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Dill ki ye dhadhkan-Epilogue:page117.4/9(complete) (Page 53)

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All the best for ur exams.. Thumbs Up

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edited on pg. 48 !=)
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lovely update<3 cont was a nice part =))
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hii nacima myself shaba new on IF i read ur ff and i loved it plzzz add me to ur pm list.lovely dpdated. armaan is very sweet.
and ur very good writter keep it up.. 
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hey everyone i am back...finally my exams are over and thank you for all your wishes my exams went well and thank you to all those who liked my previous here's another update

previously on dill ki ye dhadhkan

The sun shone brightly and they rays fell on her face making her look more beautiful and especially that smile was the cherry on top of the cake. It was after so many nights that she slept so peacefully, maybe the first morning after so many days when she was not scared of her dreams and had a sweet smile playing on her lips and that was the best of all.

She slowly opened her eyes finally giving up on her efforts to beat the sun, she streched her arms and slowly got up and saw something unexpected which made her jerk and shout a bit but before she could call her whole family to her room, her mouth was covered by a masculine hand and as she realized who the person was she finally took a sigh of relief. 

She removed his hand from her mouth
"armaan, mene tumse kitni baar kaha hai ese ek dum se mat aaya karo mai darr jaati hu"

"i am sorry basket par ab isme meri kya galti hai ki tum itni derr tak soti rehti ho...mai ab tumhe phone karke tumhari neend kharab karke tumhe bata kar aaunga to tum mujhe aane thodi na dongi"

"correct nahi aane dungi aur yaha rukne bhi nahi dungi to jao yaha se aur mujhe sone do"

"par kyu basket? dekho 8 baj gae hai ab kitna sougi?"

"armaan at least chutti ke din to mujhe aaram karne do"

"kya????  aaj tumhari chutti hai tum hospital nahi aa rhai?"

"nahi armaan"

"par basket ese to mai akela ho jaunga na...please basket nahi tumhe aana hi padega"

"armaan please mera mann nahi hai...ek to itni mushkil se chutti mili hai or tab bhi tum mujhe tang kar rahe ho"

"acha theek hai...good idea tum bhi nahi jao mai bhi nahi jaata or phir dono ghumne chalenge"

"or tumhe chutti dega kaun?"
"DR.kirti or kaun?"

"tum pagal ho gae ho kya?...bilkul nahi dengi"

before ridhima completes she saw armaan dialing a number

"hello" he said in a meek voice that made him sound  as if he was sick "DR.kirti...uhummm uhummm...vo actually DR.KIRTI mene aapko ye batane ke lie phone kiya hai ki...uhumm meri tabiyat bilkul theek nahi aap please meri duty thodi late kar dijie please...uhumm...nahi nahi ma'am...aap mujhe chutti dedegi to mere patients ka kya hoga? ma'am"

ridhima was stunned as doctor kirti spared him andgave him a day off.

"ab chale?"

"armaan...itni subah...tum 2 baje tak aana phir chalenge"

"theek hai par tum tayyar rehna"

and he jumped out of the window...making ridhima giggle at his cute action.


Her blush won't go away from her red cheeks, she didn't slept a blink the whole night...remembering the events of the previous night, that was the best moment of her life ever. She never thought ankit also loved her as much as she did. For her the morning seemed so different, it never felt like this ever before, she kept about thinking about previous night only and still was thinking about it...

She was facing the window of her room to look at the beautiful sun shining bright up in the sky never realizing the door of her room opened and ankit came in and saw his angel lying there on the bed looking so beautiful. He came from behind and hugged her from behind jerking her out of her thoughts and making her smile.

"good morning princess" he said nuzzling into her neck

"good morning...aur ye princess kya hai?"

"tumhara naya naam...stupid"

"awww...mai princess hu?"

"nahi...tum MERI princess ho" this line was said by ankit  followed by lavanya's blush

"tum puri raat soi nahi na?"

"soi thi na tumse esa kisne kaha?"

"acha jese mujhe nahi pata ki tum puri raat mere baar mai soch rahi thi"

"oh...please...tum hi reh gaye the jiske baare mai main sochu?"

"or kya...???...agar mere baare mai nahi to kiske baare mai soch rahi thi?"

"umm...ummm...umm...ha...mera favorite first ever crush...KARAN SINGH GROVER" she said making a dreamy expression. And got up to leave when he pulled her making her lie as close as possible to him.

She looked into his eyes and understood that he was not happy about what she said, she lowered gaze a bit scared of his intense gaze.

"tum sirf meri ho or meri hi rahogi, bas ye baat zindagi bhar yaad rakhna" he said very seriously.

She just nodded feeling that how serious he was. He looked at her innocent face that made him melt and he softened his gaze, she looked up into his eyes and couldn't remove her eyes from there. They were just too lost to even remember that they were getting late for the check-up. Before they even realized a knock on the door brought them back to the real world. They looked at the door first and at then at each and started laughing for no reason. 



Ridhima opened the door and armaan was shocked to see that ridhiam was not yet ready.

"arrey basket tum abhi tayyar nahi hui?"

"ha armaan...vo...umm...actually mera bilkul mann nahi hai jaane  ka...please kabhi aur chalenge"

"par basket maine itna kuch socha tha...nahi tumhe chalne hi padega..."

"par armaan...mera bilkul mann nahi hai armaan"

As soon as she completed...he started coming forward slowly slowly making ridhima go back each step he came forward. He came forward and ridhima went more back but armaan pulled her close by her waist. He looked straight into her eyes and she also did the same...It always happened whenever ridhima looked into his eyes she couldn't remove her eyes from those beautiful blue eyes.

"to tum nahi chalogi?"

"" she said still lost in his eyes

armaan bought his face close to ridhima's and touched his head with hers and she drowned even more in his eyes.

"nahi chalogi?"

"n...nahi ar...armaan"

he left her and suddenly sat on the couch

"toh theek hai mai bhi yaha se nahi hilunga"

"par armaan...tum..."

"dekho basket mai yaha se nahi hilne wala tumhe mere saath chalna hi padega"

"theek hai phir bethe raho mai kahi nahi jaane wali" and she left from there...leaving armaan shocked

it has been an hour now and armaan had been sitting there and now he couldn't bear it anymore and ridhima too was adamant on not going anywhere so he went to her room. He saw her sitting on the bed and watching tv.

"basket ek ghanta ho gaya hai ab to tayya ho jao..."

"armaan mene kaha na mai nahi ja rahi"

"dekho basket agar tum tayyar nahi hui na"


" mai tumhe tayyar kardunga" she stood up with a challenging look

"hai tumhe itni himmat?"

"basket mujhe challenge karna theek nahi hoga to isliye mai keh raha hu tayyar ho jao"

"nahi hongi jo karna hai karlo"


He came close to ridhima changing that challenging look into a serious, scared one. He came extremely close to her and this time ridhima stood still there. His hand proceed towards her shoulder, he held her duppatta and slowly removed it from one side and then slowly removed it from the other side. Ridhima's breath became more heavy and armaan dropped her dupatta on the bed. He then suddenly turned her around making her back face him. Now his chest was touching her back, slowly he kept his hand on her wrist and slowly he slide it up towards her shoulder and the brought his hand to her back...ridhima was so lost in the moment that she closed her eyes feeling his touch. His hand proceeded towards the thread of the suit and he slowly he untied it and pulled her by the thread only making her skip a beat. He took his hand close to her waist and brought her lips close to her ear.

"basket agar mai isse aage gaya to log kya sochenge" he said huskily smirking a bit as he knew ridhima was embarrassed now. She came back to her senses and looked at him blushing and ran from there without uttering a word "oyye hoyye"


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shonadesire IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 8:31am | IP Logged
hey Mehak
hw were exams?
awesome partClapClapStar
loved it so much
AR r so cute n adorable
amy is so naughty
thanks for pm
plz continue soon
sweetdesire IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 16 May 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Hey dear...Lovely update... awesome as alwazzz...AR moments are just too cute and adorable...and by just mentioning  KSG name u made my continue soon...thanks for the PM...take care...
Lots of Love

Edited by sweetdesire - 17 May 2011 at 12:04am

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