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Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 (Page 134)

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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 1:50pm | IP Logged

i am jst loving the way the story is going...

the dream which nupur saw that was beautiful...

and all the songs which u used were awesome

continue soon 

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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
Payal, the story is going amazing ... I am loving how you are showing the slow developments in their relationship - the lovely development of feelings and the desire to be together yet not understanding the feelings or not trying to understand them ...

You are bringing it all out just perfectly ... 

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Posted: 25 April 2011 at 12:25am | IP Logged
lovely updt payal
thanks for the pm

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payal-jee... aaj toh monday hai... update milega kya??Big smile

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will update in some time Jiya... LOL

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really??Big smile
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                                                                            Part 31:

Gunjan help her ears even over the phone and said, "Sorry...achcha..sachi baat batati hoon..."

Shilpa Sharma waited eagerly,  for Gunjan was finally deciding to stop bringing about the bush...

Gunjan repled, "Aunty...ek baat poochun...sachi bataayengi..."

Shilpa Sharma said impatiently, "Gunjan...haan baba ..ab aur mat ghumao baat ko and come to the point Beta..."

Gunjan asked finally, "Kya jeeju mein kuch change aaya hai...aajkal...Di ke wahaan aane se...ya phir specifically abhi abhi...jabse Di yahaan wapas aayi hai..."

Shilpa replied smiling, "Yeh toh tumne mere mann ka topic  ched diya Gunjan Beta...main bhi kabse notice kar rahi hoon..."

Gunjan asked with anxiety now, "Kya..kya change Aunty...jaldi batayiye naa..."


Shilpa Sharma chuckled at her reaction, "batati hoon...batati hoon...jyada kuch nahi...bas aise lagta hai aajkal jaise uski life mein bas Nupur ki hi kami thi...ab complete lagti hai uski life...aisa lagta hai Nupur hi uski soulmate thi...actually mujhe kuch karna hi nahi pada...bas Shadi karwa di...aur sab apne aap hone laga...Mayank ka khud ke aas paas banaya circle Nupur ne kab tod diya, yeh toh shayad dono ko nahi maloom...ab toh yeh haal hai ki main iss developing love story ko dekhne ke liye excited hoon aur mera beta hai ki ab bhi Sadu bana baitha hai..ya toh kuch samajhta nahi...nahi am sure kuch samajhna chahta hi nahi" she said a bit dis-appointed and continued, "waise Mayank...Nupur ko miss kar raha hai yeh toh dekh hi rahi hoon aajkal...par Nupur ka kya haal hai?"

Gunjan replied in the same dis-appointed tone as her, though she was flying high in her mind for what she had just heard about Mayank, "Di...Di ka bhi wahi haal hai...jeeju ko miss toh karti hai...rather har baat mein unhe le aati hai toh shayad miss karne ka mauka nahi milta...par jeeju ke saath rehte rehte...woh bhi pakki Mrs.Sadu ban gayi hai ByGod" she pressed on the word ByGod in Nupur's style and laughed and spoke again, "Di...hamesha se jeeju se dosti karna chahti thi...unhe jaanna chahti thi yeh toh main jaanti hoon...par unhe mauka hi nahi milta tha, toh saara gussa jeeju ko ulta jawaab dekar nikalti thi...par ab bhi lagta hai yeh dono puraani circumstances ko change hi nahi karna chahte...ab kya karein?"

Shilpa Sharma replied smiling, "Hamein kya karna hai...karenge toh yehi dono...apna pyaar realize...dheere dheere...bas main tab tak budhi na ho  jaaon"and laughed while continuing, "khair ba kahaan jaayenge...ab toh shaadi ho chuki hai...aur main jaanti hoon pyaar inhe bless jaroor karega...Mayank ka behaviour khul raha hai...dil ka raasta bhi khul jaayega...aurwoh Nupur ka bhi raasta kholega...ya phir Nupur uska...par main yeh hote hue saaf dekh sakti hoon...warna itne dino mein inka ek bhi bada jhagda nahi hua...dono ek doosre se life, baatein, time, smiles sab share karne lage hain..itne jaldi maine Mayank ko badalte nahi dekha pehle...aur itna excited maine Nupur ko nahi dekha kissise compromise aur dosti karte, jitna Mayank se...aur Mayank toh Nupur ki kai baatein bhi maanne laga hai..."

Gunjan replied with a wide smile, "Great...phir mujhe Di ka sapna poora hote dekh sabse achcha lagega...ofcourse, unn dono se kam" and she laughed completing this...

Shilpa Sharma smilingly said, "Haan woh toh hai...aur mera bhi sapna poora ho jaayega..."

Gunjan replied cheerfully, "Aunty aapko pata hai...aap best ho..."

Shilpa replied proudly, "Bilkul...almost budhi ho gayi hoon jeete jeete...aur itni lambi life jeene mein bahut mehnat ki hai...Best toh banna hi tha naa..."

Gunjan chukled at her remark and said, "achcha Aunty...ab main phone rakhti hoon...kuch college ka kaam hai...par aap mujhe iss love story ke live updates deti rehna.."

Shilpa Sharma laughed and said, "Okay beta..jaroor doongi..aur phone karti reha karo...achcha lagta hai tumse baat karka...Bye take care"

Gunjan laughed and replied, "Jee Aunty, Bye take care"
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It was already evening, Mayank kept stealing glances at his cell phone, which threatened to message him of Nupur's another day's stay at her home...he felt like calling her and asking and then thought against it, since he didn't knew what would he say...it was Nupur who always started their conversations and he thought it was very important fo him to give her a proper explaination then for the reason he had called ...what would he say and what would she think of him...she surely must not be expecting his call...
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Nupur was at work, wonding it up and happily thinking of leaving back to Sharma Mansion when she started blabbering to herself, "Sadu kahin ka...yeh nahi hua ki ek baar phone par hi baat kar le...uski bhasha mein kahoon toh main Out of sight...toh...Out of mind ho gayi hoon..waise uske mind mein toh shaanti hogi mere jaane se...poore 2 din ki...ek main hi pagal hoon ki usse seriously leti hoon...aur woh hai ki duniya ka sabse serious insaan ha kar bhi mujhe seriously nahi leta...aur Gunjan ne socha ki woh mujhse pyaa..."she stopped mid-way of her own thoughts going out loud and managed to tell herself, "Nupur..kitni baar tujhe samjhana hoga...Gunjan pagal hai...uski baaton ko seriously mat le..." she smiled at the onlooker who was her colleague and left office in a fresh mood...
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Mayank came home...he didn't find Nupur anywhere in the living room, he felt less hopeful now...he went to his room to freshen up and when he entered, he saw a new large size picture of them hung on the wall...it was of the time of reception..Nupur laughing keeping her hand aroung her face trying to stop her laughter while Mayank facing her side and looking at her laughing with some curiosity and confusion but still amused...and he had to admit to  himself that it was a really cute picture of theirs..specially of Nupur, he thought...

He came back to his senses and looked around the room to see if Nupur was there, for it had to be her who would have hung this picture afresh...

He turned around and saw Nupur coming from the doorway smiling to him, looking more beautiful than ever to him...
she still wore Chuda(bangles) of their marriage, filling her half of the hand and was wearing a black chudidaar with red border...she had kept her hair open which was bordered in the middle by her red sindoor...it was strange Mayank was noticing everything about her today in a fraction of seconds...
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Nupur came to her room and saw Mayank looking at their picture on the wall...Nupur automatically smiled noticing his notice of the picture..he turned around to look at her with a smile that was trying to come out of its cocoon and was slowly deepening his dimples...he was wearing a grey coloured pain shirt with white thin stripes and black pants...and he looked as handsome as ever...she saw...
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Nupur came and hugged him which was the simplest guesture for her to show him, that she missed him...it felt so good to be back to him and a relief to be here standing with him...
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Mayank was more than happy suddenly when she hugged him...as if life was flashing lights of happiness at him, and merry colourful lights at that...after what seemed like ages to him, he had met her again...
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She found him hugging her back...his strong hands, she felt, on her were very gently placed but it still made her heart go on a hopping spree and she hid her eyes from the place where her feelings were sealed into thoughts and words...

Mayank saw his brain stamping its foot like a devil with a raised eyebrow which asked him the reason for his this behaviour suddenly and his heart was running at high speed raising hands to give answer to his brain...

Both thought, their heart beats were causing a threat to their sane behaviour and they pulled out from the hug and looked at each other smiling as if nothing had changed...in the meantime ignoring other's same behaviour too...
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Iss pal main hoon
Ya tum bhi ho
Ya dono hoke bhi naa hain
Kyun ho kya ho
Ho bhi ki na ho
Ya kehna sunna mana hai
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*edited*

me firstBig smile
and wow!!Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

that was so cute... 
mayank was missing nupur,Embarrassed 
his cell threatened to give the news of her stay being extendedLOL
and Nupur's monologue in officeLOL

and the hugDay DreamingEmbarrassedDay Dreaming

Heart it Payal
Hug

~jiya~


Edited by jiya_angel - 25 April 2011 at 5:50am

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