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Posted: 22 January 2011 at 4:46am | IP Logged

thank you so much guys for your comment they seriously make me sooo happy  and make me realize that you all are awesome and ya guys i always say this and i am again saying if you want me to pm you then do add me to your friend list and here goes epi#14

 

part14

 

in sanjeevani (canteen)

R(to armaan)-armaan tum na apne aap ko zada smart mat samjho

A-correction miss basket mujhe apne aap ko samrt samajhne ki zarurat nai hai kyunki mai already bohot smart hu...get that!!!

R-smart hone ke lie na dimaag ki zarurat nai hai jo tumhare pass nahi hai

A-ohhh pahlease tumse to zada hi hai

ridhima opens her mouth in shock-armaan tum...tum...

A-ha bolo basket maiii...mai kya?

 

suddenly muski enters from one side and rahul from the other side at the same time. They look at each other and feel kinda embarrassed.

 

Ra-kya hua guys tum ladh kyu rahe ho?

A-mujhse kya puch raha iss basket se puch na

M-kya hua ridhima?

RI-acha hai muski tu aa gayi,batao iss armaan ko ki tumhare break up mai saari galti rahul ki hai

A-mai jab keh raha hu iss muskaan ki hai,tumsaari ladkiya hoti hi aisi ho...ladhaku

RI-tum kehna kya chahte ho ki tum ladhke bohot ache hote???

 

they both were busy fighting while rahul and muskaan were quite and embarrassed

scene shifts to the locker room

nishant was sitting on the bench thinking about samica

N(thinking)-uss din jab maine samica ko girne se bachaya to mujhe kya ho gaya tha?

Uss...uski aakhien itni sundar unme kho jaane ka mann karta hai,uske chehre ko hamesha dekhne ka mann karta jo bhola pan uske chehere se jhalakta...haaye kitni sundar hai vo

 

Suddenly he comes back to his senses-abey tu ye kya soch raha vo bhi samica ke baare mai...no nishant no you hate her vo baohot buri hai...kahi mujhe usse...no no no never aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta...impossible!!!

 

On the other side lavanya was also thinkin like this about ankit

L(thinking)-usne mujhe kyu bachaya? Vo to mujhse nafrat karta hai to vo aisa kyu karega?par uske strong manly haathon ne jab mujhe chua to pata nahi kyu mere dill bohot tezz dadhakne laga kahi mujhe usse...(she comes back to her senses) kya nai lavanya aisa bilkul nahi ho sakta uski shakal dekhi yukkk aisa lgata jaise kisi bhoot ko dekh lia ho no lavnaya you hate him

She was walking thinking about all this when armaan passes by and she was just looking at him

L-OMG he is sooo handsome...or mai uss pagal ke baare mai soch rahi thi DR.armaan is sooo hot kash mai iski GF hoti!!!!

She blushes at her thoughts and goes away

Scene shifts to muskaan in her office

M(talking to herself)-Lagta hai mere or rahul ki wajah se armaan ridhima ke beech ladhai ho...sab sab rahul ki galti hai,par unki ladhai ka kaaran mai bhi to ho sakti hu na...urghhh i am sorry AR kash mai tumhare lie kuch kar paati!!! Kya mujhe rahul se maafi maangni chahiye? Nahi nahi mai kyu maafi mangu galti uski vo maafi maan ge mai kyu?????

She was thinking about all this when ridhima enters in anger saying-ohhh...ye armaan itna irritating mera bas chale to mai to na usse...urghhh

M-ab kyu hua ridhima?

R-kya hua tu ye puch kya kya nahi hua!!! I hate him

M-lekin hua kya??

R-wahi jo ter or rahul ke beech hua

M-kya? Iska matlab tum dono ka...

R-break up ho gaya!!! And thanxx to you and rahul tumne meri aakhien khol di

 

This side ridz and muski were busy in there conversation on the other hand armaan and rahul were talking

R-kya? Kya? Armaan tu sach bol raha hai?

A-ha mere bhai mera or ridhima ka break up ho gaya

R-par tu aisa kese kar sakta hai armaan?

A-thank you so much rahul aaj tum aur muskaan na hote na to mai aaj ridhima ka asli roop kabhi na dekh pata

R-matlab tumne hamari wajah se ye kia?

A-nai yaar tum na hte to pata nahi mera kya hota

 

Scene shifts to

Ridhima walking in the corridor when hand snatches her to the fire exit

It was our armaan only

R-armaan tum ye kya kar rahe ho agar rahul muskaan ne dekh lia to?

A-arrey yaar ye rahul muskaan ne to na saare romance ko paani mai mila diA hai

R- armaan vo hamare dost hai unke lie hum itna to kar hi sakte hai

A-hmmm...or wese  muskaan ko tum par shak to nai hua na?

R-nai  abhi tak to nahi or rahul ko tumpe

A-naaa  usse abhi tak nahi pata chala ki hum uske samne ladhne ka naatak kar rahe hai wese tum ye sab choro ab jaldi se ek kiss de do na!!!

R-armaannn!!!!!

A-  Kya??? Pleasee basket ek kiss please!!!

R-nahi armaan choro mujhe jaana hai

He doesn't leave her but ridhima being ridhima slyly got out of her hold and ran away

 

General ward

Muskaan was doin her duties and feeling very guilty for AR when suddenly her pager rang to go armaan's office...she was thinking why was she called to armaan's office when on other hand rahul's pager also rang to go their she heard it ringing and thought he also must have been called their so she changes her direction to go to his room

 

So muskaan was coming from one side and and rahul from one side

So when muski was walking there was water spilled on the floor(well that was armaan's idea only,he had spilled water over the floor)when muski skid cz of it and rahul held her she closed her eyes as she thought she would fall down but realizing she didn't fell she slowly opened her eyes and the person who was holding her was rahul only she was just lost in his eyes and rahul to they both started coming closer to each other more close more close there was a distance on an inch b/w their lips.

 

So guys this is it another update hope you like it do press the like button if u liked and comment and tell me how do feel about it criticism will be accepted with a big smile!!!!!!!!!!

 

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Edited by ArOrAMeHaK - 22 June 2012 at 8:11am

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hey mehak
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awesome part  yaarClap
u r toooooo goodThumbs Up
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Awesome part mehak!
Loved it
Continue soon!!

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very nice part
loved it continue soon

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hey mehak arora or mehak choudhary.......HA............!!!

loved the part but want more AR scenes next timeWink.....finally LSG fallingLOL........lol...awesome and very DMGLICIOUSEmbarrassed.......keep writing and in your language.....OSSO WORK GALLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL............haha........please do update soon and don't take sooooooooooo long otherwise i will KILL you in the SCHOOLAngryAngryAngryAngry..........please update ASAPSmile.........very nice.......!!!! Clapfinally rahul and muskaan realizing their TRUE LOVEShocked....lover AR's planThumbs Up....IN SHORT:JUST PERFECTClap.......!!!
 
 
 
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Edited by ksgforever10 - 23 January 2011 at 1:13am

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HI MEHAK...loved the update girl...Finally RM ko akal to AAyi....want more AR moment yaar........do continue soon......thanks for the PM....

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 hey mehak.....wowwwww loved armaan n ridz fake fight n thank God RM realizes their mistake...loved plan......
thanks for pm
continue soon


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