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Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 (Page 101)

Bhawna_arti IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 March 2011 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Nice part.Smile

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dua22 Goldie

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 2:44am | IP Logged
Hmmmmm so finally mayur hv bcm frnds.....

awwwwe so sweet nups applied oil on his hair

and d last update was awesome.....i luved d part where mayank picked her up
cont soon

p.s-thnx for wishing me hun

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stuti123 IF-Sizzlerz

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payalHug what a beautiful update it was.........loved it lots..........................cant wait to read the next part..........

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myownarea IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 3:32am | IP Logged
aww PAyal Hug such a sweet update...loved the slow changes in them...the realisation that they both have a subtle side, caring side, a side different from what they've seen....discovering that side to each other, is just so beautiful...loving it!! :)

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Thank you all jee for liking the update........Hug

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Part 23


Mayank and Nupur came backfrom the office in the evening….they didn't knew and realize when this time had become a routine for them to have a little talk with each other since a couple of days….

There was Mayank standing at the balcony looking at the suset and Nupur came and sat beside him on the swing attached to the side grill of the balcony that could accommodate a single person at a time…

Mayank asked still looking at the sunst, "toh Nupur,…..tumne kal book padhi…chalo achchi company ka(pointing at himself) achcha asar hua tum par " and he smiled to the sun

Nupur chucled at his words and replied, "Mayank…apni shekhi mat bagharo…"

Mayank turned to look at her asking, "apni shekhi kya?"

Nupur replied laughing, "matlab, apni tareef khud karna….aur kya?...waise book achchi thi par…"

Mayank asked with anxiety, "Par kya?"

Nupur replied as if making it clear, "PAR…. mujhse yeh kitaabe vitaabe padhi nahi jaati…mera matlab hai….jab jaroorat padegi…tumse aakar pooch loongi naa…tum thodi na kahin bhage jaa rahe ho….main jaanti hoon tumhare 'chatur' dimaag mein unn saare sawaalon ke jawaab honge…toh woh kaam main tum par chodti hoon…matlab ye nahi ki main kitaabe nahi padh sakti par…koi exciting aur chatpati kitaab ho toh mujhe interest kare…  "

Mayank asked with a straight forward look on his face with his eyebrows raised….(this expression made Nupur realize that he had a more expressive face than he presented it to be..),"aur tumhe kaunsi kitaabe interest karti hai?"

Nupur replied with a wide smile and pressing her hands together, "Jaise GR8 magazine….pata hai January 2011 ke issue mein uske cover page par mere favourite couple ki photo chapi thi….ByGod, unke jaisi chemistry aur love story maine aaj tak nahi dekhi….aankhon mein ek doosre ke liye pyaar saaf saaf nazar aata hai…par izhaar ka lamha unke liye lamba nazar aata hai…arrey yeh toh kaafia mil gaya" patting herself she said, "Waah Nupur…tut oh sach mein kamala hai.."

Mayank smiled at her shaking his head, "Nupur kamala toh pata nahi….lekin tum sach mein pagal ho…" and continued smiling

Nupur saw his smile and replied ignoring her irritation at being called mad but smiling , "waise tum bhi paagal ho…tumhari smile itni buri bhi nahi hai…isse duniya se kyun chupate ho….kamse kam apne liye hassa karo…pata hai smile karna bhi ek tarah ka exercise hoti hai…aur tumhe toh SRK ki tarah dimples bhi free miley hain…"

Mayank smiled widely at her comments on his dimples, "SRK ki tarah dimples bhi free miley hain"

Nupur saw him smiling and felt glad at her comment, she somehow made him smile…..when she continued, "achcha ab SRK se compare kiya hai toh hawa mein mat udne lagna…."

Mayank burst out laughing and said, "nahi….aap aise comparisions apne paas hi rakhiye….main Mayank Sharma ban kar hi santusht hoon…" and continued laughing but somewhere her remarks made him good too…he couldn't deny….she was praising his smile in the most odd way possible but still with her favourite hero..

Nupur replied getting a little irritated at him at him asking for no comparision with SRK…..she said in the same tone as she felt, "bhalai ka toh zamana hi nahi hai….roz roz kisika comparision SRK se nahi hota samjhe…tum sach mein sadu ke sadu hi rahoge…."and then smiling remembering something she kept her had on her head and quickly added before leaving, "Main toh bhol hi gayi….SRK ka interview aane wala tha..repeat…achcha yaad aaya…main chali use dekhne….tum karte raho apne smiles Sun ko dedicate bhoole chuke…..hasne mein kanjosi ka record todoge ek din tum..ByGod" and she left fleetingly…

Mayank looked at her retreating and smiled looking at her and her comments….

He had been smiling more than usual with her around him, though he wouldn't agree to it just yet….


It was dinner time and the Sharma family was having a delicious dinner when Nupur suddenly called out, "Mayank, zara woh rice toh pass karna…mujhe tadke wali onion fry daal ke saath rice bahut pasand hai…"she completed excitedly…

Shilpa Sharma curiously looked at Mayank for his reaction and she was stunned to see Mayank passing the rice bowl to Nupur without a single expression of retort on his face…

She pressed her lips together to hide the smile which would have said clearly, "Kya baat hai?"thereby revealing a dimple much similar like that of Mayank..while Mayank unfortunately didn't miss her expression and she looked at him in the eye with the same curiosity as she was feeling right now…Mayank looked down as if he had been caught red-handed coming a crime…he was not expected from…to commit…

Sameer Sharma enjoyed the looks being exchanged between his wife and his son…

Incidently, Nupur too didn't miss out Shilpa Sharma's expressions and tried to clarify smiling, "Who Aunty….ahh sorry...Ma…hamari dosti ho gayi hai…badi mushkil se…par ab honi ko kaun taal sakta hai…"she completed in an over dramatic total "Nautanki" expression of hers…"

Everyone burst out laughing while Mayank laughed too…

Shilpa Sharma's another glance made it difficult for him yet again…but he tried to smile to her trying to avoid all the awkwardness that she purposely was posing on him….but his smile couldn't deceive his Ma….she knew better of him than to ask anymore…

Sameer and Shilpa Sharma were happy now with the scenario of their son and daughter-in-law…they thanked God for the priceless people these kids were that never failed to make them proud…


It was the time in the evening when sun had set already and Mayank was about to leave office late today and was busy setting his important files I order when he saw his cell phone buzzing and trying to revolve with slow vibrations…

He bent down to read the name being flashed…it read…"Nupur" in white with black in the background….

He kept the file in hand and attended the call realizing that now Nupur was forming a habit of way too much talking to even him now….

He decided in mind to clarify sternly that she should curb her chatting and should forget the dream of taking his ears for granted now…

As soon as he picked up the call he stiffly said, "Nupur.."

When he was soon stopped by the fearful curiosity in Nupur's voice when she said, all she could, in 1 breath, "Mayank…tum kahaan ho…jahaan bhi ho..plz yahaan aa jao jaldi se…mere naye Panvel project wale site par…please….jaldi…main tumhe address SMS karti hoon…jaldi aana….main wait kar rahi hoon..please haan…aana"

And she quickly had cut the phone before he could ask anything….

He himself became restles at the way she talked and said please again and again….he left his offce in a hurry praying to God all was fine with her while he started the car and soon received the SMS which gave him the address of her present whereabouts….

Sorry for the mistakes, if anyLOL


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.SA. IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 4:19am | IP Logged
fascinating update Payal Hug
totally loved it. loved the way you merged fact with fiction (gr8 mag)
btw when will they fall for each other completely , irrevocably?
jaldi karo yaar ab sabar nahi hota,
don't give me sabar ka phal cliche plz.LOLLOL

Edited by shubhie - 28 March 2011 at 4:26am

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 4:25am | IP Logged
what could it be .am sure their would be nothing scary

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