Rang Badalti Odhani


Rang Badalti Odhani
Rang Badalti Odhani

OS: A New Beginning

sampar Senior Member

Joined: 04 August 2005
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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 1:06pm | IP Logged

Hey Guys ……someone requested me to write something for new year ….so I decided to pen down my thoughts…and this is what I came up with…I hope u guys like it……

Enjoy and Happy New Year Everyone SmileSmile

A new Beginning


Time has stopped for khanak, she felt incomplete without shantanu. He was her life, her reason to breathe and live life again. Khanak was sitting in Duck's caf where he called her to plan for New Year's party, but she was sitting like a lifeless body. 

Duck: khanak bhabhi main app se baat kar raha hon…app kahan gum ho…..

Khanak: han….kya howa…..han app kya bol rahe thi…..she asked him again….

Duck: bhabhi app theek tu hain  na

Khanak: han duck bha main theek hon…..acha main chalti hon, mujey thora kaam hai……she walked away before he could say anything…..

Khanak collapsed on her bed  and tears escaped her eyes…..kyun aaj shantanu ki itni yaad ai rahi hai…..aik phone tu kar saktey the….kya apne muzic main itne buzy hain ki mujey aik phone nain kar sakte….. pechle baar party ki tayari ki thi, tab app saath the shantanu lakin ais baar app mere saath nain ho…aik neya saal….lakin kya fiada jab ap he mujse door hain….she talked to his photo n wiped her tears…..

Then with Duck and Sam she got busy with party preparations. The party was held at  DUck's cafe. Sam and Duck did the decoration of the cafee, khanak help to prepare food. Sunil and Madhvi decided not to come to party, because the last party was proven to be disaster for both of them. Khanak tried her best to convince both of them; at least both agreed to be part of the party.

Duck: khanak bhabhi sab ho gaya hai, app ja ke ready ho kar aio. Tab tak main our sam hain yahan par.

Khanak: theek hai main ati hon abhi,

In her room, she was sad and missing shantanu badly. She randomly picked a sari and got ready. She looked at herself in the mirror, eyes full of sadness and moist, lips but without any smile.  Kya main shantanu ko aik baar phone karon. Tu kya howa ager wo busy hain , mera aik phone tu sun hi saktey hain. Then she picked up the phone and dialed his number, but phone was busy. She tried several times but failed to get through. Ughh main hi pagal hon jo un ko itna yaar kar rahe hon. Wo tu majey main hon ge apne music ko li kar.  Then she smiled at her reflection in the mirror. Main apna mood kyun karab karon, main bhi un ko yaad nain karon gi. After a while she joined everyone.  Sam and Duck saw her coming  with a smile, but they both knew that her smile was fake. They could clearly see sadness in her eyes.  Even they were missing their best buddy shaan. Sam cursed rahul for sending shaan out around this time of the year. Duck tried his best to calm her down.

Khanak: sam kya howa app ko . app gusse main lag rahi ho.

Sam: nain khanak kuch nain. Main tu bus Rahul ka keema banana ki soch rahi thi. Us idiot ne shaan ko jaan buj kar beja hai.

Khanak: nain sam, asa kuch nain hai. Main janti hon tum mere liye prishan ho. Main theek hon, tum party ka maza lo …then she walked away, she wasn't in the mood to argue with anyone. She stands in a corner.

Khanak: pata nain kyun lakin muje lagta hai, aaj shantanu jaror ayen gi. Kyun mera dil kehta hai ke wo ayen gen then she glanced towards the entrance but turned around with disappointment.

Everyone decide to dance   before the countdown begins.  SunMad danced together, Rahul asked sam for a dance and duck decided to dance with khanak. Khanak wasn't in the mood to dance with any one other then shantanu. She made some excuse and walked away but stopped and turned around.

Khanak: muje kyun laga jesay shantanu yehan hain. Then starts looking in all direction for his presence, she spotted him standing near the entrance and ran towards him with jet speed.  She pushed everyone out of her way to reach her destination, shantanu khandelwal, the man she belongs to and collapsed in his arms.  They hugged each other, there was no space for air to pass through their bodies.  Shantanu saw everyone staring at them and pushed khanak away.

Shantanu: khanak sab dekh rahe hain….

Khanak: tu kya  howa, app mere pati ho, muje koi fark nain parta …samje app

Shantanu: wah kya baat hai yaar….do din ki dori  ney tumey itna romantic or bold bana diya hai….very nice he teased her with his husky voice…everyone  else decided to leave them alone and start dancing.

Khanak: do din….app ki liya do din hon ge, par mere liya do sadiya the….app ki beggar kuch acha nain lagta shantanu…kyun geye muje bina batiye….hmmm ….

Shantanu: (held his ear) I m sorry….she quickly removed his hands away

Khanak: app kyun sorry…sorry tu main hon..main hi app ko bina bataye ghar chor kar chale gaye…..

Shantanu: acha theek hai . hum dono sorry okay…..wesay khanak kya yeh tumhari khandani beemari hai, ghar chor kar baag jana…hmmm…he asked her…..

Khanak: haaaa……khandan par mat jaye…warna main (points finger at her)…..he held her hand

Shantanu: werna kya…han….werna kya …then kissed her finger, she quickly pulled her hand away….

Khanak: app bhi shantanu ( she whispered while turned red and hugged  him)

Sam and Duck dragged them to dance floor and make them dance together....both of them start dancing, with little space between them and eyes locked together….shantanu turned her around and hugged her from behind ….she was losing herself in his proximity….she felt his lips rubbing on her should and jaw line….she trembled ….khanak kehan bahar chalen ….he whispered in her ear passionately …she turned around …par ais waqat kahan….tum chalo tu mere saath….tumharey liye surprise hai….they slipped from the party without being caught…..

He booked a beautiful terrace of a restaurant just for both of them …..khanak tumharey liye surprise hai…tu kya tum change kar ke aio gi….he hands her a bag…he showed her room to change and asked her join her on the terrace….she changed into a beautiful red modern dress and elegantly walked to the terrace…..he turned around and saw her walking towards him, hair flying in the air….red silky dress hugging her perfect figure….revealing her perfect waist and hip curves….with a v neck going around her neck and flare down to the floor……she crossed her arms on her chest ….he slowly moved closer to her and hugs her from behind…her bare back touched his chest ….he signaled her to look in the sky…she moved her eyes upwards ….and saw fireworks….a huge smile formed on her lips ….she pressed herself into his chest and held his arms tightly……they both danced , had candle light dinner at the terrace under the stars and enjoyed the last hours of passing year and welcomed new year with open arms….. happy new year khanak….he whispered…..app ko bhi …par muje laga app nain aio ge aaj…main buhat akela mehsoos kar rahi thi….pata nain kyun aaj ki buhat yaad ai rahi thi….mujey phone khun nain kiya she complained …..

shantanu: kesay nain ata main aaj …aaj tu ana hi tha….aaj ki din tumey kissey akela chor deta hmmm…thora late howa us ki liye I m sorry…..our wesay tum muskartey howe ache lagti soo plz smile for me…he presses his finger on her lips to make her smile …she trembled at his touch ….he kissed her all over her face and hugged her …..

he then took her to nearby beach to spend some time with her without any interference….at that moment nothing was important to them, not family, not friends just both of them mattered….they both had gala time on the beach and saw more fireworks…..she enjoyed the sight of fireworks, reflecting in the water…he felt happy to see her enjoying and smiling….she looked beautiful and more radiant under the stars …..after a while they saw sun moving up the horizon…..we see two dark figures kissing each other in the warmth of a new sun ….then they  hand in hand walked towards a new sunrise, a new day, a new dawn and a new beginning of happiness….





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NinjaInPyjamas IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Maar hi daala!!

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krock IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
sacchi main mar hi dala....................................oh god aisa ho gaya na toh main party karungi............................kya likha hain boss hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiDay Dreaming

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-Manita- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
awesome !!.............well written....emotions all over the place.....!!!

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-YasharanArshi- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
WOWOWWOWOW ... i m speeechless ....

Awaiting reel party on RBO ... definitely the episode is going to be rocking if SHAAAN comes back Big smile
saaaz IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
Nice one...

I was half expecting you to continue on the dance...

but nice
Yasharanrocks IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 6:18pm | IP Logged
toooo good..........
Fariba100 Senior Member

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
wow !!! amazingggg !!! u should be a writer !!

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