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Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 (Page 50)

Payal-15 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
@all.....Here's a very quick update this timeLOL

                                                                         Part 11:

It was the night before their marriage when both of them seemed worried for the coming day, in their respective houses, and sleep was no where to be seen in the eyes. 
Mayank was worried more for Nupur's sake than his own. All these days that had passed in between, he was not able to get a clear idea of her wishes which were always dear to her dreams...he wondered why she had gone out of the way to accept every ritual gladly if she 
had only agreed for the marriage on Bhushan Uncle's insistence...what if she looses all her happy attitude towards life and he makes her sad later not being able to love her and treat her as she would expect from him....not mixing up was a different thing but he didn't want her to loose herself because of him, never..he didn't knew what exactly all this meant to him since he had never given much thought to it and even when he thought of it, he didn't have the exact idea of what he actually wanted..he wondered if he had made the wrong decision.....his mind kept wandering while sleep found a way to him finally...
Nupur was too feeling like her dreams were a bit distorted now to have a sound sleep today....she didn't exactly knew what her dreams were and what they were now supposed to be...she had been wondering how Mayank was less of rude towards her these days and tried his best to do whatever others said...this was becoming increaingly difficult for her to comprehend...maybe, it may turn out to be less difficult to live now she thought...the only thing she was sure of was that she would be treated like a Princess in Sharma House with Sameer and Shilpa Sharma always taking her side she knew, and she was very happy to have got her In-Laws in them...but Mayank was always a puzzle to her...not wanting people-to-let-in in his circle that he had around him....keeping away from the world, but having  a world of his own in the right sense that it was supposed to be...she wondered if she will ever get to know him...and a fear was coming back to her mind again and again...that she might just have chosen a life which was left unembedded of love that she always wanted, when she had hurriedly made the decision with all jumbled thoughts of hers....but she kept neglecting that thought to keep the Nupur Bhushan's specific smiling life alive....soon thinking about the brightest day of her life tomorrow, she drifted to sleep
Marriage day had finally arrived with a well lit  and beautifully decorated Mandap and the Marriage Hall. All the decorations were done with the colours Red(Nupur's favourite colour) in combination with White(Co-incidently Mayank's favourite Colour...well less of a co-incidence and more of an insistence, afterall it was Mayank's marriage too) which went only too well with each other along with golden coloured chandelier kind of Chinese Round Lanterns which hung all around the huge hall full of people. It was a very pleasnt sight to watch the union of 2 special people being celebrated with so much hustle bustle, and with happy faces greeting the Groom on a White Horse for which Mayank had to agree since Sameer Sharma dictated to him, "Mayank, you have to do this.." and Mayank didn't usually spoke against his dad.

Nupur saw Mayank coming on a White Horse wearing a White Sherwani with the suitable-for-Sherwani Red coloured dupatta. He looked like a Prince carrying himself with poise on the horse, looking extremely Charming...this sight seemed like a dream making an entry into of the aunties told Nupur from behind, "Nupur beta, loji aapka Prince toh bada Charming lag raha hai..." Nupur had to smile to her but she couldn't deny the fact that this actually looked similar to her dreams, she wondered how this could be, since this was 
different... when Gunjan looked at Nupur and said smiling, "itni Shiddat se tumne isse paane ki khwahish ki hai, ki har zarre ne tumhe isse milane ki saazish ki hai" with a twinkling in her eyes...

Nupur didn't smile to Gunjan but hurriedly went inside to her room and sat on the bed while everyone else stayed back at the terrace except for Gunjan who followed Nupur into her room....

Nupur sat on her bed feeling 100 thoughts going inside her mind which made her unstable at the moment when Gunjan came and sat beside her, "Di kya hua?"

Nupur replied smiling, "Kuch nahi hua, bas yuhi"

Gunjan understood what Nupur must be feeling like, so she said assuringly with an idea, "Di, tumhara style use karte hai....apni aankhen band karo aur apne heart pe haath rakho..."

Nupur objected, "Gunjan yeh mera nahi, filmo ka style hai...aur abhi tu yeh sab.."

Gunjan made a face saying, "Please Di karo naa..apni aankhen band karo aur apne heart pe haath rakho...aur socho ki tumhe kuch galat lag raha hai kya....dil pe haath rakhogi toh apne aap se jhoot nahi bol paaogi aur tumhara yeh expressionful chehra sab sach bata dega.."she repeated what Nupur used to say to her always...she had formed a habit of using Nupur's dialogues and views to make her life easy, and she was glad that she could use it for Nupur herself. She held regards for her as that for a mother and so she never found herself laid back ever whenever anything bothered Nupur or to go out of the way to take care of her when she forgot to take care of herself.

Nupur did as she was told to and realized that her heart was in sync with her mind and she said, "kuch galat nahi hai" while Gunjan smiled and hugged Nupur saying, "i'll miss you Di" with tears that was followed with a smile

Nupur said, "Me too, par main hamesha aas paas hi rahoongi, mujhe kaunsa door daraj kisi gumnaam basti mein jaana hai" with a tears in her eyes too but smiling at Gunjan

Gunjan smiling pulled out of hug and hurried her off downstairs where Mayank awaited her arrival 
Nupur came down the aisle walking slowly trying to believe it was her marriage, everything as per her wish, the only and the biggest thing missing was that HE didn't love her...Nupur chucked that thought looking at Bauji, Gunjan and all the familiar faces that 
were brightly smiling at her with good wishes for her future and amazement in eyes and words about how stunningly gorgeous she looked in her Red Wedding Lehenga with Green and Golden border work...and once she started smiling back at people...she surely made people wonder if she was the most beautiful bride they had ever seen, even Mayank couldn't deny the fact that she looked gorgeous...he was mesmerized by the sight in front of him and he concluded that she definitly was extremely beautiful..he already knew she looked good but today she  made him admit it to himself..well he believed in calling a spade, a spade...

Nupur came and sat beside Mayank for the marriage proceedings to move further with Panditji starting up with his infinite mantras to seal their fate and themselves in the bond of matrimony....

It was the time for Kanyadaan, when Nupur's Bauji came forward and held Nupur's hand in his hand smiling at her....Mayank saw tears in both their eyes, then Bauji looked at Mayank and smilingly gave Nupur's hands in Mayank, Mayank smiled back at him and held Nupur's 
hands while the Mantras continued....his smile told Mayank about the responsibility he was about to take in his encompassed everything around Nupur's life.....he now looked at Nupur who had an odd expression on her if something was irritating her...he 
wondered if she had the capacity to start with her various Nautanki even in this place when he looked in the way she was looking was her hand in his...firstly he wondered if she was irritated by his hands holding her's....but then realizing that it was the ornament she was wearing on the back-side of her hand which now  rested in between Nupur's and Mayank's hands...was pricking her skin...he slowly moved his hands in between her hand and the ornament so that it stopped pressing up against her skin and he saw her expression back 
to normal....

Nupur was extemely surprised by his actions for her, was he the same Mayank she knew...she was relieved with the ornament now and thanked Mayank by smiling at him and thought to herself,  if he continues with this changed act of his now then it will surely make her wonder if he actually was Mayank Sharma sitting beside her or not....
The Saat Pheraas were executed beautifully with Panditji explaining the meaning to them for each one of them and Nupur wondered how they held the meaning which she had kept close to her heart for her after marriage life...with Mayank performing all the acts of marriage very smoothly as he was asked to with the utmost sincerity he could...
Rest of the ceremony was done with finally when Panditji finally declared them as Husband and Wife
They started with taking the blessing from their elders.....and after that everyone went over to change for the Reception of their marriage ahead...

Sorry for the mistakes, if anyLOL

Edited by Payal-15 - 04 February 2011 at 9:10pm

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Payal-15 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
and i so miss MN now...their marriage...and the soft music at the back at the time of their marriageDay Dreaming

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stuti123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
OMG  payal the update was awesome soo finally mayur got married.............
nd the siggy u have made its amazing ..loved it lots.........
nd i am the first one to comment today yipee.....

Edited by stuti123 - 04 February 2011 at 9:45pm

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Faria. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
Awwwwwwwwwwww Payallllllll

thanx a lot for ur quick update

Haye- my mayur got married
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee- partyyyyyyyyyyyyy time

superb update dear
loved it a lottttttttttttt

and ur siggy- wow its  very nice.....

me too miss arti/mayur
wanna c them badly

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-NightDreamer- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 11:03pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update...finally mayur gt married....waiting 4 ur next update....

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dynamic_doll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 11:08pm | IP Logged
superb update Payal!
loved it to the core
it was very well written
mayu is soo caring Embarrassed
finally mayur married Big smile
eagerly waiting for the next part
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm Smile

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--jiya-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
superb update payal...Clap
loved Mayank when he held Nupur's hand beneath the ornamentDay Dreaming
thnx for de pmSmile

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Silent.Dreamer IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Beautiful Update Payal...
loved ur each and every description..
Now they are husband wife..amazing turn in their life..

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