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|Love In 10 Days| AR - FF| Upd.Pg. 129 | (Page 78)

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Posted: 18 April 2011 at 9:23pm | IP Logged
hey der just read ur ff..
must say its reaalyy good/... all the parts are great so far...continue soooonnn
nd  thanks fr de pms..sry fr l8 rlpy was busy

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
NOOOOOOOOOO Samicaaa!!! YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO US!! NO NO NOOOO How could ARMAAN,rape a Girl? God Its making me cry! This is shoocking! Pleaseee update soon<3
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yeh bohut hi ghatiya blame hai yaar
armaan mar kar bhi aisa nahi karega
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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged

oh mannn SAmSO!;)

I luvvv ur writing plzzz become a writer wen u grow up yrrr!!!aur agar tu ni bani na yr mai tera khoon kar doongu aur saath mein roadies waale suchit ko bi bol dunga...but srsly man hats offf 2 u!:)
I luv d way u show romance drama n ol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
plzzz upd d next part soon!:D
 
 
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Posted: 24 April 2011 at 2:56pm | IP Logged

no...

mera armi aisa kabhi nahin karega...

update soon..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
PART 20
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"Uhh...sir"The sub-inspector exclaimed.

"hmmm"Mr.prithviraj sharma, the senior-most inspector of the Mumbai Police Station.

"sir, aapko nahi lagta ki, jis doctor ko humne giraftaar kia hain wo bek..."Before he could complete, Prithviraj banged the file, turned around in rage, and said silently yet hardly.

"shutt up, it is none of your business..."He said.

"uhh..yesss...yesss sir!Sorry sir!"He said and left as soon as he could to save his life.

Something pinched Inspector Prithviraj, he took a glass of water and drank it.Then he looked at armaan behind the bars sleeping like a beggar on the cold floor without having dinner.

"no...no.."He said to himself but then suddenly the phone rang...

*TRING*

*TRING*

"hello, Mumbai police station, inspector prithviraj speaking!"He siad proudly praising his position, not so well-deserved!

"hello, prthviraj, hows it going???"

"ohhh sir, yahh sir, he is behind the bars as you said!"He answered like a five year old little boy.

"and what about chirag khanna!"

"Done sir, baakio ko bhanak tak nahi hoga ki uski kab maut hui aur kaise sir!"He said.

"good, tumhaare paise kal subha tak pohoch jaange!"

"ok sir!"

"uhhh by the way, Dr.armaan mallik, is he OK?"

"uhhh actually sir he's fine!"Inspector replied.

"well, that is not a good news for me, I want him to die!Got that!"

His voice created shiver in prithviraj's body.His fingers started to shiver.

"wha..."He was interupted.

"I want him DEAD!"The voice opposite prithvi raged in red blood anger.

"dead???"

As soon as questioned this question he saw that the phone was disconnected from the other side.

His hands started to shiver, the old phone slipped from his hands.He thought to himself.

"a...am I doing...w...wrong???"He said to himself.

Just when the sub-inspector banged at the bars which broke armaaan's half-sleep.

"Uhh"Armaan blurred.

"arrey khaana toh kha lo"The sub-inspector barked in his local hindi accent.

Armaan just gave a look to the sub-inspector and held his head back.

"mai jaanta hu riddhima...tumne bhi kuch nahi khaaya hoga..."He whispered in his dead heart.

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"please riddhima khaana kha le, toone..toone subha se kuch bhi nahi khaaya yr"..mus requested riddhima.

"nahi muski...mujhe...mujhe bhook nahi hain!"She said and agains started staring the luminous starts thinking that maybe it will light up her life.

Muski knew that she was upset about armaan, so for tonight she literally begged riddhima saying that she feels lonely at the house so she needs some company for a while, listening to thing of course our soft-heartened riddhima melted and agreed, but still THE-SMILE never came on her flower like face.

Muski sighed a sigh of dissapointment.

"Armaan...mai..mai jaanti hu ki tumne bhi kuch nahi khaaya hoga!"She whispered to her dead hear, closed her eyes, and let out a small tear explore to the world.

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The tensed inspector sat back on his chair and sighed.

"How...How can I kill him???He in not the accused person, and the person who has been accused is now dead!"He said to himslef trying to find out the answers of his puzzle.

"I have to do this, but is money more precious than his life, I mean afterall he is a doctor, he is the person who saves other people's life and I?...Just for 1 crore rupees, I killed the real accused person and arrested this kind guy!I feel disguisting!But what do I do now???If I don't lay down to MR.PARVANT's orders then he'll kill me and my family, what should I do now???But the question is that why does this famous politician MR.PARVANT's wants this nobody to be dead, what harm could thus creature had done to such wealthy politician?I..I cannot..cannot kill him!He...he...uhhh...But what can I do now, I have done the wrong..ALREADY!"

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Hey guys so I have finally updated my FF!
So please do do dooo comment and I want big comments and likes!=)
cz trust m they make me smile like hell!:)
I feel my work appreciaed.
So please do comment and press the LIKE button!
I know it is a smallupdate but watta do man, EXAMS!=(
But promise next time, it will be a bigger update!
Thankyou to all!
Hope you all enjoyed reading this pasrt!<33
muahzzz!
 
samica(karan's angel & miss.ksgian)
Xoxo


Edited by ksgforever10 - 29 April 2011 at 12:38pm

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Posted: 29 April 2011 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
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Awhhh...Armaaan!!! I felt like crying!! it sucks to see him so helpless..!!!!
But you nearly made me cry here..!!! CryCry HAte seeing Armaan like tht!!!
Please do cont soon though!!!
 
love,
Sanaa


Edited by ARfanSanaa - 29 April 2011 at 12:45pm
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shocking part yaar.
Update nxt part soon.
T.c.

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