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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 6:51pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 more
con soon
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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
I am so sorry guys that was a mistake n thanxx ksgforever10 for that n thank you guys for so many encouraging replies...thanxx a lot for liking this one and ya this part has all AR scenes  i am sure you'll like it!!!



part12

so when armaan entered the house he was so shocked to see all the decorations and stuff and was thinking who would have done all this? well who else it could be? the  one and only armaan's basket!!!!

well he was lost in his thought when he saw the most beautiful woman standing in front of him it was ridhima standing at the center in a beautiful pink saree she was looking sooo pretty that armaan couldn't stop admiring her
 



R(walking towards armaan and singing)-happy birthday to you,happy birthday to you,happy birthday dear armaan,happy birthday to you
A(shocked)-basket ye sab...?
R(cut him in b/w)-ye sab maine tumhare lie kia hai...ab sawal jawab band pehle andar to aa jao

as they move forward there was a black suit hanging on a rod in front of armaan
armaan was confused he looked at ridz an pointed his index finger towards the suit
R-tumhare lie hai jao aur ye pehenlo armaan did as she said

armaan came back wearing that suit
A-to kaisa lag raha hu mai?
R-bohot handsome
A-well wo to mai hamesha lagta hu koi nayi baat hai to batao
R-ha ha bas bas ab hero banne ki zarurat nahi hai chalo ab cake kaate

they go in front of the table
it was such a big and beautiful cake that armaan was really shocked to see it, he never imagined that something like this was planned for him
A-basket...ye...i mean itna bada cake?
R-well armaan mai tumhare lie jitna karu utna kam hai kyunki tum mere lie bohot special ho!!!
it brought a biggg smile on his face and then he bent forward and blowed the candles he was about the cut the cake but he stopped
R-kya hua kaato,ruk kyu gae?
he doesn't reply he just holds her hand and starts bringing it close to the knife ridhima looks at her hand ang gives a confused expression. armaan makes her hold the knife as he wants her to cut the along with him the both cut the cake and armaan was so happy that while cutting the cake armaan planted a kiss on ridhima's cheek,ridhima was surprise as well as feeling shy for what armaan just did she turned her face towards him and armaan does the same and the were deeply lost into each other's eyes!!!!!

they both come back to their senses
R-armaan tu yahi ruko mai abhi aai
A- kya hua basket kaha jaa rahi ho?
R-tum ruko to mai aa rahi hu and she leaves

after sometime she comes back and tells armaan to close his eyes
R-armaan ab apni aakhien band karo
A-kyu?
R-arrey tum bas aakhien band karo sawal jawab baad mai
he closes
R-ab kholo
he opens his eyes and sees a gift in ridhima's hand
A(confused)-basket ye kya hai?
R-gift hai
A-mere lie
R-tumhara birthday hi to tumhare lie hi hogi na ab kholo isse 
he opens the gifts and it was an expensive watch armaan was impressed to see it but but not that happy as ridhima expected
R-kya hua acha nahi laga?
A-bohot acha hai i love it par basket iski koi zarurat nahi thi
R-zarurat thi...or ha iski bhi zarurat thi 

and she pulls out another gift
A(suprised)-ek or gift? basket ab bas bhi karo
armaan unwraps it and was realy happy to see so many comics
A-wow comics...thank you basket!!!
and he starts reading them ignoring ridhima
R-oh hello mai ye comics islie nahi lai thi ki tum inhe abhi padho
A-oh i am sorry basket
and he leaves the comics
R-armaan chalo let's dance
ridhima takes him to dance with him
they both started dancing and they were so lost in each other that they didn't realized how half and hour passed like this



R-acha armaan batao tumhe apne birthday ke lie kya chahiye?
A-basket mujhe or kuch nahi chahiye tumne mujhe bohot bada surprise diya hai!! and waise bhi tum mujhe gift de chuki ho
R-ha par vo to meri marzi ke the na ab tum kya chahte ho?
A-maine kaha na mujhe kuch nahi chahiye mujhe tum mil gai ho mere lie vo hi sab kuch milne ke barabar hai
Ridhima simles at this and says-armaan please batao na tumhe kya chahiye?
A-agar tum itna hi insist kar rahi ho to...
pehla to ek kiss
ridhima thought to give a kiss on his cheek right away so she aproches his cheek but armaan dorges her
ridhima was confused
A-miss basket gupta mai iss kiss ki baat nahi kar raha tha
R-kya matlab?
A-mai to...lips ki baat kar raha tha
R-kya?...ok theekai or?
A-well dusra...ummm...vo basket...ummm
R-bolo armaan!!!
A-choro rehno do 
he turns his face to the other side in such a way that his back faces ridhima
R(putting her hand on his shoulder)-bolo armaan kya chahiye tumhe?
A-ummm...rehno do na basket...kuch nahi aise hi
R-nahi armaan ab to tumhe batana padega
A-acha to mai jo kahuga tum mujhe dogi?
R-i promise
A-ridhima isse decision ko baad mai regret mat karna
R(with a scred expression)-armaan tum bolo to tumhe kya chahiye?
A-ummm...basket...mai vo...


what happens next you'll get to know in the next part.guys if you liked it then click the like button and do comment please i just want to know your feedback and guys if you want me to pm you then add mr to your friend list

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LUVD IT SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH...................bechaari riddhima....use to patah hi nahi armaan us se kya maangne waala hai!!!!!!!!!!awwwwwwww it  rmmbrd me of KAJEN...WHEN ARMAAN GAVE HER A BIRTHDAY SURPRISE AND BUGHT A CAKE SIMILAR TO THIS ONE ONLY.....:')....this part was funny but for me it was emotional..........:''')

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
nyc update

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
vry nice...........

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
Hiiii
Awesome update
Loved it
AR r soooo sweet
What is armaan going 2 ask 4
Can't wait
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 3:12pm | IP Logged

very nice...

amazing surprise by ridz......

armi ko kya chahiye........

waiting for next part.......

thnx for the pm............

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
Nice update…
I wonderr Wt ammy wnts hmm…
Cnt wait for next epi continue soon

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