WITH YOU ALWAYS -A SaJan SS {COMPLETED} - Page 37

Mind blowing update dear.... Edited by snowwhite28 - 13 years ago

fantastic update...wonderful.............

hi😃.............thats excellent update👏.............im really very eager to know wats gonna happen now😍........plz cont soon😔...........luv u❤️...........🤗

Superb WORK done!

This update was genuinely OUT OF THE WORLD..

and Ill tell you why!

You showed us how Sheena felt!

that time she was a vamp..

But actually she must be feeling horrible..

I dont blame her, she knew gunjan loved sam and seeing samrat go wid gunjan everytime increased her insecurities..

Sheena is right at this point.. that she had asked them. but they didnt tell her how they felt.. so OBVIOUSLY she would hv to do this!

anywayy.. I just love how you'll are showing the problems..

One side NEIL and the other side SHEENA.. and on top INDIRA!

OMGG someone save our sajan!

AWESOMEE WORKK!!!

Love you guys for this update!

fabulous!

 

Amazinggggg and Lovely part guys ⭐️ ⭐️Fab work and SG scenes were awesome 😳Cont soon😃

Hey S3 ie SOHAM,Swati and adeen ie SONIA.........Wow!! my rocking friends What a fabulous update..Totally Mindblowing.....Superb👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏.........
Its so so good that I completely enjoyed reading and Imagining the scenes and track😍😍😍 ...............very well written update...👍🏼Ur story is progressing really well.......👏👏....

Presentation of every Update is really Good........I like the fact that u all use 2 colours while writing updates.....as using two colours while presenting story make it very easier for a reader to read and differentiate between dialogues ie conversation and  rest part of story ie thoughts etc....................presentation is really excellent S3👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...................

Dialogues are amazing and awesome.........I loved each n every Dialogue.....😊But I especially loved the Conversation between Sajan in the morning and the way Samrat hid the newspaper so that Gunjan doesnt read the news and get upset and the way samrat stood by gunjan when she found out what was written in the papers and sajan communicating thru eyes this part is very very GOOD......I loved this part👍🏼⭐️⭐️👏......................
liked gunjan conversation with neil the dialogues were good .....U showed really well a Strong and confident Gunjan.......who totally loves samrat and has immense confidence in her love and herself ................and the way she handled neil was very well written..............👍🏼👏.........this part was so well written that I could imagine a confident gunjan saying these words 2 neil ...😊😍...... awesome dialogues of neil and gunjan conversation👏...........................

Even Samrat n sheena dialogues and track was really very powerfull......................Loved it totally....But but one more thing Sheena acting this way is surprising 😕because In MJHt it was shown sheena was very selfish girl who thinks about herself only and she came between sajan knowing Gunjan loves samrat and She even knew before samrat knew himself that samrat loves gunjan...so sheena dialogues are good but totally confusing why she blaming samrat acc to sheena POV its Ok dialogues but Sheena acting like she was not 2 be blamed is confusing so ...so elaborate on why sheena acting this way when she betrayed samrat 5yrs back..I hope u didnt mind my suggestion S3

all together I loved each n every part of ur story ...........each track n story part is very well written n properly shown.........👍🏼⭐️⭐️👏..........................

As 4 Sam mom she is really a Witch😡...................Infact one suggestion from me elaborate on Samrats Mom witchiness..................show some more things regarding her devilish behaviour , some conversation , dialogues etc....without revealing the suspense who is working with sam's mom to seperate Sajan write some more details regarding Sam's Mom....................I hope U understand what I am trying 2 say here.......😉😊........................

Sorry if u minded my suggestion..........

Once again Soham, Swati and Sonia ie adeen totally powerfull and Stupendous n fantabulous Update............Story is really very good............Just Rocking👏........Well Done S3👏 3 cheers for u all 4 doing such awesome n amazing work👏👏👏.................

I just love reading ur Ss a lot.....................😊

Love ur friend
Gunjan😊😊.....................




👏Edited by 1gunjan7 - 13 years ago

sorry for late reply guys.... hey Swati and Saonia. Soham............. good work guys......👏👏

@ GUNJAN :- Totally Rocking REPLY Gunjan,as usual😆. This time, I can't reveal any thing. SwaNia knows better. Anyway,In my knowledge, Next 6 Part is Full Ready. I think,After 16th Update (17th Feb. 11).....your all Confusion would B clear. So,Wait & Watch.😆(My Fav. Line😉)  And,Thanx 4 appreciating Presenting Style.Yaa! I think,its easy 4 reading.

*And,YES ! Part-15,16,17,18 & 19 is VALENTINE DAY spl. .So,Don't miss it.😉
Edited by SHAMSHIR-MJHT - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SHAMSHIR-MJHT

@ GUNJAN :- Totally Rocking REPLY Gunjan,as usual😆. This time, I can't reveal any thing. SwaNia knows better. Anyway,In my knowledge, Next 6 Part is Full Ready. I think,After 16th Update (17th Feb. 11).....your all Confusion would B clear. So,Wait & Watch.😆(My Fav. Line😉)  And,Thanx 4 appreciating Presenting Style.Yaa! I think,its easy 4 reading.

*And,YES ! Part-15,16,17,18 & 19 is VALENTINE DAY spl. .So,Don't miss it.😉

Thanks 4 replying Soham dear🤗.............and WOW!! Valentine special Mazza aa gaya sunn kar 👏..I know totally rocking hoga VAlentine special Updates😉.......
and Meney toh kuch ask kiya nahi 😕kya honey wala hai etc etc..........😉SO WHY Say ur Fav Word WAIT N WATCH😉😆..........And Tumko kuch nahi pata......REALLY😉..................

I know my reply is Rocking ............Mein bhi rocking hoon tumhari tarhan thats why Rocking replied deti hoon..😉.But if my reply is rocking then why u laughing..........😡....and Ur comment says this time I cant reveal anything 😲PHELEY Kaun Sey Time Did u reveal the story update 2 me😲😆........OMG I am shocked by Ur Statement😲......So many time I have asked u U always gave same reply SWANIA Sey ask karo they know best😉😆😲😲do reply...😊................................

Gunjan😊...


Edited by 1gunjan7 - 13 years ago

nice one....
hv no words 2 describe sajan trust,faith n understanding.....
beautifully written......
thnx 4 pm.......