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New FF Hum Tum & Love? (PART 13 page 68) (Page 24)

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sshriyaa84

dear noorya loved this one..good job..thanx for the pm

thank u very much ShriyaTongue

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by krock

awsome update but u bahut late karti hain ha this is nt fair but loved it ha shaan and khanak flerting oh ho noorya cant wait to see them romancing yaar

thanksLOLLOL

i know yaar im takin too much time to post sorry babaEmbarrassed
and yaar FF abhi start hua hai hw can they romance already
toda wait tho kar mere dostLOLLOL
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shiksha_03

hey noorya i ws a silent reader in ur fiction til nw bt bw i cudnt control myself frm commenting so i hve 2 say it ws realy vry gud n i m realy waitn for d next part pls continue soon

hey Shiksha ( i dont know if its ur nameEmbarrassed)

but thanks dear im glad ur likin it and it forced u to commentLOLLOL
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ammu_SunshYn

nyc noorya!!...really gud and really LONGGG!!....
sunshyn likey!!....lol
update soon....

hailaa u think it was long??ShockedBig smileBig smile

thanks yaar im surprised coz i sometimes update longer parts
in my other FF but people find it shortLOLLOL
but im happy its not the case hereBig smileLOL
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nine2

aww the trio is awsome....haha loved shanak part:)...i love this khanak....cant wait till Shiran enters...plz continue soon!! :)

thanks buddyTongue

shilpa will enter soon just need to waitEmbarrassed


Edited by ...Noorya... - 01 February 2011 at 3:02pm
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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
 
OMGGG yaar..2 parts post ho chuke...
oye yaar have to catch up...warna peeche rehjawungi...
tujhe toh patta hai naa meri hectic schedules...
work, gym, couch pe lurakna,
aaj kal couch pe zyada lurak jaati hoon..LOL
(umar joh hogayi hai)ssssttt itni zor se mat read karo yaar..secret hai..
chalo no more lurkin on the couch...
warna teri mindblowin FF miss na kardoon..
saali sleep ko samachna hoga..
ke always uska manmaani nahi chalegi..
so no more lurkin on couch..Big smile
achha chalo comment continue
warna meri bakwaas bak bak
se yeh poora comment lamba hojaayegi..
 
Sabse pehle toh
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
luv luv the siggie for the title name of the FF..
haiii love love the blue and white and dark colour in the siggie
 
part 3
 
love the beginning..
very nice and sweet convo of
madhvi khusboo and khanak..
and yaar i was also gettin anxious for Shaan to come
and see that its the girl from the bar
haii so excited..and Shaan ki enterance also
very very good writing yaar..
ek dum jaise movie mere saamne chalrahi hai..
and i luv the Karan and Khanak parts
LOL im sure her looks were angry but still cute towards him
damnn yaar kaash i could really this
unke expressionss kamaal ke lagrahe hai in my head..
i luv how she was talkin to herself abt Karan at the bar
yahan bahut witness hai ROFL
so funny yaar..
 
and omgg Shaan was lookin so hot
and haii he had twinkles in his eyes
when walkin towards the bar wonderin who the girl iss..
and Khanak nice hilarious convo with the waiter
has has ke naa meri aankh mein ansoo aagaye...
when she sais waiter banna mera sapna nahi tahROFL
uff i love her...ROFL
and OMG thank u thank u thank u
for not draggin their meetin
jaise koi beech mein aake Shaan ko leejaata hai
and he never sees her face and bla bla that kind of draggin u know
uff yaar tum serial jaa ke banao naa...teri stories mein no
draggin waggin..all goes smoothly and all emotions involved
love, happiness, sadness, angerness, comedy
uff teri story toh superhit...Clap
 
awwwee loved Shaan and khanak convo
so sweet and lovin
Shaan bechara itne din wait kiya thanks bolne ko LOL
loved it very much yaar...
and oye yaar..loved loved how u wrote that part
that she was almost gonne tell him abt Karan but Su started his thing
hehe kya timing hai teri story ki coincidences ka..luv it
totally not annoyin like it happens on tv..
oye yaar im lovin ur story more then the serials on tv Big smile
and awww bechara Shaan ko galatfaimi hogaya..
lekin jaldi hai door hogayi..i like that..Big smile
 
man i really loved the convo of them all talkin at the bar..
Khanak is really cute and soo funny
ufff just love whole the convo...
whahahah loved the khitpit of Khanak and Karan ROFLROFL
hilarousss yaar ROFL
i could totally see it in front of me
whahha when she calls him GAY  ROFL
and he says Jungli Billi ROFLROFLROFLROFL
has has ke meri aankh mein ansoo aagayi
haha i totally agree with Shaan
dono ke dono weird hai but i love them yaar Big smile
and Karan askin tum sach mein woh hoROFLROFL
amazing yaar..
and omggg love the endingg
haiiii Karan and his pyar wala thoughts
woww.amazing yaar
ClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
 
ufff yeh part 3 toh ek dum Masterpiece hai
uff yaar tussi ko serial banana paregi..
ur just too good re...
kaash koi director yeh read karle
aur tujhe contact kare
haii..main toh bin music ke dance karne lagungi...
coz sach me believe me..im not sayin it coz im ur soulsis
but im sayin it coz its damn true..
ur a MASTER in writin yaar...
every part of the story goes soo smoothly
and fun ..ufff i just love it...
im so glad i started to read the fanfic...
thanks for mentionin it to me
warna i would miss readin this awesome fanfic...
 
uff can't wait to read part 4..
which im goin to do rite now..Big smile
 
Love u
Naz
 

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by NazNgs

 
OMGGG yaar..2 parts post ho chuke...
oye yaar have to catch up...warna peeche rehjawungi...
tujhe toh patta hai naa meri hectic schedules...
work, gym, couch pe lurakna,
aaj kal couch pe zyada lurak jaati hoon..LOL
(umar joh hogayi hai)ssssttt itni zor se mat read karo yaar..secret hai..
chalo no more lurkin on the couch...
warna teri mindblowin FF miss na kardoon..
saali sleep ko samachna hoga..
ke always uska manmaani nahi chalegi..
so no more lurkin on couch..Big smile
achha chalo comment continue
warna meri bakwaas bak bak
se yeh poora comment lamba hojaayegi..
 
Sabse pehle toh
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
luv luv the siggie for the title name of the FF..
haiii love love the blue and white and dark colour in the siggie
 
part 3
 
love the beginning..
very nice and sweet convo of
madhvi khusboo and khanak..
and yaar i was also gettin anxious for Shaan to come
and see that its the girl from the bar
haii so excited..and Shaan ki enterance also
very very good writing yaar..
ek dum jaise movie mere saamne chalrahi hai..
and i luv the Karan and Khanak parts
LOL im sure her looks were angry but still cute towards him
damnn yaar kaash i could really this
unke expressionss kamaal ke lagrahe hai in my head..
i luv how she was talkin to herself abt Karan at the bar
yahan bahut witness hai ROFL
so funny yaar..
 
and omgg Shaan was lookin so hot
and haii he had twinkles in his eyes
when walkin towards the bar wonderin who the girl iss..
and Khanak nice hilarious convo with the waiter
has has ke naa meri aankh mein ansoo aagaye...
when she sais waiter banna mera sapna nahi tahROFL
uff i love her...ROFL
and OMG thank u thank u thank u
for not draggin their meetin
jaise koi beech mein aake Shaan ko leejaata hai
and he never sees her face and bla bla that kind of draggin u know
uff yaar tum serial jaa ke banao naa...teri stories mein no
draggin waggin..all goes smoothly and all emotions involved
love, happiness, sadness, angerness, comedy
uff teri story toh superhit...Clap
 
awwwee loved Shaan and khanak convo
so sweet and lovin
Shaan bechara itne din wait kiya thanks bolne ko LOL
loved it very much yaar...
and oye yaar..loved loved how u wrote that part
that she was almost gonne tell him abt Karan but Su started his thing
hehe kya timing hai teri story ki coincidences ka..luv it
totally not annoyin like it happens on tv..
oye yaar im lovin ur story more then the serials on tv Big smile
and awww bechara Shaan ko galatfaimi hogaya..
lekin jaldi hai door hogayi..i like that..Big smile
 
man i really loved the convo of them all talkin at the bar..
Khanak is really cute and soo funny
ufff just love whole the convo...
whahahah loved the khitpit of Khanak and Karan ROFLROFL
hilarousss yaar ROFL
i could totally see it in front of me
whahha when she calls him GAY  ROFL
and he says Jungli Billi ROFLROFLROFLROFL
has has ke meri aankh mein ansoo aagayi
haha i totally agree with Shaan
dono ke dono weird hai but i love them yaar Big smile
and Karan askin tum sach mein woh hoROFLROFL
amazing yaar..
and omggg love the endingg
haiiii Karan and his pyar wala thoughts
woww.amazing yaar
ClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
 
ufff yeh part 3 toh ek dum Masterpiece hai
uff yaar tussi ko serial banana paregi..
ur just too good re...
kaash koi director yeh read karle
aur tujhe contact kare
haii..main toh bin music ke dance karne lagungi...
coz sach me believe me..im not sayin it coz im ur soulsis
but im sayin it coz its damn true..
ur a MASTER in writin yaar...
every part of the story goes soo smoothly
and fun ..ufff i just love it...
im so glad i started to read the fanfic...
thanks for mentionin it to me
warna i would miss readin this awesome fanfic...
 
uff can't wait to read part 4..
which im goin to do rite now..Big smile
 
Love u
Naz
 

baaappp reeee i dont know where to startLOLLOL

thank u se kam chalega kya???ROFLROFLROFL
maybe the siggy...Pooja made it for meTongue soo sweet naa? aur soo awesomeBig smile
yaar ab teri waje se jab i read sunil's name tho samne Hussain aata haiROFLROFL
when ur done with the 4th part naa so i'll show u something to clear everything...
aisi zabardast cheez hai mere passLOLLOL
jab tu aisi baatein karti hai naa then u know hw i feel dont uEmbarrassedLOLLOL
HugHug
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Posts: 4886

Posted: 01 February 2011 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
 
haan toh yeh rahi mera comment part 4
ke liyee..Big smile
previous comment se bore nahi hogaye naa
kya karoon short comment dena chahti hoon
par ungliyan khud nahi rukte..
hamesha bakwaas bak type karne lakte hai
like now ...i dont know why i always start with
idhar udhar ki baaten...
hope u dont mind...Big smile
 
chalo asli baat karte hai..Big smile
 
Part 4
 
ufff again u blow my bheja away
with a bhejablowin siggie
haii love it...
 
ROFLROFL karan in kitchen subah
even i was shocked ROFL
again cute lovely funny interaction of Khanak and Karan
and omg everythin u wrote on life and destiny
for Karan to say..haii so true yaar..
totally agree with that..
joh kaam ek baar karke kuch nahi mila
dobara kyun kare...par sab kuch toh destiny ke haat mein hai..
loved that part very much...
 
ROFLROFL Mona and Rosa..kutti and kameeni LOL
hahahha i love them...no matter how much annoyin they are
 
nice business baaten btw Karan and Shaan
achha dosti growin btw them as well..Big smile
hahah Karan is also so funny
when he says kya tum khanak pe book likhne waali hai
omgg so hilariousss..
Noor meri jaan teri sense of humor
i love it...ur a very funny girl yaar
maybe u should write the scripts
for comedy circus..kam se kam Archana ko
fake toh hasna nahi paregi..ROFL
anyways..
 
ROFLROFL Mona aur Rosa attack on Shaan
haha directly number pe chalegaye..
haii bahut forward type ki hai yeh Mona aur Rosa...ROFL
hailaaa Shaan playboy mood mein..
Ria ko pasand kardaala ROFL
like that part in the story...
 
nice convo between Shaan and Khanak..
hehe love the comedy and the seriousness in their convo..
love it totally
omgg the cold coffee part haiii
loved it the flirt was very cutee...
and hailaa i also want cold coffee now..
i only drink cold coffee i dont like normal cofee..
Shaantanu Special kahan milega..
 
ufff loved it yaar..totally awesomeee...this fanfic rockss
i just love the whole part
and omgg cant wait to read what happens in Divine club
and waiting for the entry of Shona..
 
Meri MahawriterGuru..
Another Masterpiece Part yaar..
its awesomee...
mera bas chale naa toh tujhe main
writin certificate dedoon...
sach mein love love ur fanfic..
 
waitin for next part...
 
Love u
Naz
 

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