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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
nice update.......................

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lovley update .............
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Part 5


After a lot many days he felt so complete. He did thought about it a lot many times,tht just a mere entry of Geet in his life for about 3hrs ago and he felt the negativity change to positivity. How ever it was not first time. Because every time this would happen when Geet used to be their with, it was the charm of Geet that he could not deny. It was all because of her pure heart and her bubbliness and her non stop chit chat that he used to forget all the worries in his lyf. She was so lively that she could fill any more positivity.


She was his closest friend; he used to share every thing with her. Every thing. even she was the only one whom he first told that he loved Sam. he even told he loved Sam. he even told about his past... the past which consist of his parents. He loved them. But the dark truth lied just between them-him and Geet. He used to share every feeling with her. She was like his family…


He didn't know how every thing changed. Why everything changed when everything was going well. He was happy, she (Geet) was happy... Then why she left him. Why?


Why she didn't even wait for Maan's and Sam's marriage? What was the hurry, that she didn't even bother to tell him once about it. She didn't even tell him where she was going?.. she didn't even bother to give him any contact number or address… was their friendship was so shallow? Did she even consider him as a friend? Or it was he only who assumed it in first place?!!.. Does she feel nothing for him.. no care.. no love .. just nothing.. did she even think him as a friend.. Because true friends never leave like this. Why she was silent.. Why she didn't even tried to justify her self… was she hiding some thing from him..? is her silent and Sam's sorry are related in any way?.. did Sam knew the reason?


Maan was getting ready while thinking all this.


On other hand Geet… who was sitting in her room all ready for office was just thinking about the events which just happened the day before!




Maan: aao geet.. andar aao.. aise kya dekh rahi ho.. jaise  pehle kabhi nahi aayi yahan..


Geet silently came inside while watching all around and then looking at the angel in Maan's arms.


Suddenly she heard the sound of bangles somewhere from behind and she knew it was none other than Sam!.. she turned around expecting Sam however, she was disappointed for not finding her to be Sam.. But being happier to see Savitri Devi, with astonished face and a warm smile curving her lips!


Savitri Devi: Geet!


Geet went running and hugged her tightly. She didn't know how much she missed her. She was just like her own mum. She loved her respected her. But she knew that she was guilty for not telling her about her leaving.. But least did she know that Savitri Devi already knew the reason of her leaving!


Savitri devi: "geet app.. itne dino baad!...

Kaha chali gayi thi aap?.. kahan thi itne din?..ek baar bhi nahi socha yaha se jane se pehle?..kisi ke bare mein nahi socha…. Na mere bare mein.. aur na hi maan ke bare mein…" she said in annoyance..


Geet looked at her with teary eye.


" pata hai yaha sab kuch badal gaya.. sab kuch.. kuch bhi pehle jaisa nahi raha…" Savitri Devi continued in chocked tone while hugging her.


Mean while Maan just didn't want Geetanjali to hear all those things.. coz it wil only result in her sadness!


Maan:  maa mai Geetanjali ko room mein le jar aha hoon.. kal iska school bhi hai na..


Savitri devi: haan beta.. isse sula dijiye..


Maan left them and went upstairs with Geetanjali in his arms!


"dekha aapne inhe( Maan) .. kitna badal gaye hain ye.. Ek waqt tha jab ye ladka siway masti ke aur kuch nahi sochta tha.. koi nahi tha iss ghar mein phir bhi bhara bhara sa lagta tha.. aur aaj dekhiye.. ab ek bachhi bhi hai.. aur kitna shant ho gaya hai.. lagta hi nahi ke ye mera Maan hai.."Savitri devi said while looking in the direction in which  Maan went.


"Maa" geet said looking here and there as if finding something.." ye Sam kaha hai?.. kya vo ghar par nahi hai??"


"Samira!"  Savitri looked at geet in disbelief..but soon… expressions were changed to sorrowfulness! "geet .. Samira ab humari zindagi mein nahi hai" she said in a sad tone...


"Maa… ye aap kya keh raho ho.. aap aise kaise…" geet fumbled looking at Savitri Devi's sad expressions. She felt silent!


Savitri Devi started with sigh…

"Samira ki pregnancy mein kuch problem baat samira ko pata thi.. par maan ko nhi.. maan ke liye ye bachha bohot imp. tha… ye bachha sab kuch tha uske liye.. ye baat samira janti thi.. aur vo uss bachhe ko kisi kimat par bhi khona nhi chati thi.. isiliye usne iss baat ko pata hi nhi lagne diya.. na mujhe aur hi Maan ko.. aur delivery ke kuch samay baad hume bataya gaya ke excess bleeding ki wajah se vo nahi bachh sakti.. chances bohot kum hain... jab ye baat maan ko pata lagi.. toh vo jaise toot sa gaya… .. aur kuch ghanto baad hi.. Samira….." she couldn't complete and just broke down.



And on other side Geet stood their all shocked… all her good dreams about seeing Maan and Sam happy were shattered…. She didn't know what to say..Wht to believe. She was so much shocked that she didn't say a word to anyone but just ran to her room..


Flashback ends.


She was still in shock. However after talking to Maan..She was little calm but still could not come over the reality that Samira was no more..


Maan-Geet…(he knocked on her room door)


Geet: yes Maan! You don't have to knock or take permission


Maan- ummm..well get ready fast. Its already 9 and meeting is at 10 you know na …come fast Geet.. We'll have breakfast together!


Geet: yes I am just coming n two min.


Maan went to the dinning table where Savitri Devi and Geetanjali were already seated and were having hush-hush conversation.


Geetanjali : dadi.. vo kaun hain jo kal papa ke saath aayi thi..?


(Guys I am going to address Savitri Devi as Dadi from now onwards!)


Dadi (smiled) : vo aapke papa ki dost hain.. bachhpan ki dost!


Geetanjali: par Dadi.. isse pehle toh papa kabhi apne kisi dost ko ghar nahi laaye…

Unka naam kya hai?


Dadi: unka naam Geet hai..


Geetanjali: arre vaah!.. ye to mera naam hai..


Dadi: umm…

(Smiled at her innocence)

Maan: kya baatein ho rahi hai?

(Maan said while sitting between Geetanjali and Dadi.)


Geetanjali: kuch nahi papa…  mai keh rahi thi.. ke mujhe aaj school nahi jana…


Maan: nahi beta.. school is important na… and to do something in life one needs to go to school.


Geet: ohho.. ab Maan Singh Khurana batyenge school ki importance..!

(Geet said while sitting beside Savitri Devi just in front of Maan.)

Maan ye tum keh rahe ho!... Maa dekha ye kya keh raha hai.. jaise khud daily school jata ho..(she said laughing).. Maan tumhara to Homework bhi mai hi..(she said  when she noticed anger visible on Maan's face)


She stopped!


Maan just stood from there and asked Geetanjali to take her Tiffin box and bag and come with him. Without giving second glace at Geet he left!


Geet was mum.


She didn't know what went wrong.. Was she wrong.. She was jut making the atmosphere light. She looked at Savitri Devi in confusion.


Savitri Devi: kuch nahi beta.. aaj kal bass aise hi rehte hain vo.. choti choti baat par naraz ho jate hai.. aap fikar mat kariye..


Geet looked unsatisfied by her explanation. She knew she was wrong some where.





Ok guyz that's it..

Wil try to update ASAP

Lovely commnts guyz… thnku so much..

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awsome update.
love it.
why did maan get angry at geet?
do continue plz

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
loved it priya
can't wait for more

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Nice update,luved it.

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
awesome update.
love it.

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Writer_At_Heart IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shah10

awsome update.
love it.
why did maan get angry at geet?
do continue plz

u'll get to know abt his anger in nxt update!Wink
thnx for commnting!Big smile

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