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Mojo. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged

Previously on dill ki ye dhadhkan

|AR go for swimming| |AR cute fight| |Rahul and abhi v/s nikki and muski| |armaan's surprise still to be unfold|

Part 34

She was extremely curious to know what was coming up next? But she just prayed to god that it was not something like the other "SURPRISES" she had got during the day. She could now hear the voice of the water rising and  splashing, and that voice made her realize that she was near some river or something.

Armaan slowly removed his hands from her eyes and soon as she opened her eyes, she was literally stunned. Not that she had never got such surprises from Armaan but this was completely different. A candle light dinner on the beach by the river, that was armaan's surprise to her and she loved it.

She seriously couldn't believe the beautiful sight in front of her and that too there was no one on the beach it was totally silent. And she just wanted to hug armaan tight at that very moment for such a beautiful gift and she did hug him tight.

At first armaan was taken aback by her action but later responded the hug.

"armaan, thank you so much, tum nahi jaante aaj tumne mujhe kitna khush kiya this is simply perfect" she said still hugging him.

"okay bas basket ab bas bhi karo, I know ki mai bohot hot hu aur tum mujh par fida ho par control basket" he joked.

She came out of the hug and smacked him on his arm.

"oye basket tumhari aakhon mai aasu?" he cupped her face and asked her as he could see the tears in her eyes.

"buddu…..yeh khushi ke aasu hai" she said like a small baby.

"khushi ke ya gam ke aasu toh aasu hai na"

"armaaannn!!!! Shut up"

"okay" he agreed like an obedient kid.

Then they had their dinner, talked, laughed, made fun of each other, walked and in all ridhima enjoyed a lot.

Finally tired they both lied down their on the beach itself and stared at the beautiful night sky.

"armaan…..yaad hai jab hum pehli baar mile the basketball court mai?"

"hm….mai kese bhool sakta hu jab mai……" he stopped in his tracks as he realized what he was gonna say but ridhima completed his sentence.

"mujhse haare the" and she broke into fits of laughter.

"basket mai haara nahi tha, tie hua tha…"

"dekho armaan jooth mat bolo, tum haar gaye the."

"nahi basket tie hua tha"


"okay okay fine meri maa tum jeeti thi khush?"

"or basket tumhe yaad hai jab……tumhe……"

"goli lagi thi?" he wondered how every time she knew what was on armaan's mind, sometimes he thought that was because she knew him too well or sometimes he just freaked out "….yaad hai ache se yaad hai."

"pata hai basket mujhe laga maine tumhe kho dia, kisne kaha tha tumhe mujhe bachane ke lie?"

"mere dill ne….."

"toh aajse apne dill ki baate sunna band kardo"

"DR.mallik agar dill baat na suni hoti toh aaj hum yaha saath nahi hote"


"dill baat sunni tabhi toh tumse sach bolne ki himmat aayi, tumse apne pyaar ka izhaar karne ki"

"kesi himaat pehle aath baar tumne mujhe i hate you hi kaha tha remember?"

"ha toh….? Bol toh dia na, khair choro in sab baton hum saath hai aur ye sabse important hai"

"hm….." armaan faced ridhima by turning towards her and they both looked into each other's eyes. And everyone knows what happens when AR stare into each other's eyes, there is no breaking their eye contact till they regain their senses.

They kept on staring into each other's eyes, armaan started coming closer to ridhima slowly, he came close, more close, and even closer. He wrapped his arm aroung her waist and came extremely close to her. Ridhima slowly closed her eyes feeling his touch and his hot breath.

Now there was no distance between the two and his lips came very close to hers. They were so lost in the moment that they forgot everything, only thing they were aware about was the moment in which they both were. Armaan went closer and placed a kiss on her neck.

He came back close to her face. His eyes looked so drunk, at that moment. And when it comes to those green eyes armaan has no control over himself. But suddenly he jerked up as he felt the cold water hit his face so suddenly and he realized that ridhima splashed water on his face and started running.

He followed her and they kept on running for a while and soon ridhima realized she couldn't go that far so she ran towards the river and armaan even followed her their. She had run so far that the water almost reached her waist and now she couldn't go any further and seeing that armaan was proceeding towards her slowly, she thought of an idea and then started throwing water on armaan, he defended himself with his hand but he failed. He kept on walking and finally caught her and again their eyes got locked, he pulled ridhima a bit behind till they reached the shore and suddenly his feet slipped and they fell on the shore itself with ridhima on top of armaan. They both were completely drenched now.

"apne aap ko bohot smart samajhti ho?"

"correction samajhti nahi hu MR.mallik hu"

"oye ye mera dialogue hai"

"sorry but maine chura liya…..acha armaan ab chale bohot der rho gayi aur papa ko pata laga na to wo hum dono ki jaan lelenge"

"abey yaar ye sasurji bhi na kabab mai haddi bante rehte hai"

"armaaannn!!!...wo mere papa hai hai."

"ha ha jaanta hu, chalo"

And finally they left for home after a long tiring day.


The rays of the sun were shining brightly up in the sky disturbing his sleep that brought a cute frown to his. To ignore the harsh sun rays he dug his head deep in the pillow but the fragrance of strawberry made him realize that it wasn't a pillow he opened his eyes slowly and looked up and saw that he was sleeping on samica's shoulder which brought a smile to his face because she was looking immensely beautiful and super cute as she was sleeping like a small baby.

He planted a sweet kiss on her cheek and she slowly opened her eyes feeling something soft on her cheek. She turned and faced nishant.

"good morning baby" nishant whispered very cutely.

"mai tumhari baby hu?" she also replied like a small baby and was looking very cute.

"na………tum meri baby nahi ho"


"tum…………..tum………………meri……na…….jaan ho"

Samica was so happy with his cute comment that she just hugged him tight. After getting out of the hug, nishant looked at samica and gave her the naughtiest look ever that made samica a little sceptical about his intentions and what his…..what we would call….his 'khurafati' brain was thinking.

"kya hua?" without saying anything he made a cute pout and closed his eyes expecting a kiss from her. At first samica was perplexed but then she understood what he was trying to do.

For a while he kept waiting for the kiss but slowly he opened his eyes and his eyes popped out on not seeing samica and he realized that she escaped leaving him a bit embarrassed. He turned his head to the right and then left and finally saw her running on the wet grass.

He ran behind her shouting her name but she didn't stop and ran faster laughing her ass out. They both were actually acting like nishant was buttercup from powerpuff girls and sam was mojo-jojo. Finally nishant  got caught of her hand and he suddenly pulled her due to which they both fell on the ground with nishant on top of samica.

They stared into each other's eyes and they just couldn't stop staring. Slowly with his finger nishant pushed aside a strand of her hair on her face but still their eye-lock was unbreakable. His lips came closer to her making her nervous and she closed her eyes, she could feel his warm breath on her lips. His lips came a bit more closer and he was about to kiss her when samica came back to her senses.

And to escape from his hold she suddenly tickled him which made him jerk and fall back down on the ground. Before nishant could even realize sam was running at a very high speed and he just smiled at her cuteness.



Scene shifts to lavanya's room

"lavanya utho na"

"kya hai ankit sone do na"

"ab kitna sona hai kumbhkaran already aath baj gaye hai aur hum 10 baje nikalna hai yaha se."

"ha ha theek hai uth rahi hu, by the way tum mere kamre mai kya kar rahe ho?"

Suddenly ankit thought of pulling her leg "kya kar raha hu matlb kya? Tumhe kuch yaad nahi kya?"


"wahi kal raat jo…..hamare beech"

Lavanya's eyes popped out listening to what he was saying "kal raat kya nishant?"

"c'mon lavanya tumhe kuch yaad nahi kya?"

"mujhe toh bas itna yaad hai mai kal apna kaam karke apne kamre mai change kara or so gayi."

"ha dekho sab yaa toh hai"

She smacked him hard on his shoulder "ankittt……….tum bhi na daara diya mujhe you idiot. Moron."

And she went inside he bathroom to freshen up.

Okay guys part completed finally and I am so sorry for so less of lavanya and ankit I couldn't think of anything else. Sorry

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Edited by mehak_arora - 22 June 2011 at 9:50am

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Mojo. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 9:48am | IP Logged

pm's will be sent later :D :D

Edited by mehak_arora - 22 June 2011 at 9:55am

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MrMrsChiping. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 1:05pm | IP Logged

fierst hi mehak
how are i hope you are f9!
thanks for the pm
now come to the part
the part was gr88888
i love the between AR
plz plz plz continuee soon

Edited by Riarai2346 - 22 June 2011 at 1:14pm

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Amoon.88 Goldie

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
looobed it...
lobed AR;s date...
thx 4 da pm

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araja1234 Goldie

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Awesome part. Loved it and thanks for the pm

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Mojo. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
awesome part!
loved AR!
continue soon x

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gupta.aditi20 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 2:53pm | IP Logged

loved it...

it waz so so so romantic...

bt AR dint kissed...:(

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