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Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 (Page 60)

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 7:27am | IP Logged
awwwww... i loved the childhood part!..unexpected.and very well written!..keep it up!..Smile

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 9:36am | IP Logged
nice update.
now that Mayur r married.............n m sure love will find its way very soon EmbarrassedWink
update was really very nice...........loved it.
OMG!!! 
"mayank bolta nahi"...............OMG!!!! its really cracked me.
waiting for next part.
update soon.
 thanks a lot for the pmSmile 

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged
ghoshhh pallu such a sweet update yaar.....just loved it <3

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 12:38am | IP Logged
Thank you all for finding them cute as kids and all of your sweet commentsHug

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 12:48am | IP Logged
@all...i know this is a short update...but my next update will be quicker..really quickLOL
                                                                 Part 13:

Two Unique pair of eyes met staring into each other, for the first time so close....Mayank looked into Nupur's eyes and he saw his image back like they were like mirrors and at the same time they were so much filled with spirit as if they carried her every dream with them for constant inspiration, the huge black eyes were wide open looking into his small but sure eyes, which knew what he wanted and she knew this already but she could see  it clearly here too....but his eyes were at the same time deep, as if full of emotions tightly packed under his control and hence the sure eyes, which said he handled everything perfectly without letting emotions interfere....

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Tum bhi ho wahi 
Hum bhi hain wahi
Baat phir yeh kyun ab lagti hai nayi
Kya hua galat aur kya sahi
Dono saath hai ab sach to hai yahi
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It was a small moment Mayank and Nupur stood that way but it was for the first time they looked into each other through eyes and felt a bit odd with the proximity, so they stood up straight in a jiffy with Nupur straightening her hair strands and Mayank looking sideways and then looking at her he suddenly said, "pata nahi tum ladkiyaan itni heavy dresses kyun pehenti ho?"

Nupur's rolled her eyes at his comment and found her mouth open in reaction when she replied, "Maine tumse poocha kya, ki tum ladke khud itne heavy kyun hote ho?"

Mayank replied, "Kya?" 

Nupur replied as if complainig, "Koi jawaab nahi hai naa" moving her hand from left to right in air and continued, "bey matlab mujhse jhagda mat karo..."

Mayank shaked his head thinking to avoid this newly errupted fighting plan in her mind and moved towards the mirror taking off his tie
when Nupur stopped him saying, "Deewar uss taraf hai sar phodne ke liye, ye tezi se sheeshe ki taraf kyun badhte jaa rahe ho?"

Mayank turned to clarify her doubts and replied forcing a smile, "Sar phodne nahi, kapde badalne jaa raha hoon, "Sheeshe" ke peeche library room hai(pressing on the word Sheeshe in her style), tumhi ne banvaya hai naa ye room apne experiment ke liye, ya usme bhi kisi 
aur ki madad li thi, shayad koi film ya trip pe jaana hoga.. nai..."

Nupur got furious, how could he doubt her 1st project which was so special to her, so she replied in anger, "Jee nahi, maine hi banvaya hai chaho toh Aunty se pooch lena!!!....woh main....(looking down) bhool gayi thi....(then suddenly finding her fighting strength back 
increased her voice and spoke)insaan hoon...bhool nahi sakti kya?....kya tum bhoolne par tax lagate ho?"

Mayank replied, "Darro mat, main tumse bhoolne ka badla nahi le raha....theek hai ab agar aapki izajat ho to main chaloon..."

Nupur replied forced a smile and showed him the way towards the mirror wherein Mayank went inside to change his clothes and Nupur again remembering her mastermind work in the house looking at every thing smiled to herself being proud...

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Mayank came out soon changing into track and a t-shirt looking as handsome in the attire as in any other....while Nupur went in to change into her own pair of night suits

Mayank walked towards the bed and saw that Nupur's suitcase was left wide open....probably she wanted to find her night suit, he thought....he hated things improper and messy but he knew she had just come and will probably keep those when she settles down.....settles down....he hoped she was comfortable and did't feel very odd with him here now...he himself felt a bit odd so he thought she would be more of in an awkward position being a girl...he decided to talk to her so that he doesn't make things further awkward for her....

She came out wearing her usual night-suit...satin shirt and pant....and kept her jewellery on the dressing table.....

Mayank was thinking what to say when Nupur suddenly asked him, "Tum bhi kya yahi sone wale ho kya?" she always wanted clear answer to her questions

Mayank was shocked at this question of hers, he thought she was impossible and he replied, "Jee, ye kamra bachpan se mera hai aur usually log apne bedroom mein khud rehte bhi hain" speaking every word very clearly to specify to her his annoyance

Nupur replied in the same tone, "Jaanti hoon, par mera bed kahaan hai...library mein lagwane wale ho kya?...." suddenly smiling to herself..."waise idea achcha hai...mera chota sa bed laga kar usse bedroom banaya jaa sakta hai...hai naa Mayank"

Mayank replied suddenly alerted, "Bilkul nahi,  meri library....library hi rahegi...."

Nupur walked upto the bed and kept a pillow at the centre of the bed and turned towards him to say, "yeh meri side aur woh tumhari...meri side pe aane ki koshish bhi mat karna samjhe" pointing index finger to him with an angry face

Mayank walked upto his side of the bed and replied in her way, "Mere baare mein aise galat faimiyaan naa hi paalo to tumhe aasani hogi... "and lied down on the bed turning to his side while Nupur sat on her side of the bed...

Mayank suddenly sat down to take off his t-shirt to sleep when Nupur gave an extreme reaction to move her face side-ways keeping her hand slightly on her eyes when Mayank saw her reaction and slept again without taking off the t-shirt facing his side...

Nupur slept on her side and faced the ceiling feeling a bit odd but she knew Mayank so much to trust him...she remembered the time when they had last had the very big fight then too Mayank was protective to her but they had had a big fight after it...and from then on they had just fought in tits and bits....but still she felt odd....specially with Mayank being so much into himself....if she had talked, maybe it would have relaxed her but she always found it difficult to directly talk to Mayank...he didn't let many people have that opportunity...

Mayank turned to look if he had made a mistake and if he should shift to the sofa now....and he turned towards Nupur only to find Nupur sleeping already hugging her pillow that she had kept the centre and smiled slightly in her sleep.....Mayank shaked his head thinking....this girl was surely unpredictable....and he faced back to the other side now to get his share of sleep after a very long day which had brought a million changes in his life....

Sorry for the mistakes, if anyLOL
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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 1:10am | IP Logged
waise i dunno if i have been able to capture the emotions right here or not...coz it needs Arti to convey all perfectly...n well i seem to lack thereLOL

tell me if the update is adha adhooraLOL

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 1:44am | IP Logged
beautiful.... wish it was long.   waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 2:01am | IP Logged
ofcourse u cptured the emotions very well yaar................aweome............loved the update yaar.................

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