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FF: FCML!! MG |update7/8 pg69/72 (Page 69)

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loved it!

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1stly dear 4 PM me..Tongue..
2ndly  u r done a ...ClapClapClap..
3rdly  4 ur update..PartyPartyParty... atlast
not only that also
 dear..Thumbs Up
me   dear ...Big smile
really  ...DancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancingDancing
lots of  ...Hug
 wid  ...
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...Angry
 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...ShockedOuchConfused
Note: PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...ConfusedOuch
me said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a try to reply each of u...many serials me don't watch but me read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell never pm u...4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh know just few..but me updated for them surely...but that surely me said..that me really hurt abut u guys...Cryme uncontorled sob.sob..Cry

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Part 7

"Maan ke saath!... Geetanjali bhi?" she asked surprised.

"ji vo maine socha ke ye bhi ghar mein bore hogi toh... agar aap kah to mai..." Geet fumbled.

"nahi nahi... hume koi problem nahi hai par Maan..." Savitri Devi looked doubtful.

"aap uski firkr mat kariye.. main hoon na... I'll handle him" she said with a smile..

Savitri Devi smiled but looked little doubtful. But she also knew that Geet being his only best friend can handle him better and will make him do what she wants like past!

Geet and Geetanjali both sat on the couch near Savitri Devi. Geetanjali looked really excited and happy. Savitri Devi was very happy seeing that and especially the bond between the two.

It was first time that Geetanjali was going out with Maan. She was really happy and a feeling of gratitude was developing within her for Geet. She was really loving this woman.

Maan came down from his room. 'Ah! so you are already ready.' He said looking at her with smile. Then his gaze traveled from Geet to Geetanjali. 'Why is she ready? Is she going some where?' he asked Savitri Devi. 

"yes! she is going with you and Geet." Savitri said.

"but she can't go. She is not well. you know this and then also..." Maan said getting angry.

'Maan she is going with you. Tell me when was last when you took her out except for the docs appointment?' Savitri asked.

"but.." Maan was cut off.

"no buts... she is going that means she is going." Savitri said getting angry.

Maan didn't said anything. He just moved towards the door angrily. Geet and Geetanjali followed him.

Maan sat in car and ignited the same. Geet sat in front seat and Geetanjali at back. For Geetanjali it was first time that she was going out with her dad, except for Doctor's appointments. She was very happy. And she knew it was all because of Geet that she was going out with his father today.

On other hand Geet couldn't understand why Maan doesn't take Geetanjali out? It was all more confusing her. She looked at Maan from corner of her eyes, who was driving and concentrating on road. She wanted to start some easy convo with him but he was just not giving her any space for that. Frustrated she sat back in silence.

After the silent journey of 20 min they finally reached the venue. He got down immediately and looked at Geet and Geetanjali to do the same. They looked at him and got down immediately. The car was taken to parking lot. Maan, Geet, and Geetanjali entered the hall. Everyone present in the hall - there attention got fixed on the trio. Everyone looked at them with surprising look. They had never seen MSK with anyone but alone. 

Maan-Geet were welcomed warmly by the host.


(sorry for mistakes if any..)

will edit it again

Edited by Fantasies - 13 October 2011 at 11:00pm

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nice update

plz continue soon

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Posted: 12 October 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
loved the bond between Geetanjali and Geet!
update soon please!
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Posted: 26 October 2011 at 2:01am | IP Logged
lovely update. 
geetanjali and geet r cool together.

wud luv to read the nxt part.

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