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Short Stories By Sweetu * IMPORTANT NOTE PAGE 3!

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Fight For Friends => Page 1
Sister of a Gem => Page 2


Edited by Sweetu.Baby - 01 January 2011 at 9:33am

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Fight For Friends 
 
The last thing Sussy needed was another reason to be mad. It was only yesterday when she found out her best friend, Kristie was talking behind her back. The person she trusted the must turned out to be the reason the school would make fun of her. Now, she only had one person who cared. Tamara, the sweet  girl she met that year in freshmen english, who always cared for her.
"Out of all the people, i can't believe Kristie would do such a thing," Sussy said
"Well, know you know who your true friends are," Tamara told her
" But why would she do such a thing?"
" She changed after she met those 2 popular girls, Maria and Selena. The talked her into it. Kristie thought if she did what they say, she'll be part of the cool group. She doesn't ealize her mistake at all!"
" Whatever. I have you! Just promise you won't leave me!"
"I would NEVER leave an amazing friend like you," Tamara assured
As the girls were getting ready to leave the lunchroom, Maria, Selena, and Kristie approached them.
" Eww," stated Maria. "Where do you shop? Clothes for the Nerd?"
The three girls laughed
" I can't believe you were friends with these geeks," Selena said to Kristie. " Aren't you glad you joined us?"
Kriste nodded. "I told Tamara to join us, but she denied. She'll regret talking to this looser soon!"
" Sussy isn't a looser," commented Tamara. "She's a better friend than you."
Sussy smilied. The three girls walked away laughing and cracking jokes about Tamara and Sussy.
 
The next day at school, when walking into math class, Selena had tripped Sussy. She knew she couldn't cry because it would make things worse. Unfourtunatly, she couldn't control it. Selena, Maria, and Kristie started to laugh. Holding back her tears, Sussy ran out the room. During lunch she spilled her heart out to Tamara
" What did Kristie say?," Tamara asked
" Nothing. She was enjoying the moment along with Selena."
" And Maria?"
" She was absent"
" Thats it," Tamara yelled
" We need to make Kristie realize what she's doing!"
" How do we do that?"
" We do what she did to you!"
" What you mean?"
" You tell Maria and Selena HER secrets!"
" But.."
" No Sussy. We have to get our friend back, and this is the only way to do it! Meet me outside the school before the first bell rings tomorrow. We'll wait by the bench where that cool group hangs out" Tamara walked away. Sussy knew what Tamara had in mind was wrong, but it was the only choice she had left. It was time to give Kristie a taste of her own medicine!
 
The next morning, Sussy was nervous. She hoped to get her best friend back. 5 minutes after Tamara and her had arrived, the three girl walked over to the bench
" Your in our spot!" Demanded Maria  "MOVE!"
" We will! After Sussy says what she has to," Tamara yelled
Everyone stared at Sussy
" Di..Di..Did" "Come on Sussy! Your doing this for a good cause! Its either this or humiliation forever," She told herself
" You guys know that kid Ryan, the really dorky one? Kristie had a crush on him in 5th grade"
Everyone gasped. Kristie felt tears in her eyes
" She even threw up in the car once. She gets car sick. Thats why she never goes on trips"
Kriste hid her face and ran inside. Sussy chased her into the girl's bathroom
" I'M SORRY KRISTIE," she yelled. "I DIDN'T KNOW WHAT ELSE TO DO!" " I HAD TO MAKE REAL..."
Kristie hugged Sussy. "I'm sorry," She said. " I should of never did what I did. Please forgive"
Sussy nodded and hugged her best friend. Tamara joined them
"Helllooooooo," Selena said.
" I hate you guys," Kristie told them. I don't need friends like you. My friends are cool enough"
Selena and Maria walked a way, leaving the 3 girls to themselves
 
 

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Cute!! Nice story about friendship and knowing who your real friends are. Thanks for the PM. Smile
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@tulipbaby53  : Aww thanks <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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What a lovely story... nice piece of  writing keep it up

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