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WITH YOU ALWAYS -A SaJan SS {COMPLETED} (Page 33)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SwaNia_1

Originally posted by SajanRox11

Hi SwaNia! I like that name..
anyway getting to the point..
SORRY! I havent cmmented on part 6, 7 & 8!!
I read all the parts now.. Actually I hv been very busy these days so didnt get time..
But reallyy you guys have done a fab jOb and im in love wid this SS!! Superbb!!
And Soham! Awesome work.. I loved the theme song!
Hmmm.. Kya kahu! surprise Anniversary party thi.. ki shocking Anniv party!
Both NEIL & SHEENA! omgg!! zaroor kuchh bohot bada one waala hai! and who is this who texted Indira.. it was sheena ryt?
God knws.. Im very excited for the furture story!
Plz continue sooon!
Will wait for the next update!
AWESOME job!
Love youu Both!!
Thank u so much Manji for ur lovely comment .......actually was waiting for ur comment eagerly ....afterall u r a born writer n u better know how we r keeping our story......i m glad that u liked our very Frst SS .......ur comments mean alot to us.....Thank U so much....
 
you and your bron writer! LOL!
Sorry made you wait so much yaar! Actually was very busy the past week!
But I genuinely love this SS!
Goog going guys! Superb!

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 8:42am | IP Logged
Hi SwaNia ! Hey, Totally Rocking Updates.First I want 2 say Sorry 4 my very late REPLYEmbarrassed U both R too Good writers Yaar! Definitely , Its not simple STORY IDEA but, U both are carrying so beautifully.
and,I M sure.....Next Parts bhi Up to the Marks honge. U presented very well the NEIL-SHEENA combo. I M waiting 4 Your Next Update.I think Next day,It will Be Come. And,THANX 4 all THANXEmbarrassed
But, remember always.....Its totally Your Creation.


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- Thanx GUNJAN 4 appreciating this Story Idea.SmileBut,Its out and out SwaNia hard work.Clap U can call "Team Work".And,Please! If U find , any Fault OR Lacks in Story Line Please Criticize Us.Criticism is always better 4 GroW*H.And,U know I love Critics & criticism.Embarrassed


-S O H A M.

               



Edited by SHAMSHIR-MJHT - 26 January 2011 at 9:02am

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 8:43am | IP Logged
SwaNia........wonderful track.........I had read all the 8 updates at a stretch.....loved it so much. Looking forward for sajan masti & romance.

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SHAMSHIR-MJHT

Hi SwaNia ! Hey, Totally Rocking Updates.First I want 2 say Sorry 4 my very late REPLYEmbarrassed U both R too Good writers Yaar! Definitely , Its not simple STORY IDEA but, U both are carrying so beautifully.
and,I M sure.....Next Parts bhi Up to the Marks honge. U presented very well the NEIL-SHEENA combo. I M waiting 4 Your Next Update.I think Next day,It will Be Come. And,THANX 4 all THANXEmbarrassed
But, remember always.....Its totally Your Creation.


@GUNJAN
- Thanx GUNJAN 4 appreciating this Story Idea.SmileBut,Its out and out SwaNia hard work.Clap U can call "Team Work".And,Please! If U find , any Fault OR Lacks in Story Line Please Criticize Us.Criticism is always better 4 GroW*H.And,U know I love Critics & criticism.Embarrassed


-S O H A M.

Hey Soham .............I agree This is out n out A team work....and a Rocking team work........U all have done a wonderfull Job........ClapClap...and dear off course agar Criticism hua And If there is some fault I will definately Tell All of U..........SmileYaa I know U love Criticism very muchSmileAnd I agree Criticism helps us 2 grow in life and rectify our all mistakes in every field of lifeSmile..

Love Gunjan...

               

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
aweosmeeee updt loved it hate sheena loved sajan bonding continue soon

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SHAMSHIR-MJHT

Hi SwaNia ! Hey, Totally Rocking Updates.First I want 2 say Sorry 4 my very late REPLYEmbarrassed U both R too Good writers Yaar! Definitely , Its not simple STORY IDEA but, U both are carrying so beautifully.
and,I M sure.....Next Parts bhi Up to the Marks honge. U presented very well the NEIL-SHEENA combo. I M waiting 4 Your Next Update.I think Next day,It will Be Come. And,THANX 4 all THANXEmbarrassed
But, remember always.....Its totally Your Creation.


@GUNJAN
- Thanx GUNJAN 4 appreciating this Story Idea.SmileBut,Its out and out SwaNia hard work.Clap U can call "Team Work".And,Please! If U find , any Fault OR Lacks in Story Line Please Criticize Us.Criticism is always better 4 GroW*H.And,U know I love Critics & criticism.Embarrassed


-S O H A M.

               

Thanks, Soham. And yes.........team work it has been from part 1.

Edited by SwaNia_2 - 26 January 2011 at 7:09pm

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 2:54am | IP Logged

Hi Frndz,We have updated our SS..........do read and hit the like tab if you like the update ..... Please drop a Comment as it helps us improve.....

Our special thanks to SOHAM for helping us n making ths SS reach up to the expectations:
 
With love,
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PART -9

Neil gulped down the whiskey.........and kept staring at SaJan......they were greeting guests...........he noticed Samrat's hands never left Gunjan's waist......he was so protective about her........as if...........if he left her..someone would take her away.........well he was right !!!!!!!!!!!!

N - ..........Agar Gunjan meri hoti toh main bhi shayad yehi karta.........ek pal ke liye bhi usse alag nahin ho pata..........tum bahot lucky ho Samrat.........bahot lucky...........!!

Someone was hearing Neil speak out his mind..........and was planning something............a very evil plan was taking shape in that very party.........

I - Arre! Neil beta..........tum empty hand kyun khade ho? drink nahin liya tumne?

N - Nahin Aunty........main bas abhi ......

I - ( handing him a glass )..............Yeh lo.....tumhari friend Gunjan aur Samrat ki shaadi ki 1st anniversary ki celebration mein......

Neil looked at Mom and he smiled softly & accepted the glass.......

I - Toh tumhari film...........meri family ki story hai?? Samrat aur Gunjan ki story hai??? Ending kaisi hai???? Happy ya Tragedy.....End mein Separate toh nahin ho jaate, Woh donon?? if you want to ......otherwise koi baat nahin.....

N - Samrat aur Gunjan ko koi alag kar sakta hai kya????

1 other Voice came....and answered NEIL's Question,

Sh - Absolutely right, Neil..........Samrat aur uski chashmish ko koi alag nahin kar sakta.......maine try kiya tha.......aisi hi party di thi maine...........aur ........anjane mein maine Samrat aur Gunjan ko aur kareeb kar diya...........I actually brought them close........... Tab toh woh sirf friends the.........ab toh happily married hain........impossible hai unhen alag karna...........yaa shayad.......

I -I M Sorry! Beta....I think mujhe Sam ki taraf se tumse maafi mangni chahiye....Usne tumhare saath thik nahin kiya....But,Main....

Sh - No....No.... Its OK Aunty.I have no any Complains...Kyunki..mere paas...

N - Maine inke pyar ko kaafi kareeb se dekha hai........Unke beech ki understanding...and Faith....unke relationship ko 1 strong strength deta hai..Jise break karna.....

I - You both are RIGHT....... These 2 days I have seen my son go completely mad with anger.....itna gussa hota hai woh , jab koi Gunjan ko kuch kehta hai.......Gunjan ki taraf bas dekhana hota hai isse...........woh har baat samajh jaata hai........Kaise??????  Itna pyaar..... ki words ki zaroorat hi nahin hoti inn donon ko........I am impressed by my son's choice......

And the three were looking at SaJan...............Sajan had eyes for each other only...........the world ceased to exist for them.........With soft music playing and SaJan dancing to the tune .......Samrat continuing with his naughty behaviour and Gunjan blushing......they looked picture perfect...........Gunjan was happy..........she was on top of the world today............Samrat had made today very special for her .

Soon dinner was served and Neil was talking to Sheena while eating...........

N - Toh Sheena Tum Samrat ki X-Girl Friend ho.....??

S - Yaa...EX....(her voice was down)

N -
Phir aisa kya ho gaya jo...??

S - Jaane do koi aur baat karte hain.......she wants to change the topic.

N -OK...No Problem....Phir tumne modeling leave ki.............kyun?

Sh - After break-Up.....INDIA mein dil nahin lag raha tha...So,I went US and then Dad decided I had to learn more about our Business...........so management college it was and then Business mera passion ban gaya.......I am absolutely into in our Business.........And,Now I M here.

Gunjan joined them............

G - I M sorry Sheena ! Woh Samrat thoda.....

Sh - Its OK Gunjan...I know him........Tumhen Sorry kahne ki koi zaroorat nahin... maine really bad feel nahin kiya.....shayad uski jagah main hoti toh bhi waise hi react karti.

G - Oh...agar tumne bura nahin maana...toh Tumne kuch liya kyun nahin........ kya hua......Diet par ho?? OR Indian food pasand nahin aaya tumhen?

Sh - No.aisi baat nahin hain Gunjan..........food really bahot accha hai.....but, jet lag ki wajah se......I am not feeling so good............toh socha light food hi theek rahega........

Gunjan was surprised...........Sheena not speaking sarcastically........people do change......

G - Oh......aur Neil tum please ......Sorry! Main tum se thik se baat bhi nahin kar paayi....

N - Hey! I am ok Gunjan.......don't worry........ tum other guests ko attend karo......

G - Thanx...!!

As Gunjan left from there.........both Sheena and Neil could not help but stare at her... she looked so happy...........and they both felt...........only IF...........

The party ended and guests started leaving.............

As Neil was leaving.........

S - Thanks Dude...apne busy schedule mein se time nikal kar hamari happiness main shamil hone ke liye. Sorry Yaar! Tumse zyada baat hi nahin ho paayi...

N - Its OK Dude....I understand and really Party kaafi achhi thi...Itne dinon baad itne saare Friends se 1 saath milna hua.....I M really Happy.

S - Thanx Dude! waise humein apni happiness main kab invite kar rahe ho?

N - Kya matlab....Maine apni new Movie ke PREMIRE mein tumhein invite toh kiya hai...!! Gunjan ne bataya nahin??

S - Bataya hai Dude...But, main uss Happiness ki baat nahin kar raha.Yaar! Tum itni saari beautiful actresses se miltay ho....Unke saath kaam karte ho....koi toh pasand aayee hogi na tumhen?? Humne apni Marriage Anniversary mein tumhen bulaya...at least tum humain apni Marriage mein toh bulaao...(He said naughtily)

N - Nahin.....Aisa koi nahin hai.......Jisse main Marriage karne ki sochoon....Sabhi  tumhari tarah LUCKY nahin hotay Sam.....

S - I know dude..main bahot hi LUCKY hoon joh mujhe Chashmish mili....1 Angel ki tarah woh kab meri zindagi mein aayi aur meri Dhadkan ban gayi......mujhe pata hi nahin chala..

N - (interrupting him) I know........tum bahot lucky ho ki woh tumhen dobara mili............warna 3 years main toh.........

S - Nahin Neil.......hum kabhi alag hi nahin huye the.....Hum sirf ek dusre se door the but, hamara dil ek dusre ke paas tha.....Woh sirf mujhse naraaz thi...aur Naraaz bhi toh hum kisi khaas apne se hi hote hain !! Ek Doori.....

N - ......Jo Tumne door kar di..............janta hoon.......anyway......Mujhe ab chalana chahiye.......Thursday ko Premier par zaroor aana....Main tum donon ka wait karoonga.


And Neil left.........feeling sad ...........missing Gunjan. Samrat was lost in his own thoughts...........thinking about Gunjan............and missed that sad look on Neil's face.

Gunjan walked towards Samrat and smiled..........Samrat was waiting for her...........

As she came near him and was about to say something, Sam's mom and Sheena also reached there..........

I - Sam........Sheena ko main ghar drop kar deti hoon....she is not looking Good............

Sheena
  looked at Samrat...waiting for him to respond.......but Samrat looked through her...........

Sheena felt bad, but............she composed herself and said-

Sh -.....Toh Sam.....Sorry...!! Mr Shergill.........kal miltey hain ..........for  New beginning of our Relationship......

S - What???? (He reacted with anger)

Sh -I mean,Our new Relationship..as a Business Partners....Toh kal office mein miltey hain...aur work start karte hain............no time to waste.......Its a DREAM PROJECT of our Company,So,I don't want to take any chances.See you. Oh and BTW...Party bahot acchi thi.........

S - Anniversary Party !! ....... Miss Malhotra......First Wedding Anniversary Of Samrat AND Gunjan !

Sh - Of course........How can I forget..( she said sadly)...Anyway...Congrates for Your Anniversary...... Bye !!

Gunjan was surprised but Samrat was not impressed.


As they left the party , Sam's mom asked them to drive their NEW CAR....and said she would ask her driver to drive the other car home.
 
                               - The End of PARTY Sequence.- -------------------------------------------------------------------------


SaJan were in their new car.........but Samrat was lost..........thinking about something.......Gunjan  tried to start  a conversation....but Samrat was not paying attention to her........he was just nodding and trying to smile....but he knew his Chashmish would realize that he was upset. The whole drive was in complete silence........Gunjan was also in deep thought.

They reached home........and Samrat went straight up to their room.........Gunjan was worried........but she had to wait for mom to get home.

As mom came home..........Gunjan wished her Good Night and went upstairs. As Gunjan left........mom made a call ..........

I - Finally U came.Mujhe aapka message mil gaya tha.But,Main Party mein answer nahin kar sakti thi.Sab kuchh plan ke according hi ho raha hai.....But,I think U R right.Humain slowly steps lene honge....Jisse ki Samrat ko koi shak naa ho.....Aur accident toh suddenly hi hote hain... (she smiled with a very cruel expression)

 A voice on the other side said............"don't worry....this time koi failure nahin...........humein joh chahiye woh humein milega............I will be there, very soon...."                                


As Gunjan reached their room .....she saw the room was in darkness.She switched on the lights........

Samrat was sitting on the bed.........and he looked sad. Gunjan sat down beside him and touched his shoulder.........

G - (She said very softly) Kya hua Samrat? Kya soch rahe ho?

S - I don't know Chashmish....Why?? But,Yeh mujhse nahin hoga........main Sheena ke saath work nahin kar sakta....main yeh contract cancel kar doonga.... Kal hi main............

G -Kya tum aaj bhi usse miss karte ho , Samrat??

S -Chashmish......?? Tum jaanti ho ki main sirf tumse.....

G -..Main jaanti hoon Samrat....Tum sirf mujhse pyar karte ho.....aur main yeh bhi jaanti hoon ki tumne kabhi Sheena se pyar kiya hi nahin...woh sirf 1 attraction tha..... But, Others ?? Woh toh nahin jaante....woh kya sochenge??

S - Mujhe kisi ki parwah nahin hai.Tum mujhe Understand karti ho...yeh mere liye enough hai.....

G - Aur Board Of Directors ko kya Reason doge....??
No Samrat........Its totally  unprofessional Decision..........ab agar tum yeh Contract cancel karoge toh SHERGILL INDUSTRIES ka GOODWILL spoil hoga...........hamare saath koi Business deal karne se pehele sochega..........kya tum yeh chahte ho?
 

S - Par chashmish............Main Sheena ke saath kaise work kar sakta hoon?  Usne joh tumhare saath kiya woh main kabhi bhool nahin sakta.....I can't tolerate her.....

G - Main kab keh rahi hoon ki bhool jaao..........Par Samrat...har Incident ka 1 Positive side bhi toh hota hai....Yeh bhi toh sach hai ki , Sheena ne jo kiya.... Ussi wajah se tumne apni Real feeling ko realize kiya...tumhen Yeh  realise hua ki tum kissse pyar karte ho...!! Ho sakta hai agar..Sheena ne woh sab naa kiya hota toh......

S - .......Toh bhi hum saath hote Chashmish.....Kyunki , Sirf main jaanta hoon ki mere liye uss waqt tumse door rahna kitna mushkil tha....Shayad hi koi pal tha...jismen maine tumhen miss na kiya ho....( he was feeling sad)

G - She kept her hand on his hand and said ...I know Samrat....Toh hi main kah rahi hoon.... Sheena kabhi hamare beech nahin aa sakti.....

S - Lekin Chashmish.....

G - Ssshhhhh............. ( putting her finger on his lips) ..Samrat........I know,Tum kabhi bhi Professional aur Personal life ko Mix-Up nahin karoge......mujhe tum par pura bharosa hain......tum apni Personal  differences  ko iss project par haavi nahin hone doge.........nahin hone doge na???????

Samrat was looking at Gunjan.........and thinking in his mind....kitna bharosa hai tumhen mujhpar...Chashmish! ! I promise Chashmish... tumhara yeh bharosa main kabhi break nahin karoonga..........

And as if Gunjan read his mind, she said , " Tum mera bharosa kabhi nahin break karoge Samrat............I trust you Samrat ." and as she spoke  that smile...........that famous smile played on her lips.
 
Samrat moved closer to Gunjan......and Gunjan looked at him.........

Cupping her delicate face in his hands and he said , "Mera saath hamesha dogi na Chashmish!!..........mujhse kabhi alag mat hona............agar kabhi bhi mujhse koi galti ho....Tum mujhse naaraz hona...par kabhi chhod kar nahin jaana Chashmish....main nahin ji sakoonga tumhare bagair....and he kissed her forehead.

Gunjan closed her eyes....Samrat's touch was so heavenly...........

G - Nahin Samrat........main kahin nahin jaaoongi..............tumhare siwa mera hai hi kaun.....Jo mujhse itna pyar kare....Aur Ab toh sirf ek hi cheez mujhe tumse alag kar sakti hai Samrat...aur woh hai meri MAUT..... Samrat stopped her from saying anything  further and touched his forehead to her's...........

S - Marne ki baat mat karo.......Chashmish.......Maut bhi hamein alag nahin  kar sakti.......kyunki ,Chashmish ke bina toh samrat zinda hi nahin reh sakta naa..............

G - Jaanti hoon........tabhi toh keh rahi hoon....hum alag kabhi nahin ho sakte............Samrat.............main hamesha tumhare saath hoon........FOREVER.... (she said with teary ears)

And Gunjan hugged Samrat............. a passionate hug.....Samrat held her tightly...and slowly moved his face to face her. He cupped her face and moved his lips towards her lips..........culminating the night to a most blissful night in each others arms...........happy and content.........

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But was the next morning going to be so beautiful?????? Or was life going to turn upside down for this madly in love couple???? Was their peace going to be shattered by egoistic people?????? Only time will tell........

                                                                 
[[To B Continued.......]]


Next UPDATE Schedule
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Part 10 - 30th Jan. 2011 {First Look on P:36}
Part 11 - 02nd Feb. 2011
Part 12 - 05th Feb. 2011



Edited by SwaNia_1 - 30 January 2011 at 12:01am

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hi diBig smile.......im the first 2 comment.Shocked......im very happyDancing
 lovely updateHeart........just awesomeThumbs Up..........waiting for next  update.........Day Dreaming.


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