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Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 (Page 130)

-Samira- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:42pm | IP Logged

Plzz update soon Payal

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Payal-15 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
i have used 4 songs here.....not to increase the length FariaLOL......but coz i wanted toLOL

                                                                         Part 30:

Mayank opened his eyes sometime at night and for a split second found himself oblivious to the fact that Nupur was not beside him sleeping in an angelic way....
Nupur wiped the sweat on her forehead with the back of her hand and kept her hand oh her heart and gave a frowning expression, "ByGod Nupur...yeh kya tha...Gunjan ne tera dimaag kharaab kar diya hai...pata nahi kaisa sapna tha..."

then feeling her heart beat very fast she said to herself, "apna dil aur dimaag theek kar...aur chup chap so jaa...chain se...aur Gunjan ki baaton pe bilkul dhyan mat de..."

After some more self consoling words, she finally went to sleep again...

After realizing her absence tonight, Mayank reminded himself that he loved silence, from always....and by now he should be enjoying it....and finally slept too after tireness took over...

It was a sunday and Gunjan hat to participate in her college all the hustle and bustle, the Bhushan House had  forgotten that rest was synonymous to Sunday and was in an uproar since the residents of the house had a lot to take care of today...Gunjan's dress, her rehearsal, her practice, etc...

Nupur was specially invited by Gunjan that day to her college, for she always looked upto Nupur for support and today was no different to her.

Mayank had a meeting to go was a meeting where he had to meet some delegates from a foreign country in the afternoon as they had their flight in the evening...

He was stuck in the traffic and was getting irritated to find his sunday being spent not much in work but more so in traffic...

He switched On the radio to listen to the updates of Mumbai traffic so that he knew which roads were traffic free...

A song played when he switched On the radio...

Inn dino, dil mera
Mujhse hai, keh raha
Tu khwaab sajaa
Tu....jee le zara...

He smiled listening to it because he thought these were the words which may influence Nupur...she must be listening to songs like this one often...

He changed the radio station to find the news of traffic again...

Aaj kal tanha main kahaan hoon
Saath chalta hai woh
Uski hamein aadat hone ki
Aadat ho gayi...

Unwillingly his thoughts went to Nupur...he remembered the times with her...when she had sprinkled rain water on him...when she had massaged his head...when she helped his Mom for her health...her bet of making him hug his Ma and Dad...

He shaked his head frowning a little and changed th radio station if the song was the cause of his thoughts...


Na hai yeh paana
Na khona hi hai
Tera na hona jaane
Kyun hona hi hai
Tumse hi din hota hai
Surmayi shaam aati hai
Tumse hi
Tumse hi

He remembered picking her up and making her sleep on the bed...the way she hugged him...her hand holding his...her smile while commenting on his smile....

Now he couldn't change the radio channel since this was the one which updated on traffic news...

He felt strange...what was wrong with him, he literally scolded himself saying, "Mayank..tu toh aise behave kar raha hai jaise har cheez duniya mein Nupur ko tujhse relate karti hai...tu pagal ho gaya hai..."

He suddenly looked at a small girl buying ice-cream for her and remembered how Nupur had helped him have bites of ice-cream while he drove...He got irritated and threw his head aside a little to come back to senses....
Gunjan's college fest went on till long and Nupur stayed with Bhushan's for another day...She didn't knew why but she felt the need to SMS Mayank this time about her new change of plans...this time....
Mayank liked that he was being informed but tried to ignore that her 1 more day's absense affected him...

Nupur was really tired after coming home from college fest but didn't feel much sleepy...she felt something was was very simple for her- she missed Mayank and she knew it...though she didn't think over the lines of Gunjan's now anymore...but missing someone was not totally odd to her...she knew human connections came naturally and very easily to her...n she knew that her realtion with Mayank havd grown lately, so she was happy and looked forward to meet him tomorrow...
Mayank was again in the car moving towards his home...the road on which he was, passed near Nupur's house and her room's window was visible from road...
Nupur now moved away from the window of her room to increase the volume of the song she liked a lot these days..and increasing the volume settled on the chair smiling and listening to the song.....
Tora Sajan aayo tore des
Badli badra, badla sawan, badla jag ne bhes re
Tora sajan aayo tore des re....
When he passed from there, he noticed the curtain had moved a bit as if someone moved away from there, but saw no one...
Neendein neendein rehti hain aajkal 
Bas uske hi khwabon ke libaaz mein
Jaane kahaan tham gaye ye kadam
Bas uske hi ghar ke paas mein
Bhoola main apna raasta
Bahaara bahaara hua dil pehli baar ve
Bahaara baharaa ke chain toh hua faraar ve
Bahaara bahaara hua dil pehli pehli baar ve
Nupur and Gunjan saw a film at night and Nupur didn't realize while Gunjan did, that Nupur kept making direct comparisions of Mayank to the hero of the film...

Gunjan felt as if  Nupur had been given free permission to openly talk about Mayank for the first time, for which, she was earlier restricted to....

She thought of talking about it to Shilpa Aunty soon...

Mayank found it very strange to miss someone..he was not used to it...he missed his Ma and Dad when he went somewhere...he had also missed studying in vacations....but this was totally new to him and he didn't know how this one would go....he felt a restlessness in his heart and he soon realized the reason for it...but he tried his best to dispel the fact from his mind....
--------------------------------------------------------------- lavz the bandhe hue
Labon pe khul gaye...
Main....usse mila toh rang se
Hain mujh mein ghul gaye kuch iss kadar
Mujhme main ab hoon kidhar
Main hoon kidhar...kya bataaon
Sirf usko hai pata
It was the next day and Mayank had left for office and Nupur to her job...Gunjan came from her college in the afternoon and after having a peace of mind she dialled Shilpa Sharma's number...
"Hello Shilpa Aunty, main Gunjan bol rahi hoon"

Shilpa Sharma was very happy to talk to her and smiling she said, "Hello beta, bolo...meri yaad kaise aayi...?"

Gunjan replied smiling, "Yaad toh kissi special ko hi kissi special ki aati hai naa..."

Shilpa replied confused, "matlab?"

Gunjan chuckled and said, "Matlab......Aunty jeeju kaise hain....matlab Di ke na hone se bahot shanti mili hogi naa onko..."

Shilpa replied warningly, "Aye...apne jeeju ka mazaak uda rahi ho?"

Gunjan help her ears even over the phone and said, "Sorry...achcha..sachi baat batati hoon..."
Sorry for the mistakes, if anyLOL

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Faria. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Heelo ji
jiska daar tha wohi kar diya
song pe song , song pe song-----------:(
anyway yah i know - this songs were necessary for ur update...
isliya chod diya.........:D
btw - ur update was excellent as usual
hahahhaha so both were missing each other-----poor mayur -kab tak ek dusre se dur rahega
ab tou nups ko wapas le ao

payal my sis, my cute pie, my sweetu-pilisssssssssssshhhhhhh yaar i request u- next time update a longer part with lots of mayur and no song..............

otherwise i will declare a comment

Edited by -Faria- - 20 April 2011 at 1:10pm

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--jiya-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
fari i love youAngry


Payal... it was an awesomilicious updateDay Dreaming
Nupur and Mayank are so cute... mayu is missing nupur... awwwEmbarrassed
and i Heart the songs... u have used all my favourite songsHug

"bahara bahara hua dil pehli baar re"Embarrassed

thnx for the pmHug


Edited by jiya_angel - 20 April 2011 at 1:11pm

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-Samira- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Rocking update Payal
Mayur missing each other that was cute
thanks for the update n d pm hun

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Faria. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

fari i love youAngry

itna gussa kyun ho rahi ho.......

me too love u jaan...........


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raji02 Groupbie

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
nice update.a sincere request from my side.please make mayank accept that he is missing nupur bcoz she has made a place for herself in his life and heart.nupur has already accepted the fact that she is missing mayank.plzplzplz.................and please update soon.Smile

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DhanakZ IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
wao That was super great update
They are missing each other so much
I love it
thanks for pm
cont soon

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