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|Love In 10 Days| AR - FF| Upd.Pg. 129 | (Page 27)

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OYYE HOYYE
kya baat kya baat!!!!
nice part dear

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hey i loved it........
waiting 4 the next part
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 12:27am | IP Logged
hey ....... nyc ff ......
loved all d parts esp wen dey confess der love and der masti at lonavala .......
plzz do add me  ur pm list ......
waitin 4 ur next update ......
ritika
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Luvd it
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hey guys.....thankyou so very much for all your loving comments and thankyou for the readers who pressed the LIKE button....thankyou so very much.............
 
NEXT PART.....
AFTER THEY REACHED ARMAAN'S PLACE...........

muskaan(watching AR from window and pointing towards them)-hey guys....he is here..........GET

anji-SET..........

rahul-GO............

atul smiled and got damn excited to meet his brother after a long time.........

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AR WERE STANDING OUTSIDE ARMAAN'S HOUSE:-

r-armaan chaabi do...........

a-kyun...........

r-kyun ka kya matlab...........arrrmmmaaannnn..........

a-jaanta tha main

r-wat armaan..........

a-tum chaabi isiliye lena chahati ho na taaki tum andar jaa ke darwaaze lock kar ke............mere saath.........cheee cheee cheee cheee.................riddhima kuch to sharam karo......

r-shut up armaan aur chaabi do...

ARMAAN continously laughed and riddhina got angry that he is still making fun of her......armaan saw her frowned.........

a-sorry baba(stilll laughung)..

r-rehne do tumhe daantne ka kabhi koi faeda hua hai aaj tak!!!!!!!

a-(going close)lekin agar tum chaaho to DOCTOR ARMAAN MALLIK ke bedroom ka kaafi accha kaeda uthaaya ja sakta hai.........

r-armaan....(blushing)tum bhi na!!!!!!

she pushed armaan nd ran.........

a-oyye hoyye soniyo......!!!

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armaan and riddhima both stepped inside the house and were stunned to see one thing only............:DARKNESS........

r-armaan light nahi hai kya????

a-nahi....lagta hai fuse ud gaya hai!!!!!

THEN SUDDENLY balloons bursted.....flowers were thrown on AR and then anji,rahul,muski came out shouting...."S-U-R-P-R-I-S-E"..............

armaan(confused)-wats going on..............

rahul(looking at armaan in suspense kinda look)ARMAAN...pointing towards a figure............

ARMAAN SAW...........................A-T-U-L.........his champ....he was shocked,stunned,surprised and speechless........atul saw his bhai and had nothing but tears in his eyes......they both stood at the same spot beleiving the fact that this is not a dream......they kept on staring at each other for a while now.......atul walked towards armaan...he proceeded his hands towards........HIM.............

"hye mera naam atul joshi hai....naya intern hoo.........sanjeevani hospital mumbai......mujhe kisi se pyaar hai apni cycle ki siva to wo hai mere pyaare dost........aur aap jaante hai ki mera ek dost hai ARMAAN MALLIK.......arrey dost kya wo to mera BHAI hai........mera har mushkil mein saath deta hai lekin main bohot bura oon.....maine use dhokha dia......bina batae uske zindagi se chala gaya.....uske baare mein soche bina......and now i am back only 4 him.....(proceeded his hand more)KYA WOH MUJHE MAAF KAREGA....???"

HE SAID ALL THIS TO ARMAAN REFRESHING THERE OL' MEMORIES......champ-bhai........armaan listened to all this standing like a statue....having tears...nd  A 10 KM LONG SMILE.....he pressed each word with guilty kinda feeling......trying to say sorry to armaan for a BIG mistake that alomost snatched LIFE from ARMAAN'S LIFE..............armaan could not control and hugged him tightly and burst out crying.............

a-champ.................

a-bhai............

-----------------(sorry guys know 2 filmy but watta do)------------

EVERYBODY HAD TEARS IN THERE EYES.............THEY WERE FINALLY TOGETHER...THE SO CALLED DMG GANG..WERE FINALLY TOGETHER HAPPY........

AFTER ALMOST AN HouR.......PARTY IS STILL GOING ON............

atul(to armaan)-sorry yaar....please....mujhse nafrat mat kario.........

armaan-shut up champ......no crying wrying....waise bhi humaari mulaakat dude kaafi filmy thi...uhhhh.....will never forget dat.....now only happiness......

IN ALL THIS NO ONE NOTICED that riddhma felt left out cauze she is not soooo familiar wid rahul,muski,anji nd atul was to totally new to her....bt have recently heard about atul from armaan...but in all she was happy to see armaan happy.......armaan was buzzzy wid atul...she could understand that's why she never complained........she went out in the balcony enjoying the cold breeze.....her hair were dancing with the breeze and she closed her ears feeling THE FILMY THNADI HAWA....her hairs were literally dancing woth the cold breeze.........

araan noticed ridz standing alone and went to her........he hugged her from back...wrapped his hands around her waist and rested his chin on her shoulder.........riddhima knew that it was armaan she just opened her eyes for a while and then closed it again.....

a-ka kal le ho(kiddish language)....ka hua(ridz smiled)..........

r-kuch nahi....

a-to phir itni chup kyun ho....

r-bas aise hi...........

a-(whispered while nuzzling in her neck)I LOVE YOU.........

R- I LOVE YOU TOO MR.GHOCHU BABA........

muskaan noticed all ths..........

m-dekh anji ARMAAN KO TO ZARA.....kiase romance mein laga pada hai....haeeee mai mar jaawaan kinne sode hai.......

anji-ya right so cute couple rt atul???

atul-ya........arrey ye to RIDDHIMA HAI NA.......RIDDHIMA GUPTA????

rahul-ha lekin tujhe kaise pata chala.....

atul-nahi wo bas aise hi tukka lagaya............

m-ehhh...anji chal na....inhe chaidhaate hai...........

r-kyun bechaaro ko pareshaan kar rahe ho......khud to romance karti nahi hai aur doosro ka bhi kharaab kart hai.......huhh.....

m-oyye...tu chup rehe...genda kahi ka....chal anji.....

rahul made a face nd atul smiled..!!!!

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ANJI AND MUSKI TEASING AR...............

anji-uhummm uhummm........

AR parted as soon as they realized the presence of the SO CALLED ROMANCE KE DUSHMAN!!!

muskaan-uhummm....do i have the permission to disturb this beautiful couple....???

riddhima blushed and armaan smiled........

anji-wah yaar......armaan........waise if u are not realizing...then shayad tumhe pata nahin ki umne abhi tak riddhima ka pallu pakda hua hai..!!

a-uhh....wo...kya hai ....ki main.....

muski-uh...ha...ki wo....uhh to kya(trying to mimic him)..........

armaan got annoyed and now planned to GIVE A DOSE OF ARMAAN MALLIK to them.....

armaan-HUM SMOOCH KARNE WAALE THE.....ANY PROBLEM...???

THEY bth stood with their mouth open.....

muskaan-oyee ghade tujhme koi sharam hai bhi ya nahin???

anji-exactly........so disguisting....

arman-oh well if u r finding this sooooo disguisting then LEAVE........huhh......

ridz-oho armaan ab bas bhi karo.......!!!

muski-oye ghade karta rehe tu romance hawa ke saath.....hum ridz ko leke ja rahe hai......(muski literally dragged her in the hall)..........

a-lekin guys........urghhhh...........!!!...

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MUSKAAN AND ANJALI LITERALLY DRAGGED RIDZ INSIDE THE ROOM....

anji-we need 2 talk 2 u ridzi....

muski-tujhe kuch important bataana hai....

ridz-chill guys...itna bhi kya zaroori hai....

muskaan took out a diary kinda thing from her pocket and gave it to riddhima.......

ridz-ye kya hai.........

anji and muski looked at each other and then ridz and then smiled..........RIDZ was very confused as if what is happening dude...........???muski and anji left........

ridz opened the diary and was shocked to see it.....

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ARMAAN IN THE BALCONY....

armaan was standing in the balcony alone enjoying the filmy hawa and thinking"life kitni badal gaee hai pichle geyaara(11) dino mein"......THEN suddenly a hand came on his shoulder......it was none other than CHAMP.......atul noticed some tears in his eys.......

at-arrey kya hua yaar...tu ro kyun raha hai??

ar-kuch nahi champ...wo bas aise hi......

at-dekh tu khud se jhoot bol sakta hai par apne champ se nahi....!

ar-(smiled and a lonely tear dropped dpwn his cheeks)BAS YE SOCH KE KI AB LIFE ITNI KHUSHIYON SE BHARI HO GAI HAI....PEHLE MUJHE RIDDHIMA MILI AB TUM..........

at-arrey isme udaas hone waali kya baat hai...???

ar-udaas hone waali koi baat nahi....bas(cried badly now)dar lagta hai ki kahi firse in sabko kho na doo....tujhe....riddhima....sabko....kyunki main ab bohot sehe chuka...aur sehene ki himmat nahi hai mujhme.....us dard se main dobara nahi jaana chahata....

ATUL said nothing but gave an expression to armaan which assured him that life is only & only holding happiness for him NOW............

atul(staring at riddhima who was looking axtremely stunning and beatiful while laughing w anji)-yaar ek bat bolu???

ar-hmmmm.........

at-riddhima bohot acchi ladki hai....

ar-smiled and said........i know.....lekin tujhe kaise pata..........matlab i mean tu to us se abhi mila hai....

atul-wo actually..............

HE SAID THE STORY TO ARMAAN THAT HE HAD SEEN HER A MONTH AGO AT AN ORPHANAGE...........

}}flashback{{

bi-aooo aoo....atul beta kaise ho...kitne dino baad mile....

atul-mai to theek hoo lekin(he noticed a girl playing with water with the kids in the garden)ye ladki kaun hai....??

BI looked at her and smiled and said....

"ye RIDDHIMA GUPTA hai........shashank bete ki choti beti......aksar yaha aati hai........ye har baar in baccho ke lie khaane,tofe,kapde aur inki man pasand cheeze laati hai.....inke saath khelti hai waqt bitaati hai...raat ko kahaaniya sunaati hai......aur ab to ye haal hai(a tear rolled down her cheek in happiness)ki YE BACCHE ISE MAA KEHE KAR PUKAARTE HAI"......

atul understood the situation.....and smiled........

{{FLASHBACK OVER}}

armaan listened to all this feeling proud,happy.....he had a tear in his eys......armaan never thought that riddhima is preffers as MAA by all children...he felt lucky to have her......at that time he just wanted to grab her and smooch  her lips tight......

ar-champ....thnx for telling that....agar tu aaj ye baat nahi batata to mai kabhia asli riddhima ko pehchaan hi nahi paata..............

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hey guys....i hope you all liked it....and yah i wanted to ask should i end this FF or you guys want more....???plzzzzz do answer this question.....it's very important.....and please comment.....
 
luv,
samica(karan's angel & miss.ksgian)Smile


Edited by ksgforever10 - 29 January 2011 at 8:48am

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
Hey samica
awesome update........atul n amy reunion was superb yeah its filmy but superb.......plz dn't end dis ff
thanks for pm
plz do continue soon

Edited by shilpI007 - 30 January 2011 at 7:14pm
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Luvd it n plz dnt end dis ff so sun

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