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Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 (Page 20)

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ishita16

Sorry for the late reply. I just started reading ur ff.
 
Part 1
It was lovely! I loved how u showed Mayank and Nupur back and forth...clearly evident how different they are. It reminded me of the beginning of MJHT. I like how tight Nupur's family is and the bond b/w Mayank and Shilpa Aunty.
 
 
I have read the rest of the parts but will comment on them tomorrow/wed. (I'm trying to work on my own ff)
Thanks for ur comment Ishita............m glad u liked itHug

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ginny09

srry for the late reply but 
thrly enjoyed the 2 part :)
.its okayLOL
Thanks for the reply Ginny............Hug
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Part 2

Loved the Mayur scene!! It reminded me of the good old times in MJHT.
 
I liked how Mayank was admiring the sisters' bond.
 
While Mayank smiled at Nupur and Gunjan leaving he was completely unaware of the fact that this smile would cost him a lot more than a few seconds of muscles stretch...a lot more.
 
- Loved this line...LOL
 

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Thanks Ishita for ur lovely commentsBig smile

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Part 5:


"Nupur, did she just say Nupur",Mayank thought sitting there on the dining table looking amazed at the place where his Mother was standing some time ago and then at his Dad who seemed to be glancing again n again at him to figure out his expressions. Mayank kept thinking while having breakfast and finishing it went back to his room, standing at the balcony which was attached to the room as a separate section with full sized window separated by a door, looking outside in nothingness just thinking..... Why did his Mom choose Nupur all of a sudden and seemed so serious?.... She knew perfectly well how they behaved with each other.....then why?.........Then Mayank told himself  "Mayank tu kuch jyaada hi soch raha hai, Ma loves you obviusly, she is no hitler to think ill of me, phir pata nahi kyun Ma ne Nupur ko choose kiya... ki hum lifetime jhagadte hi rahein aur ek pal bhi chain ki saans naa lein". He ket wondering all though thinking about his past and everything he could recollect of, about his relation with Nupur which by no means qualified to be called a relation at all and then his relation with his Mom and her understanding of his Mind and thinking... which surprised him totally since she always knew the best for him and somethimes even what he hadn't thought for himself.He thought about her decision now, as his mother never forced him as such for anything and just let him be and was always proud of him but just made attempts, several of them to bring about certain changes in him, still, attempts for his betterment. Thinking about his mom and believing in her immensely .......after sometime he reached a conclusion, "Mayank tujhe Ma se baat karni hi hogi, maybe yeh Ma ka tarika hai tujhe ultimatum dene ka ki main iss direction mein bhi sochna shuru karu, jo ki maine aaj tak nahi kiya" now he smiled at the seriousness he was thinking with sometime ago and thought, "correct yahi baat hai, warna sirf saat din, no, Ma aisa kar hi nahi sakti, mujhe Maa se baat karni hogi jaldi hi yeh kya tareeka hua, par koi tension ki baat nahi hai, Chill dude, Sunday hai thodi shanti bhi zaroori hai....Maa se baat kar loonga kal ya parso abhi ke liye ye bhayanak, darawne thoughts kaafi the".....and he felt  peaceful in the mind.
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It was almost evening Nupur had wiped all the traces of tears with the upset mood and Nupur was now back to herself totally. Having heard from Gunjan that Bauji just wanted her to think about it and the last decision will be hers, she was all fine now. She knew what her decision was. Bauji liked Mayank way too much she thought but she couldn't give right focus to what Bauji said apart from last words he said,that she had 7 days to think about it. She knew if she thought about Mayank for 7 days then she'll surely go crazy without a doubt. So she just had to drop that particular some-not-so-bright idea of Bauji. So here she was busy watching a movie.
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Shilpa Sharma recollected the conversation she had with Sameer Sharma with Shashi Bhushan at the party. They were all standing there discussing about random things after a few work related talks were over when Mayank felt a bit bored with the talks which didn't interest him at all, so he went away excusing himself for getting himself some Orange juice. As he went away Shilpa Sharma looked at him leaving and suddenly stated to Sameer Sharma, "Main iska kya karoon" moving her head in Mayank's direction while he was walking away,"yeh toh sirf kaam se kaam rakhta hai har cheez mein, matlab humse nahi"she added at Sameer Sharma's glare then continued,"par baaki cheezon mein, mera matlab hai duniya dari se toh jaise iska koi lena dena hi nahi hai, idhar udhar ki baaton mein toh koi interest hi nahi leta par abhi toh main 1 month se iski lambi list se pareshaan hoon" frowning a little .

Sameer Sharma replied back, "tumhi ne toh isse itne saare sawaal kiye the kaisa nature hona chahiye, looks and all, ab bughto, maine toh pehle hi kaha tha ki jab arranged marriage hi karni hai toh itne sawaal puchne ki kya zaroorat hai, apne tareeke se hum uske liye best hi choose karenge naa, humara hi toh beta hai, sabse best, uske liye Best hum dhoond sakte the aasani se aur main kehta toh woh mana bhi nahi karta, usse bharosa hai mujhpe" saying with a proud face

Shashi Bhushan was smiling looking at them talking like this, he knew his friend was right but Shilpa Sharma was right too. After all, Mayank had every right to it.

Shilpa Sharma replied back explaining, "Lekin maine toh sahi tareeke se hi handle karne ka socha situation ko, kyunki yeh hamari respnsibility hi nahi balki ek bahut important decision hai, main Mayank ko duniya se jodna chahti hoon taaki woh aur khulke jeeye apne age ke logon ke saath, Machine ke saath nahi" looking at Sameer Bhushan with a complining look on her face as if he had made Mayank too busy to relax eversince he joined office. She continued saying looking at Mayank some distance away having a tough time dealing with Nupur, "main chahti hoon ki uski life complete ho jaaye, waise toh woh perfectly rehta hai, par aisa lagta hai uska khudka koi part incomplete ho....kuch feelings undeveloped ho...." then looking at a sight nearby seeing Mayank smiling sweetly at Nupur and Gunjan walking away, an idea struck her mind and she looked at Sameer Sharma with a bright smile with 1 question in her mind she turned to look at Shashi Bhushan
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Nupur was excitedly watching the movie when Gunjan came looking for Nupur's mood and smiled with surprise since nothing can beat the positivity she had for her life and to get back to the smile and excitement that she always carries proudly. She joined her in watching the movie while she kept ignoring the question which now made her very curious to ignore though she tried.

Gunjan turned to Nupur and asked,"Di, main apne liye Badaam Milk lene jaa rahi hoon, tum logi?"

Nupur turned her attention from the movie to Gunjan and replied, "Ofcourse, tune toh mere muh ki baat cheen li.....aur haan plz usme thodi si nuts ki garnishing karna mat bhoolna haan" and continued watching the movie

Gunjan looked at her still wondering not able to take it further, while Nupur sensed Gunjan still standing there with a worried expression on her face, so she asked, "Kya hua?"

Gunjan blurted out,"Di, toh kya tum ready ho, tumhare aur Mayank ke....."

Nupur looked at her surprised as she was still thinking about that and cut in her to say, "tu theek toh hai na?" laughing a bit

Gunjan didn't understand what she should conclude her reaction into

Nupur sensed her reaction and replied smiling, "Gunjan tu chinta mat kar, maine decide kar liya hai....." and ther smile told Gunjan what 

her decision was so she asked with curiosity, "par reason, Bauji ko kya reason dogi?"

Nupur replied continuing her smile, "Reason.............kuch na kuch de dungi.......bahrosa rakh Gunjan ki teri Di wahi karti hai jo woh decide karti hai" and looking at her more closely she added, "aur haan ab tu soch soch kar apna chehra Alice jaisa mat bana lena....."

Gunjan asked surprised, "Alice.........kaun Alice???"

Nupur replied back with a smile, "Alice in Wonderland wali Alice, aur kaun" and laughed out loudly and added, "ab muskura de naa..."

Gunjan smiled at Nupur's remark and said, "Di, you are impossible" shaking her head

Nupur smiled at Gunjan's worries finally fading away and ordered, "achcha ab mera Badam Milk mujhe kab milega?.....movie ka climax bhi aa gaya" complaining

Gunjan said, "laati hoon Di, warna tumhara climax pheeka reh jaayega naa...." and went from there to get Nupur and her the milkshake while Nupur continued with the movie

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Shilpa Bhushan turned to look at Shashi Bhushan and said without taking any time asked, "Bhushanji, aapko Mayank aur Nupur ke Marriage ka idea kaisa lagta hai?"

Shashi Bhushan gave shocked expression as much as Sameer Sharma was shocked and replied hesitantly, "Shilpaji, yeh idea? ......waise toh Mayank is very dear to me and nupur is my own daughter............i'll be the happist person if it could work out par aap toh jaanti hain naa ki kitna mushkil hai yeh sochne mein..."

Sameer Sharma replied suddenly , "Woh kabhi nahi maanenge!!!.......waise tum bhi pata nahi kya kya sochti rehti ho.......aise puchogi toh Mayank Shadi se hamesha hamesha ke liye inkaar kar dega.....apni pareshaaniyaan khud hi badhane ke baare mein soch rahi ho aur baaki sabki bhi" he replied coming straight to the point

Shilpa Sharma tried to speak convincingly to both their questions, "Main kuch soch kar hi keh rahi hoon they both are my favourites aur unki behtari se jyaada mujhe aur kuch nahi chaahiye.....i mean Nupur ek akeli aisi ladki hai jis pe Mayank naa chate hue bhi  hamesha react karta hai ...anger, irritation jyaada hote hai par kabhi kabhi smile bhi aur concern bhi.... jo woh jyaada realize nahi karta....aur main Nupur ko bhi achche se jaanti hoon...uske dreams jo hain......Mayank ko jaante hue mujhe lagta hai ki usse jyaada care Nupur ki aur koi nahi kar paayega....i know hoon sochne mein thoda mushkil hai par unhe samajhti bhi hoon isiliye keh rahi hoon...."

Sameer Sharma thought for a minute and said, "ho sakta hai.....par unki manjoori bhi toh zaroori hai....aakhir unhe toh life bitani hai saath mein..."

Shashi Bhushan nodded in agreement to Sameer and added, "Agar woh maan jaate hai toh mujhe koi problem nahi hai...mujhe Nupur ke liye koi tension bhi nahi hogi agar woh Sharma family ka hissa banegi toh..."smiling

Shilpa Sharma replied smiling, "Main sure hoon iss baare mein aur ab excited bhi....Sharmaji aap Nupur se baat kijiyega aur main 

Mayank se...Nupur aur Mayank saath saath sunke hi mera mann tript ho gaya..."

Next Day:
Shilpa Sharma needed one person's confirmation more before going further so she asked her panditji next day and after hearing that 

they would be the right pair of people to go for making a Marriage sound PERFECT according to Panditji's analysis of their kundalis and 

also that there was a Muhuoorat for their engagement after 7 immediate days she confirmed with Shashi Bhushan about the decision to 

be taken within 7 days which she decided to make work somehow. She was loving the thought that Mayank and Nupur together in her 

world..... would make her world seem perfect and were worthy enough for each other too and she anxiously waited to tell Mayank.

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Edited by Payal-15 - 12 January 2011 at 8:09pm

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 5:46am | IP Logged
wow!
the story is goin amazing payal.......
sorry m not able to comment much since last 3 parts............
but me loving ur ff.......cherishin mayur.......seriously!
cont soon haan!Embarrassed

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 5:47am | IP Logged
lovely payal!...badaam milkshake..wow!..i hate it!..LOL..but the story is moving at a perfect pace..the thoughts and fear are justified..just waiting for thier marriage..jaldi kar naa!..


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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 5:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nikita-Sharma

wow!
the story is goin amazing payal.......
sorry m not able to comment much since last 3 parts............
but me loving ur ff.......cherishin mayur.......seriously!
cont soon haan!Embarrassed
Nikita thanks yaar........u read it even before i updated it properlyLOL
but thanks for the sweet commentsHug

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