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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 56)

thousandmiles IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged

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DhanakZ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 18 June 2010
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged
Why why nahi aisa nahi ho sakta
I never ever expected this
I was too atteached with this FF or asi ending
I am still crying just cant be able to stop my tears
Really a great Ff
but ended too soon
Plz come back soon with new FF but plz for this time happy ending
Thank U for Pm and GOD bless u

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kheya-mayur IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3288

Posted: 10 January 2011 at 11:27am | IP Logged

i never wanted mayank to b forgiven

but i cried too........

hey tum mujhe most of d updateki pm nahi ki.


love ur ff suru karo to jarur pm karna

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aysha_mayur IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 19 April 2010
Posts: 24656

Posted: 10 January 2011 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
OMGGGGGGGGGG MehakShockedShocked
I really did'nt expect this...........ShockedShocked
I thought that would be a happy ending Ouch
Mayank's note was sooo touching.....I literally criedCry....For the first time I felt soooo bad for MayankCryCry
That was seruously shocking.......I wanted you to give it a happy ending....MAYUR fianlly getting married and Priya getting fatherly loveCry
But I must say this was the bestest FF you wrote MehakClap
Waiting for your next FF Mehak......and that to with Happy ending

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MyInspirationz IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
that was such an unexpected end.... although what Mayank did was a sin.. still he deserved a chance to be forgiven and Priya did deserve her share of Fatherly love.. and Nupur deserved her love too..
I want you to continue this further.... showing Mayank's entry in Nupur's life and how things become beautiful there on.. edit this part... and make Mayank go into coma.. do something.. and continue this FF...

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valliyah Goldie

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
Maar kyun diya yaarDisapprove.............this can't be the end..........he was actually sorry for his deed................right ki har baar maafi nahi milta but Priya hi nahi Nupur ko bhi khus rahne ka haq thaa..............n Mayank regretted everyday n night as u showed phir aisa kyun...........dil se maafi mangne par Khuda bhi maaf kar dete hai phir Nupur kyun nahi................har kisiko apne hisse ki khusi milti hai to jab time aaya Nupur aur Priya ke khusi ka to yeh end kyun.................dekha jaaye to isske baad na sirf Nupur but Priya ke puri zindagi sawaal bankar rahegi...............plsss hosake to cont they truely deserve their part of happiness..................plsss.....................!!!

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Auroni.92 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Mehak OMG it ws the most unpredictable part...Now what will i say...
Im shoched...But u did full justice...Kyunki nupur usse maaf kar de yeh  main bardasht nahi kar pati aur usse nafrat kare yeh bhi sah nahi pati...So i think this ws the only way...
But jo bhi ho this ws really painful...Mayank as dead cant bear this...Im crying now...U can catch every emotion perfectly...
Now plz start a new one and make us happy...

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.SilentPrincess IF-Rockerz

Joined: 31 March 2009
Posts: 7663

Posted: 10 January 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
Okay this was just wow... I simply love this ff. One of the most amazing ffs i ever read.
It started off in a positive way and after wards turned  to grey shades but in the end it got postitive.
From the update i have to say i was shocked i had to idea he would actually die or commit suicide... But he truly loved her, and he died and so did her pain...Ouch
Kinza this is truly something special...its just amazing...
Standing ovation for writing something so beautiful like this.... Clap Embarrassed Hug

Edited by princez_94 - 11 January 2011 at 5:19am

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