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WITH YOU ALWAYS -A SaJan SS {COMPLETED} (Page 60)

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged
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Hey S3.......................OMG!!Wow!! What a Dasoon Update (Dasoon typical Mumbaiya Langauge Hai na Soham n SwatiWinkLOL--Do Tell me plssWink).....Yaa As I was saying What a Jhakkas, Dasoon Update Clap [[DHASOON not DASOONWinkLOL]]...Kya fark padta ha Buddy Dhasoon ho Ya DasoonWinkLOL........totally Completely Superb , excellent, outstanding, fabulous and Completely Mindblowing...............Well Done S3 ie Soham , Swati n Sonia..Rocking piece of work Clap.................[[S3 hi kaafi hai...Y R U wasting time 4 wright 3 namesLOLLOL?? Sorry! Thanx 4 appreciationEmbarrassed]]Oh Meney toh Name isliyee write kiya Kahin Tum 3 Apna Name na bhool jao WinkLOLand When someone calls U Soham , Swati n Sonia Kahin tum yeh na Bolo Yeh SAB LOG KAUN HAINWinkLOLLOL........Humara Name toh S3 ha naWinkLOLLOL.................

Very well written and amazing dialogues...............ClapClap............The dialogues each n every was just so so good kii I cant say this was good this Ok this perfect As Every piece of Dialogue written was STUPENDOUS, Fantabulous....................Clap.............Mujh ko Bahut bahut Mazza aaya Read karkey n imagine karkey.......N shock Ho karShockedShocked.................But Sajan par Drool karkey bahut mazza aayaDay Dreaming................Man kya Story hai your Ss ki S3 RockingThumbs Up...............................[[Thanx again GUNJAN 4 your sweet REPLYEmbarrassed]]U r Welcome dear S3Smile

As for Indira Shergill I am gonna say the same as Nishi that This IndiraAngry is the most worst Vamp then All Saas Bahu Serials.......Saas bahu serials ki Vamp toh phir bhi better hain But This Indira She is Totally Crazy female..A WeirdoAngry...PAGAL KHANNEY MEIN BARTI KARNEY LAYAK HAI INDIRA..........[[U R Right.I feel same thing..Hey! Company dogi kya unhen??LOLLOL Remember?Tumne Delhi waale "Pagaal Khane" ka add. bhi toh 1 time share kiya thaLOLROFL ROFL]] Mein company kyoon doon Unko..Itni pagal nahi Mein LOLLOLand tum kyoon Nahi Detey company unko SOHAM dear.after all she is Ur character in your Story And Apney every character ka Sath dena Tumhara Dharam hai and Yes As U r my BEST Friend Toh Mein Tumhey company deney Tumharye sath chal padungi and Swania bhi Tumhey company deney mereye Sath chal padengiiWinkLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLROFL....Agar tum Alone jana chahoo toh Ur Wish and Woh Address toh meney Tumharey loya Dhooda thaWinkLOLLOL  .Indira isAngry....................................As 4 who she was talking 2 I think Sheenas Dad Confused.............Lets see....... [[Wait & WatchWink]]Yaa I know ur fav answer wait n watch iskey alava mein kar kya sakti hoonLOLLOLLOL............

As 4 Sheena I think She is Playing Mind Games with Samrat n Gunjan both Showing 2 then that she is in pain n still loves Samrat But in reality she is after something else But WHAT???ErmmConfused....and I also Feel after reading sheena Dialogues that she is saying something but means Something else all together her every word hold Double meaning.............Confused............But WHAT?????????Confused.[[Kaha naa...Wait & WatchSmile]]Chila Kyoon Rahey hoo kar toh rahi hoon Wait n WatchLOLSee mein tumhara kitana Kehna mantii hoo .............LOL

And as 4 Samrat---- Yeh Boys ko Humesha wrong girls ke intentions kaffi time ke baad samaj aatein hain...Kyun ??
[[Really?? Thank God aapke Intentions wrong nahin lagteLOL  ROFL]]
.Yaa Bilkul bhi nahi I am a Good GirlWinkLOLTum bhi Good Boy ho naWink..Samrat feeling guilty But Why????ShockedConfusedConfused..........He has forgotten Sheena betrayed him and He has also forgotten Sheena is A very GOOD ACTRESS.............But its shocking Samrat is falling into the mind games Sheena is playing with Him and thats why he is feeling Guilty and his brain is confused so he is thinking weird thoughts.....Shocked.........[[Yaa! He is in Guilt.Let's C what happened Next..]]Lets see what happens next ShockedU should say U all see what happens Next as TUmko toh Pata hai What will happen NextWinkLOL.........SAMJHAYEEWink

and Gunjan Is getting n feeling insecure Oh!! man Yeh Kya ho raha haiShockedErmm.....Sajan ki life mein ..........................Samrat n gunjan only love each other................I am sure everything will sort out and I Think Samrat will get 2 know Neil n Sheena real intentions soon.........[[Let's C...I don't knowWinkNeil & Sheena ne kuchh bataya hi nahinLOLSmile]]Oh! Very Sad Unko Doono neh kuch nahi Tell kiyaa ....LOLArey They r ur characters In the story 1 time ask kartey they would have told ULOLSmile..........Pyaar sey Ask karoo bata dengey........I think We have lost itLOLLOL.........

Neil n Sheena ka Suddenly Sajan life mein entry I feel is Pre-planned by someone who is With that Stupid Indira.........But Whom?????????Sheena Dad or Samrats dad or Rv or someone ElseConfused....................And this Answer can be answered by Only S3 and Yeh teen MUJH ko KUCH NAHI TELL KARTEY and zyaada ask karti hoon toh Ullu bana detein hain MujhkoLOL.PLss Tell na .........Wink.......[[I swear,GUNJAN main nahin banata,B'coz kabhi uski zaroorat hi nahin hotiROFL ROFL]]Matlab kya hai URS MEIN ULLU HOONAngry....UUUU......sathi neh sathi ko pehchaan liyaaLOL.........Good........

As 4 precap Man ur SS has shocked me totally ShockedKya karna chatey ho tum 3 ConfusedConfusedKAHIN Sajan ko seperate toh nahi karogey na........Angry..........Ur Ss is really very very Good Its Full of Mystery n Suspense...Just MIND BlowingClap............

U know guys If MJHT-3 On air ho gaya Then I will Say this UR SS story should be shown in MJHT-3 Smile...............its really very goodSmile.............Clap[[Phir MJHT CVs team ka kya hoga??WinkLOL Kisi ko unemployed karna achha nahin haiLOL Wink]]Nahi unko umemloyed nahi karengey Unhey bhi employ kar lengey and we all will work togetherSmile..................

SUPERB WORK SOHAM , SWATI N SONIAThumbs Up.........


Do update Soon PlssSmileWaiting for Valentine Special and I hope Sajan Patch up n Samrat realises what sheena is Up to and Gunjan stops feeling insecure and Realises Samrat is only hers...............Smile............... [[Definitely, All 5 Parts of VALENTINES DAY Spl. is very Important part of this Story,And,This time V R trying to show a different "WRITING PATTERN"(from Part-16 to 19). It was very difficult 4 us but,finally V done it. I hope, woh 1 different look dega. Anyway,Sorry! For Joke part.Your reply is always Important 4 all writers.THANX 4 this.]]
I am waiting Excitedly and Anxiously 4 Ur next part S3 ie Valentine Special I am sure its gonna bhi rocking and Writting pattern and Presentation Sab RAPCHIK hogaThumbs Up....AND SORRY 4 the JOKE PART from my side also I hope U all Donot MIND S3 ie Soham, Swati n Sonia..Especially Soham.............
Love GunjanSmileSmile.................

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
omg what a sad update
my heart pinched to see gunjan like this
especially when samrat volunteered to drop sheena off
and she saw them going while in tears
i feel so sad for sajan
hate samrats mom
cont soon
cant wait for next part
really eagre to read what happens when samrat comes back home
 
love
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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mjhtian94

touching n emotional one....
waiting 4 nxt update....valentine spcl .....
thnx 4 pm.......

wanted 2 ask a ques-
did sheena actually luv sam????
actually i was not able to follow sheena's track regularly due 2 some reasons.....watever epi i saw...dey made feel that she was wid sam bcz he was coolest dude of excel college......



Thanks,dear for commenting. As for your question.............CV's alone know what Sheena wanted.........but we Sajanians  believe that she definitely did not love him..........So, I guess your feeling is right. 

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 7:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SajanRox11

Hey S3!!
 
Firstly, THANK YOUU SOOOOOOOOO MUCH for dedicating it to me!! I am so happy you'll updated..
It was a marvellous update yaaaaaar!!  I truly truly LOVED it!
The way you'll showed samrats GUILT and Gunjans INSECURITY!
But why did samrat think that way? WHy did he think the gunjan din wanna tell him.. Humphh.. kya kar rahe ho yaar.. Im really getting nervous and anxious! Btw.. DID YOU GUYS HV TO SHOW THE PART WHERE SHEENA LOSES BALANCE?? .. nd SAMRAT outa all ppl catch HER? couldnt she just fall?? hahah..
ut awesome yaar.. poor gunjan.. she is feeling so so insecure and on top of that Indira with her evil plans.. gosh! Wonder where this SS is going!! Im loving it.. totally..
The excitement is on.. and im WAITING for the 14th noww!! Valentines day! Hoping for something really really speciall..
AWESOME JOB S3! and you guys are fab writers..!! Well Done yaaar!
I Just Made something for you guys! See if you like it
 
 
I want My Sweet, Cute, Adorable, Romantic & Januable Sajan Backkk! 
But jab tak problems nahi badengi tab tak REunion main mazaa nahi ayega ryt?
So Problems jaldi badao.. and Im dying to see the VDay special..
Humphh...!!!!!
SPEECHLESS UPDATE!
Again THANK YOU very much for updating on my request!!
Love You Guys!!
Manjari!
Awwwww!! so sweet Maji .....Thank u so much for such a lovely gift ..........n secondly i was very very busy so couldn't reply but now i m back n will keep replying on every comment for sureLOL...i m glad that u r enjoying our Ud n yes ur wish is is our COMMAND .. SO KEEP ENJOYING DEAR ....

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 2:39am | IP Logged
awesome update................Clap
really  feeling bad for gunjan nd samrat...............Cry
hate indira nd sheena.............Angry
update soon..........Day Dreaming
luv u di.............Heart
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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 5:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sreelu.januable

awesome update................Clap
really  feeling bad for gunjan nd samrat...............Cry
hate indira nd sheena.............Angry
update soon..........Day Dreaming
luv u di.............Heart
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Hey,hon Hug where had you been..........was wondering where you were???? Thanks for commenting and liking the update,
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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 7:01pm | IP Logged
                  SmileHAPPY VALENTINES DAY !!Smile

Hi Frndz ! We are back with our another update (Part-15). Thank You for being patient with us and following our SS (SaJan Story). Hope we are not disappointing you.Please do take the time to read and criticize OR Comment.

Enjoy this first part of Valentine's Special.........and do drop your Comments.......Smile

With LOVE,
S 3

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*Banner made by-SaJanRox11(Manjari)

PART 15
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[V.D. Spl.-1]


As Samrat and Sheena were walking towards the car............Sheena started a conversation with Samrat...........

Sh - Do you remember, Sam...........college days mein jab  tum mujhe Bike par drop karne aate the .........Hum donon hi kitna Enjoy karte the Woh Ride.. .woh...Race and...woh 'time' jab hum saath hote the.

Samrat smiled vaguely.......he remembered the bike rides....but surprisingly..... with him he could only visualize his Chashmish.......... then what he felt for Sheena was just guilt???????????

Suddenly, Sheena lost her balance and clutched Samrat's hand tightly. Samrat held her by her waist , and both looked in each others eyes..... Samrat was the first to look away......Sheena tried to stand ....but cried in pain........she had sprained her ankle......she looked like she was in a lot of pain........ Samrat  had to carry her up to the car...........and he did just that.Putting her down near the passenger door.....he helped her in and without looking up , he drove off..........leaving a heart broken Gunjan behind...........

Gunjan had shut her eyes.....she could not bear to see Samrat so close to Sheena.........and thank God for that.............because, had she seen what happened before Samrat drove off without looking at her......she would have collapsed then..... She just saw Samrat shutting the passenger side door , moving towards the drivers side........and without looking at her........getting in the car and driving off............

She sat on the bed and wept............thoughts cropped up in her head...... ((Aaj maine phir Samrat ko hurt kiya...........main hi hamesha usse hurt karti hoon.......Par woh kitna upset tha iss dinner ko lekar....phir main kaise usse batati ki,aaj morning mein NEIL aaya tha.......woh aur upset ho jaata......kya galat kiya maine???  Kya meri wajah se yeh sab kuchh ho raha hai????? shayad mom theek kehati hain.....main kabhi Samrat ke layak thi hi nahin........Kahin na kahin maine usse hamesha takleef hi di hai......May B,I don't deserve him....his Love......!! Oh God...yeh main kya soch rahi hoon????))

((Theek hi soch rahi hoon.............warna aaj Samrat aise Sheena ko ghar chodne nahin jaata......without even bothering to talk to me........Sab meri hi galati hai.......Samrat.......I am sorry...........please mera intention tumhen hurt karne ka nahin tha............But,Kya main apni iss chhoti si galti ki wajah se....kya main Samrat ko hamesha ke liye kho doongi...........his eyes told me he was hurt.........but,kya itni si baat par kya woh mujhse angry hoga??? No Samrat...If tumhen bad feel hua toh Please mujhe bataao....Mujhe daanto.But, please aise ignore mat karo......I love you Samrat...nahin rah sakti main tumhaare bina... Tumhari khushi mere liye sab se Important hai Samrat.....agar tum hi mujhse naaraz ho gaye toh main kya......nahin..aisa nahin ho sakta.... Main kyun yeh sab soch rahi hoon.....No...No...woh donon sirf business associates hain and he trusts me......phir?? I love you Samrat.....I can't live without you)) 

She closed her eyes n tears flowed out from her eyes.Nothing seemed right........... Everything was going wrong.......for the first time she felt she was losing........Samrat......her love......her life.........her reason for living.... everything.........and who could she blame but,herself ????
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Gunjan's tears did not stop.......she was crying.......she did not want to lose Samrat.......and If this was reason enough for Samrat to get upset with her...........then she was at fault entirely.........she had hurt him...........now she had to get punished.......(("No....Please God........Samrat ko mujhse alag mat hone dena........Main uske bina nahin rah sakti.....Woh meri zindagi hai..Agar woh hi mere paas nahin hoga toh kya karoongii main....kaise jeeungi uske bina.....Maine kaise usse again hurt kiya....Main bahoot buri hoon....Please! Samrat...sirf ek baar mujhe maaf kar do..."))

She did not hear footsteps walking away from her room.In her room, Indira was speaking to someone over the phone....

"Aaj sach.bahot mazza aaya.......Uss ladki ke face expression dekhne wale the , jab mera Sam Sheena ko lekar ghar se nikala toh she did not know how to react.........this is perfect............aaj mujhe bahot accha lag raha hai..... Sam sheena ke kareeb jaa raha hai......aur Gunjan se door....warna aaj woh Sheena ko ghar drop karne nahin jaata,woh bhi bina mere force kiye hue........ aap nahin jaante aaj ka dinner main kabhi bhi nahin bhooloongi....ab zyada time nahin lagega uss ladki ko Sam ki life se jaane......aur...SHEENA ko mere Sam ki zindagi mein aane mein. Kisi ne sach hi kaha hai.....Insaan apna pahla pyar kabhi nahin bhoolta.....aur koi maane yaa naa maane......I know, SHEENA is his 1st LOVE."

Outside the room, Gunjan was standing totally shocked......she wanted to cry her heart out in front of someone she considered her mother. But Indira's words broke her heart.........all that Indira was doing was just an act????? She hated Gunjan so much.........and Samrat was getting closer to Sheena!!!!

But Mom was not to blame...she had hurt Samrat and when hurt, Samrat was vulnerable......Gunjan knew that........and now she had no face to help Samrat feel better.....she was the reason he was hurt.........


Slowly Gunjan climbed the steps.........walking towards their  room......maybe, now it would no longer be their room........She was feeling... Dead... lifeless...breathless....and only one line spoken by mom was ringing in her ears..........."Kisi ne sach hi kaha hai.....Insaan apna pahla pyar kabhi nahin bhoolta.....aur koi maane yaa naa maane.....and I know, SHEENA is his 1st LOVE."

        
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In the car, both Samrat and Sheena were silent..........no one knew what to say...........both were stealing glances at each other..........but not a word was spoken.

S - (( Kuch toh bolna padega, dude....yeh awkwardness end karne ke liye kuchh toh bolna hoga tujhe.)) He said to her softly, Sheena...........Woh...! mujhe tumse kucchh kahna tha....I.....I mean,mujhe tumse kuchh baat karni hai......

Sheena looked at him......in surprise and hope......

Suddenly, Samrat stopped the car...........looking at Sheena and he said , "This is getting too much.......some things need to be cleared.........some things have to be done to repair the damage....we cannot go on living like this......mistakes have to be rectified."

Sheena was elated..........((was she going to get Samrat back in her life????? Maybe.......??  if this happens, then what could be better???? Me and Samrat......this was my dream all along.I knew it...I knew it...Samrat...1 day tum yeh realize karoge..aur mujhse kahoge ki ,....))

"Sheena" ........Samrat's voice brought her back to reality. Samrat had stopped the car .....she was home........so wasn't Samrat going to talk about them?

She looked at Samrat...........with hurt...........

Sh - Andar chalain....1 Coffee peete hain???

S - Nahin, Sheena joh kehana hai yehi kahoonga.........

And he got out of the car. Sheena also got off and came and stood next to Samrat.....looking at him hopefully............Was her dream coming true...... ((Oh ! Samrat....Tum nahin jaante...Jo tum kahna chahte ho...Woh main kab se sunna chahti hoon.....I knew It.....1 din tum yeh mujhse kahoge... aur......))

S - Dekho Sheena ..........joh kuch bhi hua..........woh ek misunderstanding thi.........aur....I think this is the Right Time....jab humein ek dusre se baat kar woh misunderstanding clear kar sakte hain.....isse pahle ki,kaafi late ho jaaye...

Sh -
((Oh...Kaho Samrat.....Main bhi tumse kaafi kuchh kahna chahti hoon... Batana chahti hoon ki....hamare beech ab koi misunderstanding nahin...only Pyar....sirf Pyar Hoga....))

S - Sheena..!! Mera kabhi bhi tumhen hurt karne ka koi irada nahin tha......

Sh -
((I knew Samrat......Tum mujhe Pyar karte the....aur aaj bhi karte ho...tum sirf mujh se naraz ho....so,mujhe hurt nahin kar sakte....))

S - but, yeh baat bhi utni hi sach hai ki maine kabhi tumse pyaar nahin kiya...... attracted toh main tha......main deny nahin karoonga.......but, pyaar nahin tha mujhe tumse.........meri aur shayad chashmish ki galati yehi thi ki hum dono ne apne pyaar ko realize nahin kiya tha issliye shayad hum............

SHEENA was shocked....she didn't expect this....But,she controlled herself...and said to Samrat , Galti ?? Shayad.??......Samrat....tumhare liye yeh simple se words hain........but,think about me........I had dreamt of a life with you... where it would be just you and me......no one else.......no other family... no other friend..........no one.......just you and me and our world............my happiness........my dreams would be the first on your list........Meri kya Galti thi Samrat?? Ki maine tumse...sirf tumse pyar kiya....aur aaj bhi karti hoon...aur shayad pahle se kahin zyada... and came close to Samrat and held his hand.

Samrat was shocked.......Sheena had not changed at all............it was still........ I !! ......Me !! .........Myself !!

He just looked at Sheena as she was talking........the tears were still there... but,now.......now , Samrat clearly knew what to do........he just let her talk...........

Sh - "Main hamesha se jaanti thi....GUNJAN ke dil mein tumhare liye 1 special feeling thi.........I knew she loved you......but , when I asked her, she denied. whatever I did later was to ensure that I got my love.....I just did not want to lose you, Samrat...........I loved you............I still do.........we can yet be together..........we can still have that life I dream of even today....we still can.......... Aur....tum nahin jaante Samrat..aaj main tumhen Gunjan se bhi zyaada pyar karti hoon.......Itna pyar jitna tum soch bhi nahin sakte....."

Sheena tried to hug Samrat....she moved her step....But Samrat pushed her away.....He said with anger...
 
S - ENOUGH!!!!!!!! That's enough SHEENA............I don't believe this..........I was actually  feeling guilty for what had happened????? I actually felt I was wrong. No.....No way......Main kabhi Galat nahin tha..........Tum mein koi changes nahin hain, Sheena..........Tum kabhi change nahin ho sakti.......people like you never change.....It still is your dreams. Your life........not Our........

But,my Chashmish......it was always Samrat...........his happiness.........his life..............his family.......his friends.Aur tumne abhi kya kaha...Tum mujhe Chashmish se zyada pyar karti ho.....meri chashmish se zyada....?? How dare you compare yourself  with my Chashmish....?? Tumhen pata bhi hai?? Pyar kise kahte hain?? Pyar ko samajhna hai toh Chashmish ko dekho.......Usne kabhi apne baare mein socha hi nahin. Sirf meri khushi ke liye apni khushi ki care nahin ki.....Mujhse pyar karte hue bhi sirf hum donon ke liye khud ko mujhse alag kar diya........meri friendship bhi break ki usne......she never tried to own me... she never tried to save her love...she set it free...........and maybe that is why today she is with me....and you are not.

Tumne socha bhi kaise ki...Tum meri life mein Chashmish ki jagah logi....Aur hum saath mein 1 new life start kar sakte hain?? Meri zindagi mein Chashmish ki jagah koi nahin le sakta......Koi bhi nahin...Kyunki uske bina toh meri zindagi hi nahin hai....
Main apni Chashmish se bahot pyar karta hoon......Apni zindagi se bhi zyada... Aur tumhen yeh baat samajhni hogi....
and pointed his finger at her angrily.


Sh - Sam......Samrat...!! Please meri baat toh.........

S - Nahin Sheena ab tumhari  koi baat nahin sunoonga......ab main boloonga.... aur sunogi tum...........

Chashmish meri life thi......hai aur hamesha rahegi..........usse alag hone ka main soch bhi nahi sakta ......uske liye sirf meri khushi important hai........aur meri life main chashmish ki happiness sab se zyaada important hai.....issiliye... sirf uski khushi ke liye maine Mom ko ek chance diya hai.....

Sh - Aur meri Happiness ka kya Samrat?? Tumne mujhe koi chance kyun nahin diya...apni mistake rectify karne ka...??

S - Are U kidding me?? Tum mujhse kabhi Pyar nahin karti thi Sheena....Main tumhara liye sirf 1 Trophy tha,Jise tum GUNJAN se jeetna chahti thi...Aur kaun se pyar ki baat kar rahi ho tum?? Jab tum Jail mein mujhse milne aayi....Maine tumhaari aankhon mein pyar nahin dekha...Unn aankhon mein koi dard  nahin tha
,Unme sirf 1 happiness thi....Victory ki happiness .Tum meri takleef se khush ho rahi thi...aur isse tum pyar kahti ho...?? Sachha Pyar kya hai....? yeh shayad maine ussi Jail mein feel kiya.....meri Chashmish ki aankhon mein...jisme main apna dard mahsoos kar sakta tha....apni takleef ko uski aankhon mein dekh sakta tha.

Sh - Mujhe bhi bad feel hua tha Samrat...But, that time main sirf tumse naraz thi...so,....

S - Just Shut Up Sheena.Stop It.At least,mere saamne yeh Drama mat karo..
Accha hua aaj main tumhen drop  karne aaya..now ,I know your intentions..... and believe me when I say this Sheena........main kabhi bhi naa toh tumhara tha aur na kabhi ho sakta hoon ...........main hamesha se sirf Chashmish ka tha..........hoon aur rahoonga.....and for as long as I am alive.......no one can separate my chashmish from me.......N I MEAN IT........... NO ONE .......And,1 more thing....Kabhi hamare beech aane yaa humain separate karne ki sochna bhi mat......Kyunki....ab main woh pahle wala Samrat nahin hoon......Chashmish ko hurt karna toh door ki baat hai....aisa sochne waale ke saath main kya karoonga??  Yeh shayad mujhe bhi pata nahin hai.....so,stay away from our life......Its better for you....DO YOU  UNDERSTAND .....??
 

And Samrat sat in his car and drove off........leaving an angry Sheena behind........with her wild thought... (("Nahin Samrat......Understand toh ab tumhen karna hai......Gunjan ko toh tumse alag hona hi padega....tumhen mere paas wapas aana hi hoga Samrat.....Sheena ne Haarna nahin seekha.....Ab main bhi woh pahli waali Sheena nahin rahi....Jo itni asaani se tumhari zindagi se chali jaaoon....Main Yahaan dobara jaane ke liye nahin....tumhari zindagi mein apni jagah banane aayi hoon.Tumhen mera hona hoga Samrat.....By Hook or By Crook....main yah karoongi......agar Gunjan ke zinda rahte yeh nahin ho sakta.....toh uski Death ke baad toh ho sakta hai......Sorry Gunjan!..... But,Tumhein mere aur Samrat ke beech aane ki keemat toh chukani padegi....1 Badi keemat....))

and she went inside her house and made a call........

"Hey......you know what?????? I think I can help you..........you need to trust me........and I am sure...after some days.......we will get what we want.....?? tell you what.........why don't you meet me tomorrow at the club........we will discuss this in detail.........humain kaafi kuchh 'RIGHT' karna hai......woh sab kuchh jo 'WRONG' hai.....At least,Hamare liye.....Hamari Khushi ke liye...and most Important thing....Hamare Pyar ke liye.So,....bye then....see you tomorrow.

The person on the other side disconnected the call and picked up the frame which had a pic of........................GUNJAN !!

"I am sorry Gunjan........but ab main tumse zyaada door nahin reh sakta.....I want you........back in my life......just as I wanted you then..........you were supposed to be mine............only mine.............and you will be......... main tumhen itna pyaar karoonga......ki tum uss Samrat ko bhool jaaogi. B'coz...I know,ki duniya mein koi bhi tumhen mujh jaisa pyar nahin de sakta..
Aur ussi Pyar par hamari nayi Life ki beginning hogi....1 New Chapter ki beginning hogi.....Jismen sirf Hum donon honge......Sirf main aur Tum......Sirf Gunjan ...aur.......N E I L.

And Neil gulped down another glass of whiskey.........and holding Gunjan pic. close to his heart.........he passed out.........


              ---------------------------------------------


Samrat was driving home........and all he could think of was his Chashmish... the hurt in her eyes..............when he said he would drop Sheena home..... ((Yeh kya hogaya mujhse??????? Maine Chashmish ko hurt kiya????????? Aur meri chashmish........woh toh kabhi nahin kahegi ki woh hurt huyee hai......but, ab aur nahin.........Chashmish ko sab kuchh, ghar jaate hi bata doonga. Bata doonga ki, Main kabhi usse hurt karne ki soch bhi nahin sakta.....Bata doonga ki, Sheena kya chahti hai.....Bata doonga ki...Main usse kitna pyar karta hoon.....))

Samrat reached home and rushed upstairs........as he entered the room.....he saw Gunjan curled up......her knees close to her stomach and  her hands clutching her knees...her cheeks tear stained and she was fast asleep..........

Samrat just kept looking at her.........inspite of her tears stained cheeks....... Chashmish looked so beautiful......... He kept staring at her for a long time......till the cool breeze brought him back to reality....... It was then that he realized...........maybe she was feeling cold......so he covered her with a blanket.........and sat next to her..........he moved his hands towards her cheeks to wipe her tears, but stopped midway..........he did not want to disturb her sleep.........

He got up and went to change...........when he returned, he saw that Chashmish had turned to the other side..........

He also slept.....well tried to sleep...... What he did not know was that his Chashmish was unable to sleep too.......Both with their backs to each other were thinking..........

G - ((Samrat shayad ab bhi mujhse naraaz hai......issiliye bina kucchh kahe so gaya..........I am sorry, Samrat..........Please mujhe maaf kar do.....Please! Mujh par angry ho...toh mujhe daanto......but, at least kuchh toh kaho.....Main tumhen hurt nahin dekh sakti Samrat....Oh God! main kya karoon....??Ya.. Kya Sheena phir se hamari zindagi mein aa gayi hai....Kya Samrat bhi....?? ))

and she shut her eyes.......tears still flowing.......

S - ((Chashmish.......mujhe maaf kar do..........I should have spoken to you before going to drop Sheena off.........tumhen yun rota dekh mujhe bilkul accha nahin lagta........I M Sorry Chasmish...But,Main kal sab clear kar doonga.........I promise.....I promise,ki kal ke baad hamare zindagi mein kuchh bhi bad nahin hoga...hum hamesha saath honge Chashmish..FOREVER...!!)) 



*12 midnight
:

As Samrat and Gunjan were lost in their thoughts........the clock struck 12...Samrat glanced at clock.....the date showed 14th Feb....."Valentines Day"........today was "Valentines Day"..............the day of Love.......The day of Lovers.........the day to celebrate love.......what better day than this to resolve this horrible issue between them..........Samrat smiled............
(( Aaj ka din Chashmish ke liye bahot special hoga........main karoonga isse special meri chashmish ke liye........Valentine Day....Kal yeh Day sirf humare liye hoga Chashmish.....kal hamari saari differences ka end hoga Chashmish...........))


Gunjan
looked at clock by her bedside.......and saw the date......Valentines Day......and she resolved.......
(( Aaj ka din hamare liye sirf happiness layega, Samrat.........main tumse sorry kahoongi...har uss galti ke liye jiski wajah se tum hurt hue...aur promise bhi karoongi.......ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaye..........tumse ab koi baat kabhi hide nahin karoongi.....Hum kal phir saath honge Samrat....Pahle ki tarah....Kyunki, main jaanti hoon.....tum zyada der tak apni Chashmish se naraaz nahin rah sakte....Kabhi nahin....))

Both had a smile on their faces as they said in their mind.............

S - (( Happy Valentines Day........Chashmish.....!! ))

G - (( Happy Valentines Day........Samrat......!!  ))


But ,would that happen???  Would SaJan be able to clear their misunderstandings?? Would Samrat be able to make this Valentines day special for her...... or would the trio of SHEENA........Mom....and NEIL manage to separate these two "Januable" soul mates??????

                                                                     [[To Be Continued...]]


                                
  SmileHAPPY VALENTINES DAY !!Smile

StarStarStarWe take this opportunity in thanking all our readers for their wonderful Support and Appreciation.......but, most of all for patiently following our efforts at writing this FF. So this is an apology to all our wonderful readers that due to the storyline limitations we are unable to post Valentines Day's scenes today...........however this part onwards till Part 19/20 will be Valentine's Special Part.

We have dared to adopt a new style of writing from Part 16.....this update will be based on time..........each sequence will be written under a time slot (Clock Wise)........so the updates will be a bit detailed.......though not easy to write.........it has been possible because we knew our lovely readers are always with us......to comment and criticize....... Smile

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Part 17 - 20th Feb.2011
Part 18 - 23th Feb.2011
Part 19 - 26th Feb.2011
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