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Mojo. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 3:41pm | IP Logged
thank you so much every body for all your awesome comments...i just love reading the a lot!!!! they are simply awesome...and really make me now here is the next part

recap:AR's first ever kiss'they have a moment together'nikhbi met lavanya'samica and nishant in the locker room
night time
armaan's room 

A(thinking to himself)-O MY GOD! ye maine kya kar diya basket merese kitna gussa hoegi!!! mujhe uske saath esa nahi karna chahiye tha...par ek minute...kiss to usne mujhe kiya tha maine thodi na kiya tha! right...par phir bhi armaan...vo to ye sab teri khushi ke lie kar rahi thi!!! sab meri galti...usse kitna bura lag raha hoga!!!

his phone rang and interrupted his thoughts
he picks it up without seeing who was it!

PERSON ON THE OTHER SIDE-kaun kya? mujhe itni jaldi bhool gae!!! apni basket ko bhool gae?

as he hears her name he suddenly sits on his bed
A-ummm...baske...basket...tum???...ha bolo...itni raat ko phone kyu kiya?
R-ummm...armaan...maine islie phone kiya tha kyunki mai janti hu ki hamare beech jo kuch bhi hua tum uske leke pareshaan hoge, to armaan mai ye kehna chahati thi ki jo kuch humare beech vo hamara pyaar tha...aur mujhe uske baare mai bilkul bura nahi laga to tumhe preshaan hone ki koi zarurat nahi hai
A-par basket...
R-armaan!!!! i am fine!
R-pakka...acha chalo ab mujhe rakhna hai...bieee
A-bieee...arrey basket!
A-i love you
R-i love you too

and they hung up

scene shifts to the locker room

nishant is shouting at sam...and waiting for her reply

N-bolo samica...chup kyu ho ha? jawab do!! kya tum mujhse pyaar karti ho ya nahi...bolo samica...bolo... SAMICA...mai tumse kuch puch raha
before he could complete he was cut by sam
S-ha nishant ha...mai tumse pyaar karti hu (she shouted) bohot pyaar karti hu mai tumse...mai nahi jaanti ye kab hua kese hua? bas mai itna jaanti hu ki I LOVE YOU!!! 
N-to tumne mujhe ye pehle kyu nahi bataya?
N-kahi mai tumhara pyaar jhukla na du?
Sam nodded her head in a yes!!!
S-dekho nishant agar tum mujhse pyaar nahi karte i am fin...
before she could complete nishant placed a sweet kiss on sam's lips!!! and he just touched his lips with hers and stood straight only to see a shocked ans still sam
tears unknowingly started flowing from her eyes and she still stood there still
N(shaking her a bit)-sam?sam?

she looks at him for one more second and then slowly her lips curved into a small smile and she just hugged him...they had tears in their eyes but they couldn't stop smiling

next morning in sanjeevani

rahul and muskaan are sitting on a couch in rahul's office
they sitting really close to each other and staring in each others eyes...rahul slowly removes the strands of muskaan's hair with his finger...then he slowly proceeded and kissed her hand...he started going closer and closer to those lips,when suddenly there romance were interrupted by two different voices clearing there throat 


they suddenly turn around and are shocked to see those two!!!
R-arrey abhi nikki...tum dono?...O MY GOD!!! what a pleasant surprise 
he goes and hugs both of them
M(runs to nikki)-nikkiii!!!!!!! 
she suddenly hugs her and abhi
Muski as usual started her questions
M-kesi hai tu?itne dino se ek phone bhi nahi kiya! honeymoon ka matlab ye nahi hota ki apne dosto ko bhool jao!!! wese how was miami? tumne waha kya kya kiya? or photos khichi ki nahi?
N-muski,,,muski mujhe bolne to de
A-abhi tak wesi hi
R-bilkul sahi kaha abhi...iss radio ko chup karana asaan nahi hai
M-oyeee...khotte tu na zada bola mat kar!!!
R-kyu? kya kar legi tu ha?
N(interrupting them)-arrey ye kya ho raha hai? abhi to romance chal raha tha suddenly ladhai shuru ho  gai?
ramusk's eyes widened listening to nikki...
M-...ummm...nikki ye tu kya keh rahi hai?
R-ha,...muski...romance? kesi baatien kar rahi hai?
A-arrey nikki kyu tang kar rahi ho bechaaro ko? acha chalo guys what ever itne dino baad mila hai kahi chalte hai let's celebrate
M-abhi hum kese jaa sakte hai duty ke beech mai?
N-nice idea! par ek minute ARMAAN RIDHIMA kaha hai hum unhe kal se dhoondh rahe hai mil hi nahi rahe
M-ha vo bas aate hi honge

and they leave for the cafe

scene shifts to the enterance of sanjeevani

ridhima is searching for armaan but couldn't find him
suddenly armaan comes there which scares ridhima and she jerks
A-hey basket!!!
R-huh...!!! armaaannn!!!! dheere nahi bol sakte tumne to meri jaan hi nikaal di thi
A-vo,,,,,mai...tumse...sorry kehna chahata tha
R-armaan...maine kaha na kal raat jo hamare beech hua usse mujhe bilkul bura nahi laga!!! to tumhe tension lene ki koi zarurat nahi
A-par basket...

before he could complete he was cut by nikki
N-kya hua tha tumhare beech kal?
they turn around and are surprised to see them
Ar-nikki???? (he goes and hugs her)
R-abhi? nikki? (she also goes and hugs them)
N-i missed you guys sooo much!!!
R-me too nikki!!! thank god tum log wapas aa gaye!!!
AB-ha...wese ridhima tumne bataya nahi kya hua tumhare beech kal raat?
he said in order to tease them
AR(together)-ummm...vo...ummm...kal...kal raat?
Armaan-kal...kal raat!!! hum beech mai...
R-kuch kuch bhi to nahi hua!
A-ha kal raat ko...vo...mai ridhima date pe gaye the
R-ha,...right date pe gaye the!!!! kaha???
N-choro abhi...ab bas chalo cafeteria chalo sb tumhar intezaar kar rahe hai

and they go to the canteen


so here it is guys!!! i know it's not so good!!! but i promise will write a better one next time...please do press the like button and do comment!!!!

thank you

Edited by ArOrAMeHaK - 22 June 2012 at 8:21am

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anumeha_rajat IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10172

Posted: 30 March 2011 at 4:28pm | IP Logged

hey....that was really nice...

cute part...

loved it alot...

AR r finally taking a step further in their relation..

thnx for the pm.........

ksgforever10 Goldie

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Posts: 2298

Posted: 30 March 2011 at 8:25pm | IP Logged

KB....OMKSG....I love you yaar...Hug

and now don't dare to ask the reason....
Oh mannn merii phat gai thi mera and nishant ka scene pad ke...LOL
I was like....
mehak ur awesome...
thanks yaar...
lekin waise I wanna ask you something..
koi apne dhattt ke saath apni friend ka romance dikhata hai kya...LOL
just kidding...
and yr so cute...
when AR were blushing...Embarrassed
and AN were leg-pulling...Wink
it was hilarious...haha...
hmm..this time the update was quite long I guess...
that was awesome for us..
so inna bada hi update katna ahr baar...
n yaaarrr...
where are ankit and lavanya???gayab???Confused
you know what???
mai jitni tareef karlu na tere is part ki,it'l be less...
especially ko nishant n mere beech ka section tha..Embarrassed
OMG...kaash wo sach ho jae...Ouch
(sigh)but my fortune suxxxx doesn't it...?!?!Angry
anyways..waise bhi he's your dhattt not mines....Tongue
and please I wanna see ankit and lavanya next time as well....
and you know what...
I love the way RJ calls me sam...Day Dreaming
I just imagine that and start blushing hard...Blushing
thankssss for such an awesome update...
I seriously waala loved it...
it was mindboggling....
waise u know what...
my comments and lines are always incomple without comething...
it was f**kingly mindboggling....Big smile
update soon...Smile

Edited by ksgforever10 - 30 March 2011 at 8:35pm

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Ianoconic. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 12080

Posted: 30 March 2011 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
hey mahi baby...........awesome part.............ammy is to sensitiveEmbarrassed........sirf ridz ke hi baare mein sochta hai......Day Dreaming.....muski-rahool-abhi -niki scene was geat....LOLLOLLOL.....loved the way abhi niki were pulling there leg.......ROFLand btw yeh sam aur tere bich main kya chal raha hai????????????Angry jaldi bata de warna tujhe aur us sam ki bachchi ko bohot mar padegi.......LOL
continue soon......
take care......
..Maitree.. IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 6464

Posted: 30 March 2011 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
Mehak Awesome Part !! Sho cute of Riddhima to tell Armaan that she didn't mind the Kiss!! Awww !! Abhi-Nikki entry was awesome..Post the next part soon!
-GoogleWithMe- IF-Addictz

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 12:05am | IP Logged
cute part
loved it
continue soon
jiyaa_m IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 12:44am | IP Logged
nice part
prachi06 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 1:17am | IP Logged
good one yaar

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