OMGGG yaar..2 parts post ho chuke...
oye yaar have to catch up...warna peeche rehjawungi...
tujhe toh patta hai naa meri hectic schedules...
work, gym, couch pe lurakna,
aaj kal couch pe zyada lurak jaati hoon..
(umar joh hogayi hai)ssssttt itni zor se mat read karo yaar..secret hai..
chalo no more lurkin on the couch...
warna teri mindblowin FF miss na kardoon..
saali sleep ko samachna hoga..
ke always uska manmaani nahi chalegi..
so no more lurkin on couch..
achha chalo comment continue
warna meri bakwaas bak bak
se yeh poora comment lamba hojaayegi..
Sabse pehle toh
luv luv the siggie for the title name of the FF..
haiii love love the blue and white and dark colour in the siggie
love the beginning..
very nice and sweet convo of
madhvi khusboo and khanak..
and yaar i was also gettin anxious for Shaan to come
and see that its the girl from the bar
haii so excited..and Shaan ki enterance also
very very good writing yaar..
ek dum jaise movie mere saamne chalrahi hai..
and i luv the Karan and Khanak parts
im sure her looks were angry but still cute towards him
damnn yaar kaash i could really this
unke expressionss kamaal ke lagrahe hai in my head..
i luv how she was talkin to herself abt Karan at the bar
yahan bahut witness hai
so funny yaar..
and omgg Shaan was lookin so hot
and haii he had twinkles in his eyes
when walkin towards the bar wonderin who the girl iss..
and Khanak nice hilarious convo with the waiter
has has ke naa meri aankh mein ansoo aagaye...
when she sais waiter banna mera sapna nahi tah
uff i love her...
and OMG thank u thank u thank u
for not draggin their meetin
jaise koi beech mein aake Shaan ko leejaata hai
and he never sees her face and bla bla that kind of draggin u know
uff yaar tum serial jaa ke banao naa...teri stories mein no
draggin waggin..all goes smoothly and all emotions involved
love, happiness, sadness, angerness, comedy
uff teri story toh superhit...
awwwee loved Shaan and khanak convo
so sweet and lovin
Shaan bechara itne din wait kiya thanks bolne ko
loved it very much yaar...
and oye yaar..loved loved how u wrote that part
that she was almost gonne tell him abt Karan but Su started his thing
hehe kya timing hai teri story ki coincidences ka..luv it
totally not annoyin like it happens on tv..
oye yaar im lovin ur story more then the serials on tv
and awww bechara Shaan ko galatfaimi hogaya..
lekin jaldi hai door hogayi..i like that..
man i really loved the convo of them all talkin at the bar..
Khanak is really cute and soo funny
ufff just love whole the convo...
whahahah loved the khitpit of Khanak and Karan
i could totally see it in front of me
whahha when she calls him GAY
has has ke meri aankh mein ansoo aagayi
haha i totally agree with Shaan
dono ke dono weird hai but i love them yaar
and Karan askin tum sach mein woh ho
and omggg love the endingg
haiiii Karan and his pyar wala thoughts
ufff yeh part 3 toh ek dum Masterpiece hai
uff yaar tussi ko serial banana paregi..
ur just too good re...
kaash koi director yeh read karle
aur tujhe contact kare
haii..main toh bin music ke dance karne lagungi...
coz sach me believe me..im not sayin it coz im ur soulsis
but im sayin it coz its damn true..
ur a MASTER in writin yaar...
every part of the story goes soo smoothly
and fun ..ufff i just love it...
im so glad i started to read the fanfic...
thanks for mentionin it to me
warna i would miss readin this awesome fanfic...
uff can't wait to read part 4..
which im goin to do rite now..