Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 - Page 65

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by jiya_angel


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*edited*
yayy... main first aa gayi🥳
awesome update👏--- kehne ki zaruraat hai kya😉?

[quote]Changing Thoughts Of Changing Youth-
I thought I had grew up on false foods,
But little did I think that I was into being because of my strong roots.
As and when the day progressed, I saw diverse groups,
And, mind you, human link is not so weak that it will not trap you in troops.
The flexibility and the rights to choose wrong was the gift of age,
And it became easy to calculate how right is wrong with no time wastage.
But I guess branches grew fast,
And they withered, not to last.
Weak  branches - whenever went detached,
I tried not to give another chance to them, for the sweet fruits that others might catch.
Then the same very age showed me that strong branches(and not the ones that diversified in wrong directions) are the ones that survive,
And they will try to fully support you until you thrive.
I thought I had grew up on false foods,
But little did I think that I was into being because of my strong roots.[/quote]

this was superb Payal, hats off to you for this👏



[quote]Mayank felt her hair and forhead massage to actually calm him down and relax a bit while he felt strange while her soft hands gently moved through his hair and his forehead'
Listening to Nupur's commands was not what he had imagined himself to do but now it didn't make him feel bad but rather emotionally vulnerable a bit and something  which was totally new to him'[/quote]

a total wow moment😍

thanks for the pm🤗
and plzzzzz continue soon😳






Thanks Jiya for such a lovely comment🤗

waise this was a more of a story i have kept Mayur moment for the next update😆
Posted: 13 years ago
wow!that poem was just fab. nupur applying oil to mayank's hair and mayank actually feeling gud about it.dat's the highlight of the update for me.i really think their relation is progressing.they are beginning to understand each other more.on the whole superb update.👏
Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear............
Posted: 13 years ago
Wao payal Poem was amazing
Hats of To U
the part was lovely
So love is start finding its way Hmm
Thanks for pm cont soon

Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Payal
it was simply a beautiful update
just too good


there were three  things on this update that i like most
the first one was the poem
2nd one when nups said that-"Mayank'tumhe log jaan nahi paate shayad isme unka hi nuksaan hai'"-------- so true...........

3rd one the mayur last scene where nups was apply oil and maynk felt good

very very nice update payal
fantastic
but i want more n more mayur moment
waiting 4 ur next part
so do update soon


Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
superb part pallu as always.. 😃

Loved ur poem! do keep writing poetry at times.. 😊

loved the last part..nupur trying to reduce hs stress and tension!...

thanks for the pm pallu
Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant update Payal
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm
Posted: 13 years ago
payel....what an update ....finally mayank was feeling something for nups.......bt don't ready to accept that......so mayankish...........loved it..........waiting for next part........cont soon Edited by ridi_onasis - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
sorry double posting! Edited by roshneerakhali - 13 years ago

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