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Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 (Page 114)

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Part 23

amazing update

loved it

Cont soon

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 6:33am | IP Logged
Part 24:
rockin update

loved it

cont soon

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 6:38am | IP Logged
Part 25:

superb update

loved it

so sorry for d late comments

but u didn't pm me this part

no probs

next tym don't forget

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superb update.
loved it.
update soon.
thanks for the pm.
ps: m sorry..........next time ll gv a long comnt :)

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Posted: 06 April 2011 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
payalHug..what a beautiful update that was.. nd the song which u added ..oh re piya..Day Dreamingi love it...........goes very well with MN's present situation.. loved the update lots.. cant wait to read the next part..........

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 12:20am | IP Logged
Thanks to all for all your sweet commentsHug

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 12:21am | IP Logged
@all...from next update, i'll have bigger updates....warna i guess all will kill me especially FariaLOL                                                                     


                                                                          Part 26:

Nupur got up very early in the morning after she had had a bad and spooky dream and opened her eyes with a start...In her dream she had seen that her and Mayank, i.e., Mayank and Nupur were running away from the supposed ghost on a road all dark and deserted and they ran together for their life holding their hands together...

As soon as Nupur got up she saw Mayank's face a few inches away from hers...she felt relieved to look at his calmly sleeping face which had no fear at all, which was clearly evident on his face in the dream...may be it was the effect of the dream, she thought.....she didn't like a fearful expression on his face at all...it didn't suit him according to her....she thought it affected his perfectly Handsome looks...oh yes, 
Handsome he was.....only a blind person would deny it and she was no blind to his looks either...

She suddenly got a glimpse of their hands held together with the teddy bear laying beside it..

She sat up in amazement at her own act of holding his hand and sleeping....she found his grasp on her hand gentle but firm....she tickled her fingers around his wrist while he loosened his grip and slowly she parted her hands from his...she could still feel the sensation of his hand on hers where she now suddenly felt her hands have become empty.

She recalled how at night she had sneakily held his hand and hit her head and smiled at her silliness and looked back at him and murmerred to herself,"achcha hai Mayank ko kuch pata nahi chala...warna pata nahi woh kya sochta...pehle kal yun kal achanak hug kar liya aur phir uska haath pakad kar so gayi..yeh Sadu Singh toh apne Sadu looks se hi mujhe maar dalta..." she chucled saying this and slept again turning to her side and slet hugging her teddy bear.....
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When Mayank got up and left for jogging, he glanced up at Nupurand smiled thinking, 'she was surely like a child...got all worried and scared for nothing and when asleep holding his hands...no just anybody's hands, she was again in dreamland, away from anything bad ever in the world...'

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When all were having breakfast at the table, Mayank suddenly found Nupur's eyes filled with tears to brim...he indicated it to Shilpa Sharma...when she inquired Nupur about it....Nupur just smiled and said, "Kuch nahi...woh Shah Rukh Khan ki Kal Ho Na Ho yaad aa gayi thi..."

Shilpa Sharma patted her cheeks and said, "Beta....uski sirk happy movies hi dekha karo...haan"

Nupur smiled and said, "Jee..."and flashed her smile to Shilpa Sharma to assure everything's fine...Shilpa Sharma never pressed on anything Nupur didn't want to talk about....but she knew Nupur will be fine..and will herself come and say if she feels like, so she let it be for the while...

Mayank too doubted Nupur's words...he thought the reason was something else, other than what she had just said...he couldn't figure it out though...but then he thought, maybe he was wrong in judging her, as usual....
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That day, Mayank saw Shashi Bhushan mentioning Nupur quite a few times with a happy and sad look on his face...he even mentioned Gunjan missing Nupur a lot since a few days....

Mayank suddenly remembered Nupur's moist eyes and tried to conclude whether same was Nupur's concern....that she missed them a lot...specially after her suddenly hugging him feeling all emotional....he tried to avoid that encounter in his mind but just think of her emotions...he knew how much he would miss his Ma and Dad's company like her, if away from them...maybe she unwantedly had just him 
then....maybe she needed and missed her family a lot....anyone would...

Mayank replied positively to Shashi Bhushan, "Nupur bhi aap logon ko bahut miss karti hai...aap logon se milegi toh usse achcha lagega..."

Shashi Bhushan, who knew Mayank well, was glad at hearing these concerned words from Mayank for Nupur and he smiled, for that is what he wanted to see in them for each other slowly growing up...

Shashi Bhushan decided to call her as soon as he got time from work today...

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Nupur left for her office....she had just decided of making a complain of the watchman today...

Amidst all this...she kept thinking of Gunjan and her Bauji at times from a few days...she missed them...not that she felt like a stranger in Sharma Mansion or felt out of place...no she never felt that...infact,  she was liking it here more than she had estimated...she couldn't exactly say when she had acepted her new family...but she had gladly...though strange it was to her but Mayank too, in a way....he was coming across as the nicest guy she knew...something like her Bauji had confirmed her time and again...though they fought...still....Mayank was her new favourite adventure these days...though she wanted to know him from ever in her heart....but she 
knew knowing him would take anyone a lifetime in itself ...

But, parallel to all these...she plainly missed her family a lot too...
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Nupur got a call from her Bauji after many days...it was like he had read her mind from far away....

Bauji had invited Nupur at home for stay this weekend...he knew Gunjan will love this idea of his too...Nupur had asked for permission from Shilpa Sharma and was excited for her great weekend ahead...
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After dinner, Mayank came back to Nupur who was watching a movie

With a worried expression on his face Mayank came towards Nupur helding out some brochures which held the pictures of the most exotic locations in the world......

Nupur looked at Mayank and then at the brochures..still not being able to figure it out, she raised her one eyebrow into a question...

Mayank didn't know how to say and what to do...he handed over the brochures in Nupur's hands and said, "Woh...yeh Ma ne diye hain...hamaare.....Umm...ghoomne jaane ke liye...kaha choose kar loon, ab?"
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Edited by Payal-15 - 07 April 2011 at 1:52am

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Posted: 07 April 2011 at 12:40am | IP Logged
yayyy!!!!! me firstDancing
loved the update Payal.
this one line-"Ma ne diyein hain, ghoomne jaane ke liye......" made me goROFL
poor guy he can't even say the word honeymoon.LOLLOLLOLLOL
what is he gonna do then?
be kind to him Payal. uski naiyya ab tere haath jo hai.LOLLOL


Edited by shubhie - 07 April 2011 at 12:47am

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