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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 58)

Zehnaseeb IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
Mayank diedCry but it was a justified ending. Forgiving a rapist is completely impossible and I'm glad that you showed this instead of nupur forgiving him, them getting married and living happily ever after like a Hindi movie.
Rape is unforgivable. Mayank committing suicide was shocking, but he was a weak character from the start so again it's justified.
Beautiful FF, come back soon with a serious FF but a nice and happy shappy ending. Hug
Keep up the great work baji Hug

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 12:00am | IP Logged
loved it

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 4:32am | IP Logged
aw am crying it's just ah i don't have words i am speechless ur a greatttttttttttt writer

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 6:46am | IP Logged
mehak........
ok finally me here to giv my detailed reply n viewBig smileEmbarrassedLOLLOL
i loved d slap...........he totally deserved it.......Big smilethnx for that...i so wanted that.........
n nupur....shez a strong woman......n m proud of it.........this stupid world shud not knock u down......EmbarrassedBig smilei loved d courage in her...........n happy she didnt forgiv him......agreed he was ashamed n repenting wat he did.......but he also spoiled sum1z life n sumthing r beyond repentness//////
 
 
then d last part..........omg..............this wud b d only ff till date i guess in which m happy n satisfied ki mayur didnt meet at d end.........
but suicide............totally unpredictable...........i didnt think hes so darpok n u'll end it too soonOuchLOLEmbarrassedbut yea thats totally apt.....Big smile
anyways.....yea he didnt deserve forgivness..ever........watever may b.......kitna bhi achha ho.......n the last line.....mann.......d dark magic one........ClapClapClapClapClap
 
ur a starStarLOLEmbarrassedStarStarStarStarStarStarStar
n lastly...............u knw na.............me addicted to ur ffzEmbarrassedLOLLOLLOL
dooooooooo cum bck really soon n wid a looooooooong storyBig smile
tc!
keep smiling!Hug
n yea keep writing n sharing!Smile


Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 11 January 2011 at 6:51am

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 7:45am | IP Logged
Hey nice story but sad one.Cry

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:17am | IP Logged
mehak i loved the ending agar main nupur ki jagh per hoti to main bhi yehi kerti awesome ending

thx alot fot the pm and plz do write more FF plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 8:49am | IP Logged
i read your entire piece just today.....
Mehak...this time you have left me speechles...
this was best of all you have written so far really....i mean you left me
inters with the last part...
awsum work..keep it up!!Thumbs Up
you really made me Hate mayank for the first time...
 
do write more soon...i am waiting....

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Posted: 11 January 2011 at 11:36am | IP Logged
You ended it?
NO! I seriously can't believe this! Oh gosh, this was so unexpected and so painful! Never even in my dream I had thought that this would have such an end!
 
OH MY GOD! That letter was so painful, and everything that happened, since I read it from prt 6, so for me it was like I was watching a beautfiul magical movie and it just ended like a tragedy.
 
Gosh, Mehak Hug Sweety, this is your best story yet, because I can understand how difficult it must be for you to write this! This was such a beautfiully heart wrenching story! And I salute you for writing this one because touching someone's heart enough to make them cry is really tough, and you did it! Hat''s off to you jaani! Love ya loads <333
 
And I'll always remember this story, forever!

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