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|Love In 10 Days| AR - FF| Upd.Pg. 129 | (Page 83)

shininggal2008 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
OMG! Thats is such a creul Police. The part, AR part was so touching. I love them! Beside them, the police and the politician - screw them. Anyways, please comment as time permits.


jiyaa_m IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 May 2011 at 11:55am | IP Logged
nice one
KaJen_addiction IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 5:26am | IP Logged
nice part!
why is that parvant behind armaan's life? he is such a kameena!
poor armaanCry! i can't c him like this
i hope he is soon released from this trap!
curious 4 next part
cont soon
unknown. IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 9:10pm | IP Logged
omg poor armaan :(
still nice part
cont sooon

harneet <3
ksgforever10 Goldie

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
"hello mumbai police station ! uh kaun, ji, accha, haji, arrey shahab ji "The policemen said to prithviraj.He looked out of his file.


"uhhh ji woh kisi rahul ka phone, kehti hai ko sahab ji se baat karna chahati haii..woohi jine hum paanch din pehle lae the"He said.

It was not allowed! For any prisinor to talk to any of his/her relatives on the phone.But today when it came to armaan, he allowed.The sub-inspector called armaan and he came out as if a dead weak skeleton.His clothes dirty with black spots all over it, shirt was tonned, he was walking unconciously.

"tumhaara phone"Prithviraj said as he handed over the phone to him.Armaan looked up at him, prithviraj could see the innocence in his eyes.He proceeded his hand and took the phone.


"hello...armaan??mai..mai rahul."Rahul said with a cheerful voice, as he knew that armaan must be depressed, so he was just giving a try to lighten up the mood a bit.But unfortunately he failed, armaan never replied, not because of his weakness, but because of shame, shame of the crime which he even never commited, it was obvious, that he would feel ashamed and embarassing in front of his friends who think that he has RAPED a young girl, that too a school going girl!Anyone would feel shame, if this sort of an incident took place.

"..."Armaan never replied.But rahul could sense his presence and so he decided to continue.

"uhhh armaan mai jaanta hoo that ur there, aur mai ye bhi jaanta hoo ki kyun tum meri baat ka jaawab nahi de rahe and hum mein se kisi se bhi baat nahi kar rahe, I understand armaan, but trust us, hum sab koh tujhpe poora bharosa hai, hum sab jaante hai ki tu ye kabhi kar hi nahi sakta..armaan???armaan???"Rahul thought that atleast now armaan would reply but now armaan was in tears.He lost his senses and became unconcious, and just uttered a single, not-so-audible word.

""He broke the word into peices, just like his heart was, distructed !

"ha..."Rahul said a bit loud to indicate that he couldn't hear what he said.


Now, finally he could hear his words, a simple, small yet the most painful word right now for armaan and somewhere around for rahul as well.

"armaan, riddhima bilkul theek hai tum chinta mat karo...aur ha...armaan..ab meri baat dhyaan se suno...we are with you...we have sued the the politicial parvant, his son...his son raped the girl, but he bloody framed you for this crime, which you even not commited"

Armaan now gained back a bit of his conciousness.And so rahul continued.

"we have got the permission from the coart for you bail, do din baad hamare pehla case ki ladai hai, to tabtak you'll be free, and don't you worry, I'l be there in next 10 minutes."

A smile came to his face.

"kaisssee????"Armaan questioned.

"Armaan I am coming right now, to bring you back home, so chill dude"He said in the most raoool type way he could.

"are you...are you serious???"He oozed his eyes out.

"ohh yes man I am..chal ab inspector ko phone de."Rahul said.

Armaan gave the phone to prithviraj ,he took it and they had a argumental conversation for a while.

After sometime, almost half an hour, Rahul came, and saw armaan.

"bro"rahul whispered and hugged him.When he did so, he could feel armaan responding back to his hug, but he could also feel the weakness in his body.

He broke the hug.

"are you fine dude????did they said anything to you???did they hit you???tell me armaan"Rahul showered a bunch of questions on armaan.

"relax rahul, mai...mai theek hun!"He said and passed a weak smile.Rahul proceeded towards the table and started talking to the inspector.Meanwhile, he could see, that armaan's eyes had been struggling for someone, he kept on looking at the door.

"armaan"Rahul called out his name.He looked at him.

"she is at home!"He kind of whispered in a way in which it was audible to armaan.Armaan for the first time smiled like the 'ARMAAN's-DIMPLED-SMILE'.

After a while of convo rahul came back with a billion dollar smile.

"chale???"He gestured a cute fattu joke.

"ohhh yes your majesty"|HEY !! HE WAS HAPPY AFTERALL|

But something striked and just when rahul stepped forward, he turned him back.

Armaan looked at him and glanced down.

"uh woh rap..."He was interuppted.

"shhh...abhi ek padega na tab akkal aegi chal be!"Rahul said to him, and dragged him.

Armaan smiled silently.





She rushed to open the door, her feets ran like a swan towards the destination, the excitement inside her heart, was immense and completely undescribable, the love, was extraordinary, she was dying badly thr' these 5 whole days, she had missed him.And finnaly she opened the door.

"armaan"She whispered.

He looked at her with twinkling eyes.

"lo inka shuru ho gaya"Rahul said in a funny way and came in as in insulted un-welcomed guest! Poor rahul !He was not even welcomed properly.

She took one step forward and hugged him tightly, as if throwing out all of his aggression and pain she had to go thr' these few devasted days.She hugged him fully, and this time she never cried, because she never wanted to, she was smiling like a fairy.As soon as RIDDHIMA hugged ARMAAN.He was taken aback, such a sudden reaction, ofcourse armaan also was missing her like hell, but still, he expected a bit of yelling, scolding, arguments and then finally a cute patch-up.AS USUALLY!

His hands moved a bit slow, he touched her lower back with weak hands, and then slowly he tightned his grip and dragged his hand up, below her shoulders, feeling her.Feeling like HAVING HER!


After 2 hours

1:30 am in the night

The gang enjoying in the living room, having fun, chatting, giggling, flirting, and loving!

Armaan was back to normal but still, being in a box having bars, locked without food, water, friedship and love.Filled with grief and pain, sadness, anguish, devasteded, and depressed.It was like hell for armaan.But now he forgot it, as soon as he entered his originaly world filled with fun, love, trust and most importent friendship, he came back to normal..laughing, cracking jokes, flirting and masti.

"arrey yr armaan waha pe toh tujhe bohot home sickness hui hogi na???"Atul asked stupidly.Anjali, muskaan and rahul glared at atul for aksing such a stupid and hurting question for armaan.

Armaan glanced at atul and looked down, his disastorous five days days flashed in front of his eyes.But soon this flash was interupted.Riddhima came in front of armaan and smiled encouragingly.

"nahi atul...mujhe patah hai...armaan ko home sickness nahi..balki apni riddhima ki sickness hui hogi...the RIDDHIMA-SICKNESS!"she said funnily.

Armaan looked at her and glanced at everybody.They were taken aback by riddhima cracking a joke at a moment where before she used to cry and all.They all started laughing.

The old gang came back.They became ALIVE.

But the real test of theur friendhsip, trust and love will be tested exactly after two whole days.


Edited by ksgforever10 - 11 May 2011 at 10:34am

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ksgforever10 Goldie

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged

Heyooo guyzzz...

I finally updated !
Tom I have my science exam, but I finished up with stuides and wrote up this part!  A big one!=)
So plzzz do comment this time and wish me luck because I love science and wanna score good in it!
love you all !
[PM's later]

Edited by ksgforever10 - 11 May 2011 at 10:37am

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AMMY12 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 11:18am | IP Logged
very nice and cute part.
Thanx 4 d pm.

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ilyasesha Goldie

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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
sorry for sooo lte rep ...
bt it waz juzz awessmmm

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