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AR FF:: Aapki Nazaron nE Samjha: New Thread Pg 150 (Page 103)

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 5:24am | IP Logged

abhey is larki ke dimaag mein koi akal dalo...

he'll be happy wid u...

still she want ammy niki together........

thnx for the pm.............

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awesome update

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 10:36am | IP Logged
hey nice part
pls now don't bring nikki b/w armaan and riddhima
cont soon

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lloved it.... Hoping for a fresh start .... love

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PART 21

Armaan and Riddhima were in the car silent. Finally they reached their house. He removed her bags and together they went in.... Ananya cam forward to greet them and hugged Riddhima tightly.....AFter the hug she said: Tum ek din ke liye gayi thi aur yeh ghar suna suna ho gaya tha..... beta.. acha hua tum vapas aa gayi...
RIddhima smiles at that and says: Ha ma..... ab nahin jaungi main...
Armaan looks at her when she says that.... Hes surprised.. especially after what she had said when he left her home in the afternoon today. He smiled too...
Riddhima went and touched Billy's feet..... Billy was surprised but pleasantly...... especially after what he had read earlier.

[this scene is thought by a reader and I would like to thank him for thinking about it as a result of which I am able to incorporate it into my FF.]

He had found out last minute... who the lawyer was to whom these two were going for the divorce.... and he tried to explain it to the lawyer ... after a lot of convincing he finally managed to convince her......He smiled....

Muskaan and Anjali cam forward to greet Riddhima...
Muskaan: bhabhi.. please aap dubara aise bina bataye mat jana... kabhi bhi...
Riddhima smiles at her and hugs her tightly......
Anjali: Arrre tum log mujhe toh bhul hi gaye.......
Riddhima: Nahin Anji  ... main kisiko nahin bhul sakti... aao....... and the trio embrace in a big hug...

Seeing all this Armaan feels elated...... Indeed  he thanked god the divorce did not happen....... His family needs her for sure.......[ but what he did not know was that secretly had started to feel the absence of her presence]

Ananaya: Chalo chalo aab use jane do.....Riddhima main abhi kuch achhha sa bana deti hoon...
Riddhima: Ma... meri mom ne khana bheja hain.. taki aaj aap ko kuch nahin banana sake..
Ananya smiles: Arre tumhari ma bahut chinta karti hain.. do main garam kar du khane ko...
She gives the food to her....
Muskaan has an idea..... she sayd: Ma aaj bhabhi ki ane ki khushi main hum sab bahar ghumne jaye... mere friend ki ek party hain..... bhabhi aur bhai ke saath maza ayega....
Ananya: Lekin Muskaan Riddhima thak gayi hogi...
Armaan: Ma jane do na..... aaj khushi ka din hain... manane do Muski ko apni bhabhi ke saath..
Muskaan: Oho.. jelly jelly... Bhaya aap kp bhi maine invite kiya hain( n she laughs..]
Anjali: Toh thik hain hum sab sham ko 8 baje nikalenge... thik hain...
Armaan: ThiK HAIN..
Everyone looks at her.... Riddhima smiles... achhha thik hain...
and they start rejoicing........

The evening goes well with all of them talking and eating the food that Padma had sent..... Inthe eveing around 7.30 they start to dress..... and Muskaan recieves a call from her friend..... She goes aside and talks and then comes back..
Muskaan: Chaloooooooo late ho raha hain ...
They come down..... Riddhima hugs Ananya and Billy and Muski and Anji say bye to their Dad and Mom and Armaan hugs Ananya.... and Billy and then they leave.. Armaan driving.....

After they leave.......
Ananya sits down......... Billy sees her happy.. HE goes to her: Aaj bahu aa gayi isiliye khush ho tum...
Ananaya: ha aur tumne ek baat notice ki...
Billy : Kya..
Ananya: aaj Armaan khush tha.......
Billy:hmmmm
Ananya: mujhe lagta hain.. things are finally falling into place for these two....
Billy thinking of his phonecall that he had made to the lawyer says: Yes they finally are....
They look at each other and smile.......
Then billy puts a hand on her shoulder and leaves....
Ananya sits there for a minute and then calls Padma.....
She thanks Padma for what she did today... and tells her how happy Riddhima nad Armaan appeared today.. hearign that she becomes happy and they talk about some other stuff...

In the car..... Muskaan is busy texting her friend..... Anjali interrupts her: Yeh kya hain Muskaan.. teri friend ki party hain.. aur tu hi chup chap baithi hain.. actually tu texting main busy hain..
Muskaan: Arre sorry sorry..( she stopd texting)
And starts chitchatting with Anji, RIddhima and Armaan...
They finally reach the party hall........

Everyone comes out of the car......
Muskaan is waiting for her friend to come
She receives a text: You look beautiful...
She smiles seeing that.....
She sees him in a distance....
He friend..... Seema comes to greet her.... and her family.. and they all go in...... After formal introductions... they go and get some food and drinks.......
Muskaan excuses herself and says that she will be back in a moment...
Anjali is left all alone with Riddhima and Armaan...........

Her friend comes in and she excuses herself saying that she will be backk.....

Now Armaan and Riddhima are left alone........
Thye feel awkward about it.......

Just then.. the person at the stage says:
Hello everyone... Welcome to this party.......  kehte hain hain.. pyar hone se hota hain.... aur jisse tum pyar karo.... use jaldi se ikrar karo... kya pata age kya hojaye.......

Everyone claps at that.....

He continues: Yeh gana ek special pharmaish hain.... kisiki apne pyaar ke liye.. I am sure u will all enjoy it...
Muskaan recieves the text.. HOPe you like the song..
She smiles again
Text:  yoU smile beautifully....

Riddhima meets one of her friends from when she used to go to college and starts talking with her... Armaan goes around the drink section to get himselfsomething to drink...


THe singer starts singing....
Chupana bhi nahin ata........

Riddhima looks at the singer .....

Chupana bhi nahin ata... Jatana bhi nahin ata....

She tries to look for Armaan ... doesnt see himm..... She excuses her and goes around the party hall...
Hame tumse  mohobat hain.. batana bhi nahin ata.......

Muskaan finally sees him ....... He comes and greets her.... and together holding hands they listen to the singer......

Chupana Bhi nahin ata jatana bhi nahin ata...

Riddhima finally spots Armaan.......
She looks at him.... He turns in her direction and she hides away........ When his gaze goes the other way..... she looks back at himm....

Hatheli par tumhara naam likhte hain mitate hain.... tumhi se pyaar karte hain... tumhi se hi kyun chupate hain tumhi se hi kyun chupate hain...

Armaan goes around with the drink in his hand listeing to the signer and loking in his direction....Riddhima follows him around.... but making sure he doenst see her.....

Zubape baat hain lekin sunana bhi nahin aata..... hume tumse mohobat hain .. bata na bhi nahin ata.... chupana bhi nahin ata jatana bhi nahin ata....

Rahul looks at Muskaan she tried not to look at him.....
People start coming on the floor to dance..... Rahul asks her for a dance.. She checks whether her sister or brother is there or not and then agrees.................

Chori Chori chupke chupke... tumk o dekha karte hain.... hale dil sunane se.. na jane kyun darte hain... najane kyun darte hain...
kitna pagal dil hain mera.. manane bhi nahin ata.. hume tumse mohobat hain.. batana bhi nahin ata...


Riddhima is still looking at her.... Armaan walks on the other side.... There's a mirror on the side... He sees Riddhima following him.....he looks at her fromthe mirror......

Chupana bhi nahin ata jatan bhi nahin ata............

THen he loses her from the mirror he tries to look for her and he bangs into her......

As the song ends.... Muskaan leaves his hand.... he doenst let her go.. but she slowly manages to free her hand and goes from there....... walking away from him but still facing him....

She bumps into Anjali and turns immdiately.. Rahul turns as well....
Anjali: Arre Muskaan kaha thi tu......
Muskaan: Main woh yahin thi... tu kaha thi..
And they they talk routine..

Armaan Riddhima had bumped into each other..
Armaan: WOh I am sorry..
Riddhima: Its ok
Both are silent again....

Muskaan and Anjali come in  and they start talking again........They eat some food and then leave for home......... While leaving Muskaan turns.. She sees he has come to say goodbye to her...... He signals her to come.... She tries to go.. by saying that she forgot to say bye to her friend......
She goes to him.. walking hesistantly... He moves back.... so that no one can see him.... She goes to meet him.....
Rahul: Muskaan
Muskaan: Hmmm
Rahul: mujhe miss karogi na...
Muskaan acting as if thinking: nahin toh...
Rahul looks at her in fake anger.......
Muskaan: Miss use karte hain jo door ho....
Rahul smiles at her..... He tries to come close to her....
Muskaan: Rahul... bhai.. wait kar rahe hain....
Rahul: Karne do..
Muskaan : Anji aa jayegi..
Rahull: Ane do....
Muskaan.. Rahllllll
Rahul: Muskaann..........
.....

Anji calls for her: Muski.....
Immediately she frees herslef from his hand and goes......She meets Anji..
Anjali: Bol diya bye shai... ab chale..
Muskaan : ha chalo..
She looks back at him.. and give s him a flying kiss...
He cathces it and places it close to his hear.t........She smiles and turns to faceaway from himm......

They all sit in the car.... and Armaan drives.... Muskann and Anji go to sleep in the back..
Armaan and Riddhima are the only ones who are awake....

Riddhima starts thinking of the song..... that she had just heard at the party........
Why did she become weak..... what if he had seen her....... This meant that... she still hoped that things would fall in place for her..... but then.... this shouldn't be...... Well she promised Nikki that she would not leave this family.. and Armaan was included in the family...... She smiled...
N then the thought of the second part of the promise came to her.... She promised that only if Nikki was happy.. She had to make Nikki happpyy.... And for that she had to find out why did Abhi leave her in that state... as far as she knew Abhi... he had always loved Nikki.. in her younger days.. she had wished for a lover like Abhi cuz he loved her sister so much.. and cared so much for her... She had to get to the root of why Abhi had not come....
Armaan happened to look at Riddhima from the corner of his eye.....

He smiled when he thought of how Riddhima was looking at him at the party......

He saw the same Riddhima that he had seen about three years ago  when she was supposedly in love with him...... Was he doing right with her....? He brought her back and wished the divorce didnt happen because he knew his family needed her.... but was he doing right......
After all as a woman.. what is she needed a man.... how would he .. what would he do when faced with that situation........ He had no idea... and then again....... would he be comfortable in accepting Riddhima as his wife.... because......
well he stopped thinking..... Let time do its. thing he thought... and concentrated on driving....

As soon as they reached home..... He woke up Muski and ANji.... saying that home is here and they could go up and sleep... They came out of the car... and Riddhima took them inside........
Armaan looked at her.... and then parked his car......
He went in the house.... Everyone was asleep.......
He went to his room... Riddhima had jsut changed into her night dress....
She smiled at him... He smiled at her.. and then they went to sleep ...


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superb part awesomeClapClapClapClapClapClap
luvd it
thnx 4 d PM
cont soon
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