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New FF Hum Tum & Love? (PART 13 page 68) (Page 9)

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Hi Norya nice FF...........
i loved the way u potrait the characters........
cant wait to see what happens next.......
waintin 4 shanak 2 meet at the party............

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
yarr u r to just best love it yaar i read it again karan and khanakh frenship rocks i wonder what will shaan fell hell be jealous i cant wait for party scen yaar plz update soon sweety

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 2:35pm | IP Logged
 
Oye meri jaan, meri writerni..
tum kya cheez ho yaar , kya kya nahi karsakti..
FF, OS, VM, tussi toh great ho yaar..
 
OMG kya beginning hai yaar..
awesome start..i luv how u started
with Shaan being devdas..omg the whole first part
felt as if i was watchin YashRaj prods movie..
omgg..i just love the convo that
shaan and sunshine had..
and LOL sunshine omgg when readin her parts
i could imagine Priyanka Chopra..
patta nahi kyun yaar...this character suits her...
abhi toh patta nahi teri kahani mein kaun hai yeh sunshine..
omg nice suspense yaar...and the dialogues are awesome..
and i love the name sunshine..Smile i luved how she was all bindaas
and wanting to reach for her dreams..and workin hard..
i already love her spunky bindaas character..
aur Shaan rich can get anything accept the love of his parents kind a guy
both so opposite....
yaar just teri fabulous writing se
i could sense the great chemistry between them
during the convo..awesome yaar...ClapClap
 
omg i have to tell u u improved like professionally in the writing.
the last FF i read of urs was like ages ago...and this one is like
omgggg a movie..aggar kisi writer ke haath yeh lag gayi
toh movie zaroor banadenge..oye tussi copyrite claim karna samdje..LOL
i just loved the whole first part..
uff chalo goin to read the next part Big smile
 
Naz

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 3:51pm | IP Logged
 
Mm second part is starting amazing..
nice intro by the way...
(pics nahi dekh paayi Unhappy lakta hai kuch garbar hai with tinypic anyways)
 
love love the pavitra rishta yaane ki dosty of Khanak and Karan
very nice dialogues yaar..
LOLLOL Karan the business boy..awesome
could imagine him in his hot suit..Embarrassed
 
the morning routine at Khandewal household
is also very serial and filmy...
and hailaa LOL yeh saas bahu toh bare modern typos hai
saas even says OMG...i like it..hehe..lekin inka character mein
kisko imagine karoon.? chal kisiko bhi karlungi..anyways..
and do i smell some rivarly between big bro and lil bro..?
aisa lakta hai akshay is jealous of Shaan and his succes..?
mmm Ermm yeh sochne waali baat hai..
mazaa aayega..big bro kahin villian na hojaaye.
gettin excited here..to read the story more..
hai apun gettin impatient yaar..LOL
tu toh jaanti hai meri aur patience ki kitni dosti hai ROFL
 
awweee Khanak and her love column..haila reminded me of Mahi yaar..
and kya main bhi apni complicated love likh sakti hoon
shaayad mujhe bhi advice miljaaye..Big smileLOL
 
ROFLROFLROFLROFL mona and rosa
omg they are hilariouss...reminds me of those
despo singles joh har ek handsome pe dore daal te hai..
awesome..ROFLROFLROFLROFL Karan bhi naa
sooo funnyy...omg awesome comedy yaar..
seriously u have to start wrting scripts..arre koi yeh script kisiko director ko dikhao..
has has ke meri toh aankh men ansoo aagaye..ROFLROFLROFL
omg could totally imagine Mona's face when Karan said
the privacy thing with Sunshine ROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
btw ek baat mujhe batana..
tumne Karan ko last name Oberoi kyun diya..?
not that is not suitin or anything
but mujhe lakta hai maine pehle kahin yeh naam suna hai..
kisi serial mein..shaayad? mujhe achha laga name
it must have been from a previous serial which i watchd maybe..
anyways like it..
aur ek funny baat batawoon
everytime u short the name of Shaan dad in Su
ROFL i see Hussain as Sumit ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
ab teri story mein i see Hussain as Sunil Khandewal ROFL
 
OMG im lovin the fun and masti of Karan and Khanak
LOL pehle party ke liye blackmail phir whole mall shoppin
jodi mast hai i have to say..
i just wish this was an actual serial yaar
aaj kal ki serial toh bas saas bahu rona dhona crap
damn yaar aise serials kyun nahi aate..anyways
 
wow what a coincicental meeting
of the future saas and bahu maybe Embarrassed
awesome yaar awesome..
and wow Shaan and Karan bumpin
omg i love the timing in the story..
everything so perfect timed..in the dialogue
like the phone call durin the convo of Karan and Shaan
awesome and i love the cute dosty wala fight of Khanak and KaranLOL
hailaaa i can't see the pic of Khanaks dress...Cry
plss tell me which colour, blue, black, purple..?
 
and omg the last part soo sweet and caring
hai yaar for a min i felt like i want them to be a couple Confused
so nice pic of them in my head Karan putting the necklace on her
and she smiling haiii perfect jodi..Confused
omg bechara karan kya hoga uska when khanak ko pyar hogaya toh..Cry
but woh toh tere haath mein hai writerni..LOL
anyways love love love this part as well..
lookin forward to the next one...
 
usse pehle tum mujhe ek baat batao
Meri jaan kahin tum koi
serial writer toh nahi.? apni identity humse chuparahi ho..?
aur mujhse bhi..? apni soulsis ko bhi nahi batayi tune..? ab hasso mat
itna mindblowing writing toh sirf ek professional ka kaam hi hosakta hai..
aur nahi ho..toh yaar seriously think about writing..
coz this is awesome girl awesome
 
love u
Naz

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 2:38pm | IP Logged
update soon yaar please

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 5:27pm | IP Logged
Awe so now it's a leap and both have their own career and awe love the bon between khanak and karan it's so sweet and haha he made her his fake gf to get rid of mona and rosa lol and ooh khanak has already made a good impression in khushboo and madhavi and hmm I suppose shaan would think that khanak is karans gf because of the jewellery shop incident and awe khanak didn't know who shaan was because she didn't let him tell her his name but ooh in the party I just can't wait to seetheir reactions anyways a great ff an storyline Smile

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 10:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rafia 24

WOW where to begin, thanks for the PM by the way. The characters are all so interesting Love Khanak and Karan at the moment and aww karan loves Khanak I see the bechara's heart breaking unless he does get the girl in the end. Loved the whole khandelwal house scene could really imagine it sounded so naturally like them. I also love the way Khanak is like some love guru/ agony aunt ties in nicely with her being a match maker on the show right nowWink.
also loved the interaction between khanak and kads/boo her complimenting mads on looking to young to have a married son was genious LOL
Love the details you give to each scene/set e.g khanaks dress ect
Cant wait for the party scene
Again ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

Hey RainTongue

thank u soo much dear for likin the part and the charactersSmile
and ya Karan really loves Khanak but best friend type not pyaar wala typeLOLLOL
 
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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by imane568

awesome...Going good so far...
I can't wait for this story to unfold. Karan's character is pretty cool, i never really watched any of his shows or anything but i like your characterization. Mads was thanking Khanak, that made me smile. :)
Shaan is awesome as always. Witty and Charming. LOL
Thanks for the PM continue soon.

thanks a lot dear

well i hope u will like Karan till the endWink
and yeah strange but Mads is a good womanLOLLOL
 

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