Originally posted by NazNgs
Mm second part is starting amazing..
nice intro by the way...
(pics nahi dekh paayi lakta hai kuch garbar hai with tinypic anyways)
love love the pavitra rishta yaane ki dosty of Khanak and Karan
very nice dialogues yaar..
Karan the business boy..awesome
could imagine him in his hot suit..
the morning routine at Khandewal household
is also very serial and filmy...
and hailaa yeh saas bahu toh bare modern typos hai
saas even says OMG...i like it..hehe..lekin inka character mein
kisko imagine karoon.? chal kisiko bhi karlungi..anyways..
and do i smell some rivarly between big bro and lil bro..?
aisa lakta hai akshay is jealous of Shaan and his succes..?
mmm yeh sochne waali baat hai..
mazaa aayega..big bro kahin villian na hojaaye.
gettin excited here..to read the story more..
hai apun gettin impatient yaar..
tu toh jaanti hai meri aur patience ki kitni dosti hai
awweee Khanak and her love column..haila reminded me of Mahi yaar..
and kya main bhi apni complicated love likh sakti hoon
shaayad mujhe bhi advice miljaaye..
omg they are hilariouss...reminds me of those
despo singles joh har ek handsome pe dore daal te hai..
sooo funnyy...omg awesome comedy yaar..
seriously u have to start wrting scripts..arre koi yeh script kisiko director ko dikhao..
has has ke meri toh aankh men ansoo aagaye..
omg could totally imagine Mona's face when Karan said
the privacy thing with Sunshine
btw ek baat mujhe batana..
tumne Karan ko last name Oberoi kyun diya..?
not that is not suitin or anything
but mujhe lakta hai maine pehle kahin yeh naam suna hai..
kisi serial mein..shaayad? mujhe achha laga name
it must have been from a previous serial which i watchd maybe..
anyways like it..
aur ek funny baat batawoon
everytime u short the name of Shaan dad in Su
ab teri story mein i see Hussain as Sunil Khandewal
OMG im lovin the fun and masti of Karan and Khanak
pehle party ke liye blackmail phir whole mall shoppin
jodi mast hai i have to say..
i just wish this was an actual serial yaar
aaj kal ki serial toh bas saas bahu rona dhona crap
damn yaar aise serials kyun nahi aate..anyways
wow what a coincicental meeting
of the future saas and bahu maybe
awesome yaar awesome..
and wow Shaan and Karan bumpin
omg i love the timing in the story..
everything so perfect timed..in the dialogue
like the phone call durin the convo of Karan and Shaan
awesome and i love the cute dosty wala fight of Khanak and Karan
hailaaa i can't see the pic of Khanaks dress...
plss tell me which colour, blue, black, purple..?
and omg the last part soo sweet and caring
hai yaar for a min i felt like i want them to be a couple
so nice pic of them in my head Karan putting the necklace on her
and she smiling haiii perfect jodi..
omg bechara karan kya hoga uska when khanak ko pyar hogaya toh..
but woh toh tere haath mein hai writerni..
anyways love love love this part as well..
lookin forward to the next one...
usse pehle tum mujhe ek baat batao
Meri jaan kahin tum koi
serial writer toh nahi.? apni identity humse chuparahi ho..?
aur mujhse bhi..? apni soulsis ko bhi nahi batayi tune..? ab hasso mat
itna mindblowing writing toh sirf ek professional ka kaam hi hosakta hai..
aur nahi ho..toh yaar seriously think about writing..
coz this is awesome girl awesome