekar aana"

Mayank replied, "aap hamesha uski hi side leti ho Ma...main tumhara beta hoon...bhool jaati ho kya?....theek hai...par main koi Movie nahi dekhne jaane wala.."

Shilpa Sharma replied, "Jaane do Mayank...itna sunne ke baad toh woh khud hi tumhare saath Movie nahi dekhne jaayegi...notes de do itna hi kaafi hai...aur haan "Sorry " jaroor bolna...Movie dekhne ke liye uske paas bahut saare friends hain...Gunjan bhi hai....par itna yaad rakhna....ke agli baar se usse hurt mat karna...kabhi bhi....aur Nupur aur Gunjan ki help karni chahiye tumhe, tum unke senior ho...aur School ke best student bhi...as a Bright Student bhi tumhe yeh karna chahiye...hai naa..."

Mayank agreed to what she said and smiled and said, "Okay Ma...aapka yeh Bright Student...aapka Bright Beta hi rahega...main notes dekar aaonga"

and Shilpa Sharma smiled and hugged him feeling proud of the ease with which he understood things...making it difficult for her in the least...
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Mayank too slept soon while thinking about how Nupur had always occupied a part of His brain....by one thing or the other....and now this day felt most unnaturally natural to him...

Sorry for the mistakes,if anyLOL
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