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Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 (Page 55)

sariska_mnarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Awwww they r finally married

I'm so haPpy

cont soon

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Ritu.V IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
Awsome Update Payal... Part 12 jaldi update kar please...Beautiful story

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annie07 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 11:22pm | IP Logged
Awesome part Payal................andi m waiting for the next update...........make it soon plz

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myownarea IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 1:29am | IP Logged

aahh payal meri...jadooo chalathi hai LOL

i have used this corny line b4.. :) but yeah it suits u well :)

this update.,..MN marriage it was so dream worthy...:)

seriously awesome...ab jaldi update kariyo..aur intezaar nahi hothaa :D

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Payal-15 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 2:43am | IP Logged
Annie, Divz, Sariska, Ritu...Thanks guysHug
will update in sometime.. LOL

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Payal-15 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 3:08am | IP Logged
                                                                              Part 12:

It was the reception of Mayank and Nupur that seemed the brightest spot this day in Mumbai, with glowing faces of all but the Couple Of  The Hour glowed together on the centre stage, seemingly as the most good-looking couple.Nupur in a Pink and Blue Saree of Chaniya 
Choli Type Saree and Mayank in a Black suit and they dazzled together at the stage...

Gunjan had come and specially instructed the camera person to take their exclusive pictures in various poses, which looked like Nupur's department totally since Mayank was just trying to smile rather than force big wide grins at the camera when Nupur retorted, 

"Mayank, shakal surat hi toh tumhe bhagwaan ne achchi di hai, kamse kam meri Wedding pictures toh mat bigado..."

Mayank looked at her amazed thinking was she complimenting him or making fun of him....he replied, "Kya?"

Nupur replied quickly, "aur nahi toh kya, camera mein mera chehra nazar nahi aayega, camera ki taraf dekh kar toh muskura sakte ho naa...mujhe achchi photos chahiye.....kyunki tumhara toh pata nahi par main ab bhi ek hi shaadi mein believe karti hoon..."

Mayank wondered how she got back to herself so easily with so much happening around them and with them, but in between he couldn't resist replying, "ek hi shaadi...agar tum issi tarah bolti rahi naa toh mujhe lagta hai ki main issi shaadi mein sanyaas le loonga..."

Nupur burst out laughing saying, "Sanyaas?....phir toh tum aur bhi shaant ho jaaoge....pahaadon ke beech mein ek aur jeeta jaagta shaant sa pahaad....unko tumse koi faayda nahi hoga"moving her hand left to right and laughed at her own joke loudly....Mayank smiled 

in dis-believe at her thoughts and was about to say something when she continued..."par sirf meri baatein katna nahi chodoge...thodasa smile kardoge toh tumhare lifetime ki smile ka stock khatam nahi ho jaayega....aur tumhara toh kabhi out of stock hoga bhi nahi ByGod..."

Mayank replied back a bit irritated,"agar tumhari, mere smile ki accounting khatam ho gayi ho toh please kya tum APNI smiling par concerntrate karna chahogi...main khud hass loonga without tumhari expertise ke...Okay....Thanks"

and Nupur in a bit anger now continued her poses towards the camera trying her best to smile, while Mayank looked at her anger and tried giving bigger smiles towards camera now while the guests started to greet them now and Nupur was soon out of her anger smiling her way to all while she knew most of his relatives....some even those whom he didn' recognise but she did and was at her best behaviour with them while Mayank smiled with her to everyone.....
Gunjan came to the newly married coulple with a glass of orange juice and two straws in it....Mayank and Nupur looked at each other remembering the party incident and then at Gunjan when Mayank spoke, "Tum kya hamein chidhaane aayi ho Gunjan?"

Gunjan replied defending herself, "Chidhane?....nahi Jeeju main toh aap logon ko best wishes dene aayi hoon"

Mayank and Nupur looked at her with a questioned face when she clarified, "Di, Jeeju...tum dono please iss orange juice ki tarah life share karna...."

when Mayank-Nupur questioned in unison, "Kya?" and looked at each other

Gunjan chukled and continued, "mera matlab hai ki iski tarah caring, fresh, healthy, kabhi sour, kabhi sweet..par sabse best..."

Nupur suddenly got up and hugged Gunjan when Mayank looked at both of them now....Nupur hit Gunjan on her forehead with her hand lightly and said, "aajkal dieting pe kitaab padh rahi hai kya? Orange juice kaise faayda karta hai" and looked at her smiling with tears in her eyes...even this illogical remark of her conveyed exactly what Gunjan meant to say to her...Gunjan too had tears in her eyes but was not able to reply anything now...she felt very sad with the fact that Nupur will be leaving the house now and she knew she will miss her the most...afterall Nupur was her best friend...

Mayank was looking at the two and smiled at Gunjan's way of wishing them he felt like he missed the sibling he never had...

Later Gunjan insisted on them atleast having a sip together from the juice from the parallel straw and they finally had to do it a bit oddly...their eyes met for a quick fraction of a second and Gunjan smiled at them sharing the juice now for which she had seen them fight for earlier...
Nupur had been observing the room closely she was in now...looking at every corner of Mayank's room. This room had been designed by Nupur as a practice soon after she completed her Interior designing course about a year ago. Mayank was in US at that moment for doing his MBA while Nupur got the permission to use His room as her first practice project in which she had put her heart and soul in doing her first ever dream work. She was too excited and tried to make it as Simply Realistic and Beautiful as possible. Now when she was looking at the room closely, she praised herself mentally for her work. And knowing that it was her room now gave her creeps a bit, since she had to share room with him now, but she trusted him very much and even she didn't knew where this trust came from exactly, or probably she did..... always trusted him for the amount she knew him, but she didn't know rather almost everything about him.


Mayank entered the room too... pushed or rather driven by the silly friends of Nupur,he thought. They left teasing them soon at Mayank's glare which meant, it was best to leave Mayank Sharma on his own.

He was moving towards the dressing table in order to remove his Tie and coat when suddenly Nupur tripped in her way while observing the room some more since her Lehenga got stuck at the corner of the bed, as a pearly loop from her Aanchal got stuck at the bed somehow...not a new phenomenon for Nupur though but something new happened tonite along with many other new happenings in her life...she didn't have to find her balance since she was balanced in mid-air by Mayank....holding her and preventing her from falling...two Unique pair of eyes met staring into each other, for the first time so close....
Two Unique pair of eyes met for the first time, one belonging to a boy of 4 year old, such an adorable kid he was with a special sensible expression on his face, quite odd for his age....and the other pair of eyes belonged to a small girl of merely 3 year old but had huge eyes  that were so innocent with a different sparkling in them...a sparkling that denoted excitement for life and were as happy as a child could get as if the luckiest child in the world....

"dekho beta, ye hai Mayank" Shashi Bhushan looked at Nupur standing on the ground holding her Bauji's hand and was looking at the newly introduced but familiar name's owner...she called out "Mank"

Nupur's Bauji giggled but stopped looking at Mayank's reaction who saw his name being the clay of the situation, when Bauji corrected Nupur, "Ma-yann-k-a" followed by Nupur, "Ma-yannnnn-kkkkk" relief to Mayank when he came a bit out of his anger and Bauji said, "right, good " and then continued, "Nupur Handshake karo, Mayank tumhara naya friend banega naa..."

Nupur smiled and nodded in a yes and placed her hands forward for Mayank to hold it, she liked Mayank, besides she had heard a lot from his Bauji about Mayank, Mayank looked a smart kid wearing a grey coloured jacket and pants on a white coloured shirt with an attitude of being somone ..but not a show-off, it came natural and she loved making friends and talking to people excited her, so she very excitedly smiled at him waiting for him to shake hands with her...

Mayank saw Nupur, she wore a pink coloured frock and a matching pink colored decorative hairband on her head, Mayank and his young little friends had discussed not to do friendship with girls, he remembered his Friend Samrat's words, "Girls wear cho bad bad pink, 
purple coloured cloth..and are less smart than boys." but he didn't find it looking bad on Nupur though, he didn't want to shake hands, incase someone saw what will he say, but he was a good boy, how can Mayank Sharma not behave...he was the most obedient boy his teacher had told making his parents and himself proud...besides Nupur was being so nice with him, he wondered why girls were bad as per all his friends...

Bauji said, "Mayank beta, Handshake karo... Nupur se" smilingly looking at Nupur and Mayank turn by turn

Mayank ultimately put his hands forward to shake hands when he heard his best friend Samrat's voice who called him out "Mayank!!!!!!!"

Mayank didn't want to go wrong in either case, he shaked Nupur's hand in a hurry, gave a hurried smile to Shashi Bhushan and went towards the door to meet Samrat before he comes in

While moving out he looked back at Nupur seeing if he handled the situation correct and didn't hurt her, and seeing her smile he proudly smiled to himself and to her too and went ahead to his friend out of the room

Nupur looked at Bauji as if asking question why did Mayank not talk to her asking, "Ma-yannnnn-kkkkk, bolta nahi "

Bauji replied shocked at her statement and then laughed, "aise nahi bolte beta, woh bol sakta hai" and then smiled at Nupur's still questioned face..."mujhse hi nahi bolta?" asked Nupur without any hesitation since she wanted to know it 

Bauji replied smiling "nahi Beta, aapse bhi bolega par abhi usse apne friend ne bulaya naa toh chala gaya, Mayank bahut achcha bachcha hai, bilkul meri cute si Nupur jaisa, samjhi" he said patting her cheeks and making her smile for herself and for what she heard for him and she looked towrds the door smiling when her Bauji picked her up to take her ahead to be introduced to Sameer and Shilpa Sharma

Sorry for the mistakes, if anyLOL

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Silent.Dreamer IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 3:19am | IP Logged

Awesome part payal...

wow, mayank and nupur are married now...

well i knw these two oppsites attract very soon..

loved it...

thnx for the pm...

Edited by -moona- - 09 February 2011 at 3:28am

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dynamic_doll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 3:44am | IP Logged
sweet update Payal!
i loved it
waiting eagerly for the next part
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm Smile

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