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AR FF:: Aapki Nazaron nE Samjha: New Thread Pg 150

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
!!PROLOGUE!!



Armaan comes in the room. It is decorated for him and Riddhima. He sees Riddhima on the bed sitting in the most beautifully dressed lehenga with the chunari covering her head. He closes the door. Her heart starts pounding heavily in anticipation. He approaches her slowly and sits next to her. He tries to touch her hand but she shies away pulls her hand inwards. He moves closer to her and whispers in her ear, " Riddhima" and gradually lifts her veil. Her eyes are closed but she appears very beautiful. He says, " Mashaallah! Aaaj toh khud khuda ki nehmat hai mujhpar joh itni khubsurat biwi mili hai mujhe" A smile passes her face and she tries to move her face in the other direction so he cannot see her expressions but he moves her face towards him. He moves to her right ear, kisses it and removes the earing slowly and leaves it on the table. He does the same to the other ear, he gradually removes all her ornaments, from her mangtikka, to her necklace, her nose ring, her bangles, her cummerbund, and the payals. Slowly he makes her lie down on the bed and shows her his world of loveEmbarrassed.

Thinking about it makes her smile. This was albeit but a dream and she couldn't wait to make it a reality. He comes in but reluctantly because his bhai n bhabhis pushed him in. He sees her sitting on the bed, comes to her, close to her, she feels him so close to him, he takes one pillow from the bed and goes and sets himself on the sofa. She tuns towards him and cannot believe what just happened. It was like someone stole her dream and burnt it down to ashes. He didn't even say a word to her. He went to sleep his back facing her and she sat in the same position thinking what went wrong that he didn't even react to her presence.

This is the PROLOGUE people. Let me know what do you think about it. I have an idea of how to develop it but if you guys have any suggetions please feel free to tell me about it. N do comment as to do you guys like ti or not.
I will include a song in all my FF's - asong that relates to the situation:)
tHis FF will definetly be a romantic one as u can see from the Prologue...
Do include ur lovely comments :)

Anticipating ur comments
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Part 2:: Page 4
Part 3:: Page 4
***BONUS PART***:: Page 7
Part 4:: Page 8
Thankyou to all my readers
Part 5:: Page 10
Part 6:: Page 15
Part 7:: Page 18
Part 8:: Page 23
Part 9:: Page 28
Part 10::Page38
Part 11-A::Page 44
Part 11-B::Page 46
Part 11-C::Page 53
Part 12::Page 56
Part 14::Page 62
Promo : Nikki speaks the TRUTH ::Page 68
Part 15::Page 69
Part 16::Page 75
Part 17::Page 81
Part 18::Page 90
Part 19:: Page 95
Part 20::Page 99
Part 21:: Page 103
Part 22:: Page 112
Filler episode ::Page 117


Edited by AR4eve - 10 September 2011 at 10:23pm

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
wow!... nice prologue!!! :) plz continue soon! pm me tooo! :)
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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
hi!! great prolouge! would love to read more
continue soon
>333 Shradz
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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
awesome nice prologue
looks interesting
cant wait 4 ur update
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
nyc start
plz continue n add me in ur pm list plz
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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 5:50pm | IP Logged
loved it.... thanks for the Pm..... continue sooooooon
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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 5:53pm | IP Logged
awesome... do add me to your pm list...
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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
OMG what a damn wicked prologue. bichari riddhima already feel bad for her. plz continue soon and pm me:)
love
sani

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