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Weekend Retreat 6 Scene 9 Page 13 Road Trip contd. (Page 13)

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
@ Milee : don't worry hun, i plan to email them the link to this thread LOLWink

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by xaviara

@ Milee : don't worry hun, i plan to email them the link to this thread LOLWink

yea thats a great idea. they need to know how good of a writer is Suchi..maybe they will hire her as one of their members and explore her talent. then we can raise our voices in hopes that someone is hearing us.

but jokes apart..honestly yaar she is too good. she wrote scenes where Nivren are just talking with their eyes and its described and explained so beautifully that we dont feel any different than this happening on screen. 


Edited by simran728 - 02 January 2011 at 9:21pm

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Thanks you guyz! its all your encouragement and love that makes me write honestly. I mean yes I like to write but if you dont have readers to enjoy it then its like a ship on land, no destination : )

OK scene 9 ready. I hope you enjoy it

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Scene 9


Viren followed niveditha, but as soon he tried to sit near her sidharth pulled him to a side forcefully


Ay hai! Bhai zara dekh khar, abhi abhi jawani chadi hai he replied holding his hips with both his hands.


Thum nakhre kerna band karo aur ye batao ki chitti kiyun likhnay ko kahi! Asked sidharth  annoyed


Bhai, aap bhi na, konsay zamanay main rehthay ho… dekho.. cellphone, text messages, direct messages, email messages, facebook, handbook, bodybook tho aaj bohot normal hai .. I mean baat alag honi chahiye. Zara hatkay.. viren told him in a hushed voice


 

Kya… ? virenn.. kahin divya bura maan gayi tho? He asked worried.


Are bhabi kiyun bura manegi. I am telling you.. unko bohot acha laga hoga.. viren replied confidently.


Sidharth looked at divya and noticed that she had a frustrated look on her face.


Viren, lekin divya tho naraz lag rahi hai… zara dekho us taraf he pointed viren towards divya with his eyes.


Viren looked at divya and thoughtfully gulped a small lump inside of him.


Bhai larkiyan sari aise hi hothi hai. Voh chahthi hai ki hum chede, masti karay , aur voh uper uper sey naraz dikhthi hai lekin hothi nahi hai. He said brushing of divyas expressions from his mind.


Thum sahih keh rahe ho viren? Asked sidharth.


100% bro. waise voh naraaz bhi ho jaye na meray pass solid gold plan hai… viren whispered.


Kya .. asked sidharth.


Viren then grabbed sidharth towards his section.


Shh meray saath chaliye main aapko batata hun. He whispered.


Acha suniye, he said to sidharth as he made him sit on the bed.


Pehlay tho aap unka haath apnay haath main lijiye aur ….


Kya ( interrupted sidharth, divya ka haath apnay haath main)


Viren looked at sidharth , shocked!

Aapnay abhi thak divya bhabhi ka haath bhi nahi pakda?


Sidharth cleared his throat and said, han , pakda tha na, shadi walay din, phere lethay waqt.. he replied meekly


 

Sathyanaas… replied viren slamming his hands on his head.


 

Iska matlab hai mujhe level 1 sey training deni paregi. Viren cried out loud.


Thum rehnay do viren main kudh hi jaker bath kertha hun … sidharth said angrily and stood to get up and leave


Are bhai wait wait… dekhiye .. bhabi ko na kuch alag kerke dikhayiega.. hmmmm jaise ki shayeri… aapko shayeri likhni aathi hai? He asked sidharth..


Shayeri? You mean poetry.. hmm no.. replied sidharth thoughtfully ..


Oh ofcourse maine school main kuch poems yaad kiye they… he said excited. Voh chalegi? He continued hopefully..


Han, rail ki patri main chalegi.. replid viren..


Ok bhai aapko gana atha hai? Koi instrument bajane aathi hai? Asked viren


Sidharth nodded with a sad no!


Viren looked at him and thought to himself… inka kuch nahi ho saktha…


Mujeh pata hai , kuch nahi hoga na. main chahtha hun ki unsey baat agay baraun lekin,… said sidharth sadly..


Bhai,,don't worry main huna.. app ko shayeri nahi aathi tho kya hua.. mujhe aathi hai.. main aapko sikhatha hun. 10 min main! Said viren with excitement in his voice.


Acha viren agar main shayeri seekh lunga tho kya voh meray karee baa jayegi , I mean with out being naraaz , asked sidharth


Ofcourse bhai, infact voh aapko dekhker gana , gana shuru ker dengi.. viren replied clapping his hands


Sach asked sidharth


Much replied viren


Aur aaj sey main aapka prem guru hun! Said viren raising his one hand as if giving him ashirvaad


Sidharth smiled at viren


Thumhay kya lagtha hai ki voh kya kahegi? Asked sidharth in a sweet child like manner


Voh aapki taraf dekhengi , aur aapkay bholaypan ko pehchanker kahengi…..




VIREN:

mere bhole balam,

mere pyaare balam 

mera jeevan tere binaa,

o mere piyaa, hai vo diya 

jisamein tel na ho,

ke jisame tel na ho ... 

 

 

mera jeevan tere binaa,

vo ek baag hai bahaar 

jisase hatakar guzare,

door door se guzare ... 

 

o, mujhe apana bana le,

o, bhole apana bana le, 

 

 

 

haay re bhole,

apana bana le,

haay 

 

tere kadamon mein mera pyaar,

mera sansaar, meri kismat hai 

mujhe apana bana le

 

tere kadamon mein mera pyaar,

mera sansaar, meri kismat hai 

mujhe apana bana le

 

 

Sidharth-> accha guru, jab woh aisa kahegi na, to mai kya jawab doonga? 


 

Viren-> jawab? jawab? ha-ha-ha-ha are banghroo, pyaar mein, pyaar mein, jawab apne aap ho jaata hai! kahana Niveditha!! 


 

Sidharth-> arre guru, guru, Niveditha  nahin, Divya! Divya! 


 

Viren -> arre tere ki, bhoola! kahana, kahana 


 

Sidharth-> kyaaaaa? 

 

 

Viren:

meri pyaari divya,  meri bholi divya,  meri matheri Divya,  meri sindoori Divya,  meri Divya re Divya, 


 

meri prem ki naiyaa,

beech bhanvar men,

gud gud gote khaaye 

jhat-pat paar laga de,

jhat-pat paar laga de ...  


 

teri baiyaan gale mein daal

ban ja mere gale ka haar 

jhoole prem hindole,

o jhoole prem hindole  


 

mere jeevan ki aashaa,

padh le mere nainon ki bhaashhaa, 


 

mujhe man mein basa le,

pal pal palakon mein chhupa le ...  


 

tu jhat-pat aakar

chhat-pat mere andhe kuen mein deep jala ke 

kar de ujaalaa,

o zara kar de ujaala ...  


 

 

 

Divya re-e-e-e, Divya re-e-e, Divyaa re-e-e ...



 

Viren … Viren came the voice of sidharth.. shh..



Viren opened his eyes to find, niveditha, divya , vandana standing in front of him with their hands on their hips.

 

 

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 9:53pm | IP Logged
lol this trip is longer than I thought.. so I think I will continue next weekend : ) hopefully reach some sort of conclusion lol its going like serials now, one day like for ever!!

see you all next week..

Ofcourse during the week I will be in the nivren Threads

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
Viren Sood's Romance 101. Chapter 1: how to get your wife closer to you. LOL Wink I loved brothers bonding in this scene. Par yaar Viren ki khud ki kashti sambhalati nahi or Bhai ki sambhalane me laga hai, Bada love guru ban raha hai. LOL OMG I was literally picturing Viren in place of Kishor Kumar and Sid in place of Sunit Dutt. LOL Suchi, you are just amazing, I just can't stop laughing. Now whenever I will see Viren and Sid together on screen, I will picture this song. LOL


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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
lol I know.. sidharth is soo like seedha that its annoying and viren is teda in all sense.. so I thought this would be perfect!

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
ROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
Suchi, I love your sense of humor!! Amazing just amazing. Love it!!!

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