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Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 (Page 118)

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 4:32am | IP Logged
that was sooo sweet
now I want to know ki Nupur ne kya maanga?WinkLOL

par meri ek complanit haiConfused
why didn't I get a pm?Cry

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 4:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

that was sooo sweet
now I want to know ki Nupur ne kya maanga?WinkLOL

par meri ek complanit haiConfused
why didn't I get a pm?Cry
becoz main abhi PM bhej rahi hoon..........u will get in sometimeLOL
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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Payal-15

Originally posted by jiya_angel

that was sooo sweet
now I want to know ki Nupur ne kya maanga?WinkLOL

par meri ek complanit haiConfused
why didn't I get a pm?Cry
becoz main abhi PM bhej rahi hoon..........u will get in sometimeLOL

mil gayiLOL
thnk uHug

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 4:48am | IP Logged
Hmm I didn't really get the point of this chapter...I found it more like a character sketch... We kinda knew that stuf about them! Just one request again...can u focus more on the future rather than there past? Because most of their pas has been covered and what they were like at college you have managed to convay to us through the way u have etched the characters throughougt the story so it's quite obvious! I love the pace of their relationship being slow but again I am finding that not very much happens in each chapter! Don't get me wrong- I love this FF, its one of my favourites and you write excellently- but while keeping it slow can you make more happen in a chapter? Just a request!

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 4:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by x.Heena.x

Hmm I didn't really get the point of this chapter...I found it more like a character sketch... We kinda knew that stuf about them! Just one request again...can u focus more on the future rather than there past? Because most of their pas has been covered and what they were like at college you have managed to convay to us through the way u have etched the characters throughougt the story so it's quite obvious! I love the pace of their relationship being slow but again I am finding that not very much happens in each chapter! Don't get me wrong- I love this FF, its one of my favourites and you write excellently- but while keeping it slow can you make more happen in a chapter? Just a request!

i get what u r sayin..........but i have always given a vague idea of MN earlier...so i felt the need to show why exactly they were so distant from each other.........sorry for not getting my point across clearlyOuch


Edited by Payal-15 - 10 April 2011 at 5:36am
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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 4:55am | IP Logged
osom lovely

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 5:02am | IP Logged
lovely payal. an elaborated sketch of their contrasting characters was very well written. Opposites attract and now waiting for the next!

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Posted: 10 April 2011 at 5:16am | IP Logged
I loved this sentence '' she was always around somehow'' I could totally imagine mayank's expression..

wonderful update payal, mayanks past was interesting especially how he thinks about everything around him... And to the past i'm curious to know what nupurf wants... Anyways awesome update.... Big smile

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