Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovelycactus

oye hoye pallu

wat an FF for a start...
loved all the parts....
waiting for you to update next....😃

Thanks Anshu🤗
n thanks for ur suggestions😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Payal i read the three parts today...man did i love them😃

Awesome, hun😃😃

Now i cant cant cant wait for MayUr to get married...so please please please update soon😃

I was laughing at their nok-jhok...and the way Shilpa traps Mayank...By God!!! Intelligent Woman!!! And Mayank was so mistaken when he thought he could outdo his mum...the way she put across everything to him...i was ROFL😆😆

Lovely hun😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AmyArTiMayUr

Payal i read the three parts today...man did i love them😃

Awesome, hun😃😃

Now i cant cant cant wait for MayUr to get married...so please please please update soon😃

I was laughing at their nok-jhok...and the way Shilpa traps Mayank...By God!!! Intelligent Woman!!! And Mayank was so mistaken when he thought he could outdo his mum...the way she put across everything to him...i was ROFL😆😆

Lovely hun😃

Amy loved ur reply🤗

ya will update soon😆

n Shilpa Aunty-Mayank's relation i always love so not missing out that😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic update Payal  😃 Loved it a lot!!!
Can't wait for the next part. Please update soon Payal and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Alisha-MJHT

Fantastic update Payal  😃 Loved it a lot!!!

Can't wait for the next part. Please update soon Payal and thanks for the pm.

Thanks Alisha😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for the late reply. I just started reading ur ff.
 
Part 1
It was lovely! I loved how u showed Mayank and Nupur back and forth...clearly evident how different they are. It reminded me of the beginning of MJHT. I like how tight Nupur's family is and the bond b/w Mayank and Shilpa Aunty.
 
 
I have read the rest of the parts but will comment on them tomorrow/wed. (I'm trying to work on my own ff)
Edited by Ishita16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
srry for the late reply but 
thrly enjoyed the 2 part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishita16

Sorry for the late reply. I just started reading ur ff.

 
Part 1
It was lovely! I loved how u showed Mayank and Nupur back and forth...clearly evident how different they are. It reminded me of the beginning of MJHT. I like how tight Nupur's family is and the bond b/w Mayank and Shilpa Aunty.
 
 
I have read the rest of the parts but will comment on them tomorrow/wed. (I'm trying to work on my own ff)

Thanks for ur comment Ishita............m glad u liked it🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ginny09

srry for the late reply but 

thrly enjoyed the 2 part :)

.its okay😆
Thanks for the reply Ginny............🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 2

Loved the Mayur scene!! It reminded me of the good old times in MJHT.
 
I liked how Mayank was admiring the sisters' bond.
 
While Mayank smiled at Nupur and Gunjan leaving he was completely unaware of the fact that this smile would cost him a lot more than a few seconds of muscles stretch...a lot more.
 
- Loved this line...😆