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|Love In 10 Days| AR - FF| Upd.Pg. 129 | (Page 48)

shiv-sunaina Groupbie

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
hey sweety..i knw ridzi loves arman a lot but doing such thing will hurt him more ..i hope arman zyada na dante use...but it was realy sweet surprise..PLZZZZZZZZZZ no more seperation nw ab do dilo ko ek kardo jaldi..n ya plz add me to ur PM list

punamluvshilpa Goldie

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 10:49am | IP Logged
hey samica...most welcome back dear!Big smile.......and awesome part!!..mindblowing!!...kya tum janti ho,maine mere blog friends ko bhi tumhare ish ff ke link diye ,aur unhe tumahra ff bahut pasand aaya....but bahut short part likhi ho...aise achanak khatam ho jane se thore hi maza aata hai...plz .write a long u..
mrs-sr IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 March 2011 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
Hi Dear
I read all the parts till now
And i must say this is just mindblowing
Love the way u describe everyting.
AR scenes are too good so sweet
Im happy they are back together
You are a very good writer
Update soon
And PM me.

chelsi Senior Member

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 9:26am | IP Logged
continue soooooooooooooooooon
ksgforever10 Goldie

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Would specially like to thank ANAMIKA2010...for her sweet gesture,love you anamika..luv u all..thanks a lot for all your aplomb and tremendous comments...they were stunning...
so here goes the next part...
"RIDDHIMA how dare you this..tumhaare..tumhaare dimaag toh kharaab nahi ho gaya hai.."he fumed in and some possesiveness expression on his face.

"lekin wohhh mai...acc...s...i meaa....mai..."she blubbed inside her own mouth as she has never seen armaan this much angry ever.definatey she woule be scared because armaan was already quite upset without nikita and then when he comes back with a banner of "MOOD OFF" on his face then what can she expect.but yah that's also true she never knew about NIKI's case as well.many thoughts were racing in riddhima's mind,she was hell confused that how can armaan be so angry at her like this,is it her fault that she did so much for him???is it her fault that she wanted them to be together again???is it her fault that nikki left armaan???waise i don't know about the rest but the answer to the last question is proxicitly "YES".

she was diving deeper and deeper in her mind in those thoughts but she never knew that in the real world armaan is getting angrier and angrier by each second.she was confused is armaan worried about her or is it something else???

"riddddhimaaaaaaaaa"he pulled her towards him,there body crashed and he held her from her hands tightly.

"aahhh armaaan...ahh"she shouted in pain,but still armaan never realized that what SHIT he's doing.

she was trying to get free from armaan's tight and hurting extreme hold,but after sometime she saw armaan staring at her with red,angry,fuming and boiling eyes.she stood their like a statue.

"riddhima"he said with anger,his vocal cords were vibrating the sound with some anger mixed in them tragedicily.

what riddhima did,did it actually deserved this much scold,hatred,anger...???she thought to herself.even armaan never knew why is he acting so angry at such small thing.he was behaving like a mad crott,shit,basterd. and not to be mentioned in the MALE category but like a bITCH.he actually over-reacted.

AFTER,armaan called riddhima's name she looked up with closed and mugged eyes as if some HITLER is just going to kill her.she was very much scared,she could have protested because even she knew that what she has done does not deserves this much scoldness but still she never did any actions or expression against what armaan was doing.

"I....I'm..sor.."she bulbbed.but,before she could complete armaan pushed her back and she landed on the floor with her head injured. as it hit the stone show-peice.he went away and entered his room,shut the door and.........????that's it,riddhima could see this much only.she looked at armaan's slowly smudging figure in the air.after when she was alone in that room and was lying on the floor,she looked at her palm which had turned RED,she then touched her injured place on her head with her delicate fingers.the pain she was going thr' was not because of the injuries but because those injuries were given by her own love...ARMAAN...!!!


next day


riddhima,anjali,rahul,muskaan were standing there gossiping,they were aware of the fact that nikki has gone but not of AR.riddhima was curiously waiting for her HURTING love.she still was not angry with armaan cause by now she understood that's something wrong had happened.she never knew about nikki,and she was not at all interested in the SHIT talkings of muskaan and the gang but one line spoken by muski immediately strutched her attention.

"yaaar..I feel bad about armaan"she said with a fake sad smile.

"yaaahh yaar,they looked so happy together..."anji said too with the same expression.

"what...k..kk...kyaaa hua use..he is upset..kyu..aisa kya"she lost her patience and senses,she was desperate to know what has happened!!!

"what????u don't know about it???"rahul barked.

"about what...batao na...kyaa"she again started shouting like a child.

"nikki...nikki has left armaan forever,they had a fight yesterday night"he said.

"yahh,hamare lie toh theek hai coz it was only 10-15 days since we'v known nikki but armaan...their friendhsip was like eternal,what happened last night was had se zada shocking!"muskaan said.

SHE was shocked..S-H-O-C-K-E-D!!!she closed her eyes and saw the last night's scene flashing with the gray-scale,she saw armaan hitting her and shouting at her,a lonely tear was fighting with her closed eyes as it wanted to explore to this world,but riddhima never wanted to cry in front of them.she just wanted to run and hug armaan and take all his pain into her.


ATTENTION,everybody stood there like a statue,arrey bhai,after all it was gabbar.riddhima opened her eyes.infact teary eyes.but no one noticed as all of them were busy abbusing GABBAR.

Dr.kirti gave duties to everyone...

"................and dr.armaan aap"(then she realized that dr.armaan is not here)"dr.armaan...kaha hai..where is he???"

riddhima's eyes first stared at gabbar and then at a figure entering sanjeevani,from far that figure seemed like a live dead body.he came running,he saw riddhima and said nothing.she thought that armaan is definately upset with her last night's actions and also mainly about nikki.she thought that how could she hurt armaan again on his injured heart.

"sorry mam...woh actually mai...uhh.."his eyes were dazy and so dr.keerti understood that he is not well.

"it's ok but make sure that aaenda se aisa na ho..general ward..."she said calmly.

"yes mam"he nodded with the head down.

everybody left for their duties and only armaan and riddhima were left.riddhima was standing with nothing in her hand and mind...armaan was feeling hell EMBARASSING so he never spoke anything and started searching for nothing thr' the pages of the file.

"uhhh..armaam"she gained the courage and spoke.

he was listening very attentively,but never looked up at her.he thought she must be angry with his behaviour last night or she wanted to shout at him or anything else but what she said was the most unexpected.

"armaan,tumne subha khaana toh khaaya tha na,aur pakka raat ko late soe hoge,tabhi aakhe dhank se khol hi nahi paate"she said in a low volume but still he could her.he was shocked,still she cared for armaan after his DOG like behaviour with her,he could see the red marks on her hand because of him and also the bandage that she has applied on her head.he was feeling hell guilty,he wanted to gulp down some saliva but was so chocked that he could even not do that so!!!.even after so much bad time last night she was still not concerned about him forgiving her,but was concerned about HIM,his HEALTH.he couldn't even gaze at her properly,he was ashamed of himself,his behaviour,his attitude and most importantly his uncontrolable ANGER!!!

he closed down the file threw it on the reception table and ran away from there,she still thought that armaan was hell upset with her.



he wanted to kill himself,the way he hurted her not only emotionally but also PHYSICALLY last night,those scenes were flahsing everwhere,he came down running on the stairs and sat down,he turned his head the other way and saw something...

****"ohoo armaan,tume itna gussa kyun hote ho,chalo sorry.."

"basket,how dare he,usne tumhaare saath flirt kia and u were ok wid it,he was literaaly touching you and his dirty gaze and the he..."he kept on barking like a concerned dog.she stared at him as no one can stop when dr.armaan is barking.but when it came to the limits,she took armaan into a tight kiss,like HEAVENLY but hard kiss.he was shocked but then gave in himslef"***

this membory flashed inf ront of him,now the old AR were standing inf ront of the sad Armaan.he broke down badly,his shirt went wet with his dreadfull tears,he was crying as if someone had just killed him,his heart felt heavy,he felt like a sick jackass.

"ARMAAN"a sweet voice trembled and reached his ears.

HE looked back.................................

to be continued..........


HEY guys I go so many likes but so much less comments,please do comment this time as well,luv u all and thanks once again to the people who pressed the LIKE button and commented...luv u all...hope you liked this part as well...Smile
samica(karan's angel & miss.ksgian)

Edited by ksgforever10 - 23 March 2011 at 1:46pm

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 1:55pm | IP Logged

yayyy 1st one to comment
omg dis part was awesome :)
cont soon

harneet <3

Edited by Harneetluvesksg - 23 March 2011 at 3:54pm

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
Great part :)) cont soon :))

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ParneetS IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 March 2011 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
awwww it was a nice part...:)
Armaan over reacted but happy he realized it was his mistake....:(
aww feel bad for Ridz...

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