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sweetdesire IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 1:40am | IP Logged
HI MEHAK...loved the update girl...Finally RM ko akal to AAyi....want more AR moment continue soon......thanks for the PM....

take care

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shonadesire IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:58am | IP Logged
 hey mehak.....wowwwww loved armaan n ridz fake fight n thank God RM realizes their mistake...loved plan......
thanks for pm
continue soon

Edited by shilpI007 - 23 January 2011 at 3:03am

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Mojo. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 3:03am | IP Logged
thank you soooooooo much guys..........thanxx a ton luv u all just luv all ur encouraging comments thank you!!!!Smile

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ammyluvridzi Senior Member

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Awesum part cont sun

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vidu87 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 9:10am | IP Logged
superb part
luvd it
thnx 4 d PM
cont soon

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KaSh-Maneet-Fan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
loved AR
they t fighting 2 bring RM 2grther
sooooo cute
loved da fire escape scence
what a ending
cant wait 4 read more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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ksg_armaan_dmg Senior Member

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged

nice post

Mojo. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
thanxx again guys just love your comments and now here goes my next update


general ward

lavnaya had her duty their and she was just checking the patients. On the other hand ankit was on rounds as soon as he reaches the general ward he sees lavanya standing and was not able to get his eyes off her,he wanted to but was so lost in her beauty...suddenly he saw a patient trying to flirt with her and she was not comfortable with it

L-please aap ye injection lagwa lee jie mujhe jaana bhi hai
PATIENT-phir to mai injection kabhi nahi lagaunga aap gai to mera kya hoga
L-dekhiye mai aapki doctor hu or aap mere patient to please ek patient ki tarah hi behave ki jie
P-arrey patient ki tarah hi to behave kar rahe...vo bhi dill ke kyunki kisi ne mujhe usse chura lia hai

ankit got angry went there,took the injection and injected the patient
A(with angry tone)-aap yaha patient hai or hum aapka ilaaj kar rahe...agar aapko koi problem hai to nikal jaaie yaha se
lavanya was shcoked to see him protecting her and was just staring at her with admiration!!!
P-tu kaun hai be? pati hai iska jo mujhpe cheekh raha hai
Ankit and lavanya were shocked to hear what the patient just said and looked at each other with shock. The also find kinda embarrassed 
L-dekhiye sir...
P(cutting her in between)-dekhayie na!!!
Ankit got so angry that he held the patients coller-ek or shabd bola to phenk dunga yaha samjh mai aai!!!!

suddenly ridhima enters-doctors kya ho raha hai yaha? aap hospital mai kisi fighting ring mai nahi
L-ma'am vo...
R(cutting her b/w and showing her a hand to stop)-DR.lavanya jab aapka senior doctor bol raha to beech mai bolna nahi chahiye,kya aap janti nahi? now back to your duties
A-par ma'am...
R-i said back to your duties
and she leaves


so muskaan was in his arms they were just about to kiss when muskaan came back to her senses and stopped rahul  and rahul then also realizes what was he doing and makes muskaan stand. They both feel strange and started looking down on the floor and left from there.

AND mr.master mind armaan was obviously observing all this-"yess" said he on his victory
A-step one accomplished!!!!

scene shifts to ridhima's bedroom

she just came back and was damn exhausted. She goes to the washroom to change her clothes and she comes out she saw armaan was sitting on the bed.On seing him ridhima got scared
armaan turns
R-ye to mujhe pata hi tha tum ko kabhi mere ghar ka darwaza to dikha hi nahi hai!!!!
A-kya? tumhare ghar mai darwaza hai?
R-ha bas tumhe hi nahi dikhta,tumhe dikhti hai to sirf ye khidki
A-hmmm...par uss khidki se mujhe pata hai kya dikhta hai?(he said this coming close to ridhima)
R(feeling a bit shy)
he holds her by grabbing  her by her waist
she looks into eyes and brings her lashes down feeling shy
A-meri sundar si,hot si girlfriend,ohhh correction i mean my fiance 
A-ha to?
R-armaan...vo tum mujhe hot mat bulaya karo mujhe acha nahi lagta!!!
R-bas nahi lagta to nahi lagta
A(joins his hand)-acha meri sati savitri basket itna badhak kyu rahi  ho?
Ridhima gets angry and tries to leave when armaan again pulls her back they get lost into each others beautiful eyes armaan was holding ridhima's  hand close to his chest and his other hand was on her waist. He kissed her hand and ridhima tried to escape her hand 
A-basket tum jaanti ho na ki tumse kitna pyaar karta hu,islie tumhare saath pange lete rehta hu!!!!
that brought and smile to ridhima's face 
A-oyye hoyye!!!
and as usual their cute and cozy hug

next day in the morning at the bb court
ridhima was as usually jogging and passing by the bb court and saw armaan playing there with the baccha party
R-aaj kya hua armaan tum itni jaldi uth gaye?
A-hmmm...bohot yaad aa rahi thi apne kingdom ki to mai aa gaya
R-god abhi bhi baccho ke saath khel rahe ho,lagta hai merese haar ke thak gaye ho islie practice kar rahe the!!!
A-ohh hello...basket pehla match to tum mujhse haar gai thi
R-mai armaan? haare tum the vo match
A-mai nahi tum
R-maine kaha na tum haare the
A-ok jo bhi ho...but i am sure ab mai tumhe chutki mai hara sakta hu
R-oh really?
A(pulling her close)-really
R(feelin embarrassed)-armaan,,,...armaan choro mujhe bacche dekh rahe hai
armaan turns to the kids raises his brow-aeee baccha party...(whistles) and actions them to turn that way and they obey that and turn!!!
A-bas ab to bacche bhi nahi dekh rahe
R-arm...armmmaaa...armaannn!!!!!!!!!!! choro mujhe yaha bohot log hai vo dekhenge to kya sochenge?
A-kya sochenge do pyaar karne wale...pyaar bhari baatien kar rahe  hai
armaan suddenly leaves her thinking shashank was there and as he turns he sees no ones there and as he sees the other side he sees ridhima running
A(shouting)-arrey basket mujhe harati to jao!
R(shouting+running)-kabhi or apni team ke saath haraungi
A-saturday kesa rahega?
Ridhima raises thumbs up in the air and goes running

scene shifts to samica standing outside sanjeevani talking to somebody standing in the middle of the road. when a car was coming from there and she didn't realize
nishant saw that... the car was coming more closer to her and he ran quickly and pushed her which made him fall on her but as they rolled a couple of times so samica was on top of him and their eyes were locked in such a way even the correct key to it wouldn't have been able to open it up...

and here ends another one!!!!!...phewww finally done...well guys if you like it then press the like button and do tell me your views and opinion by commenting on it and as you know criticism is accepted by a 10 inch smileSmile

thank you!!!!!!!!

Edited by ArOrAMeHaK - 22 June 2012 at 8:12am

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