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Weekend Retreat 6 Scene 9 Page 13 Road Trip contd. (Page 3)

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 12:06pm | IP Logged
Suchi Suchi Suchi!! OMG, your Scene 2 killed me. Wow, simply marvelous! This is what we have all wanted, Nivedita to fall in love with Viren but I never realized it would feel this good, as you so beautifully portray it in this scene. Viren, is/can be so endearing, he is so adorable and those aspects really get highlighted especially when one is sleeping and the urge to just look at him, caress his hair is so natural. I cannot believe your Nivedita was bold enough to do that. Loved it. An out an out beautiful scene. Suchi, thanks once again, dear for this.

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
Suchi you have written so many scenes till now, but this one will always be very very close to my heart because to awakened few memories, which should make me sad, but they didn't, it made me moist eyed yes, but I had a smile on my face with my heart racing so fast, because I know exactly how Nivi felt in this scene ! Thank you so much sweetie ! *hugs*

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Wow Suchi, it was simply fabulous. And once again the music made the already wonderful scene more romantic. I am blushing even thinking about it. Embarrassed I just wish Viren was pretending to be a sleep. LOL I am just like a greedy kid, can't wait for more treats. Thanks dear.  

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Oh my gdness . Nivi said I LOV U  those 3 magical words but poor Viren who always wanted 2 hear these 3 magical words frm Nivi was Sleeping . But veryy happyyy Suchi ki u made Nivi realize her love 2wds Viren so Beautifully . loveelyyyy dear .
 
jaan plzzz continue . i will b watngg .

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
OMG OMG OMG OMG..
WinkEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedOUT STANDING wonderful..
cant wait for the next part..

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 12:44pm | IP Logged

Scene 3




It must have been few hours. Viren slowly stirred and opened his eyes, messaging his neck gently and getting up to a sitting position.



He looked at the blanket and touched its smooth texture wondering who might have put it on him. Just then he turned around and saw niveditha, sleeping. He could just gaze at her forever and not worry about anything around him.



He sat there, looking at her, intensely, her beautiful face filled with the radiance of the moon. He got up slowly and approached her.



Niveditha's was resting on the recliner and her feet resting on the extension.

Viren brought back his blanket and gently placed on her. Her huge, gorgeous eyes

were closed as a cloud that shields a star. He knelt besides her not able to take his

eyes away from her face and then he slowly took her hands into his. He could feel

her moist soft skin onto his as he stroked them with his thumb.


When will be the day when she will accept me? He thought feeling a heavy lump in his throat.


He took her hands and placed them on her chest, one on top of another. He then

gently ran his fingers through her hair feeling them and then came closer to her.


Main intezaar karunga… he said with a sad smile on his face.

His heart longed for her; one single touch of love is all he craved for.


Am I being selfish? Is it wrong for me to want her, wanting to drench in her sweet sounds… and if it is, then how beautiful was the feeling of being wrong.


Viren slowly got up and headed towards his bed. He then sat on it and faced niveditha. It was her he wanted to see last and it was her he wanted to see first.

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
WOW, u keep getting betterTongue...
Simplyyy AwesomeBig smileEmbarrassed

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Posted: 01 January 2011 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
wow suchitra ji....bahut ache.....it was just amazing......kya feeling thi.....i could feel each and every word...it was beautifully written......fantastic.....

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