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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 54)

.rumki. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
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Cry Cry i am crying mehak .this part was really heart touching.
I thought this ff would have happy ending but i agree every cant end happily
u wrote this part beauifully Clap .mayank deserve this but still it hurting .feeling sorry 4 nupur and priya also.
Write more ff.ofcourse with happy ending

u dont know how much i cried.if mom see me she will be shocked
Ouch LOL

Edited by .rumki. - 10 January 2011 at 9:04am

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Mehak ... I dont know what to say Confused 
 
I can only agree with Nupur here... I hate him so much -but still it hurts Unhappy 
Its all magic of a name "Mayank" ,that too when it comes with another name "nupur" ..Otherwise I wouldn't have used these smileys at all ,for this end.  I hate to see Mayank in bad light.. Ermm 
 
But he deserved it , or more than that.. Even at this end, I feel sorry for Nupur and daughter, than for Mayank.
 
Now you have to compensate for this Mehak - with a new,positive and romantic FF.. Smile

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:31am | IP Logged
OMG...mehak........i feared ths ending...but i m crying....
i didnt have words to explain ..how it felt...nupur was right at her place......but mayank did wht he should have......the magic u create is awesum but true the magic thy have together nevr brighten there lifes
 
amazing
be right back soon
and so pm me
 
thanks for giving us ths
 

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:35am | IP Logged
i am crying like hell mehak.....unable to write a single word....

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:38am | IP Logged
omg wow that was awesome and totally unexpected!......and i loved how you ended this fanfic......my head always said that he shouldnt get forgiveness but then my heart said that maybe theres a chance....but his pain was deserved.....and in the end they were both content with what happened.......naina


p.s. now im selfish and i want you to start a new fanfic ASAP hahah

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Oh god...that brought tears to my eyes...it was so beautifully written sweetheart...especially the letter...

awww...this was such a perfect end to the story..though sad...oh god..im feeling so sad :(

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:58am | IP Logged
ohhhh mayank died....mehak i am gonna put my honest view....plz dont feel bad ok?
i thought the decision of mayank about suicide was pathetic......what he did to nupur was disgusting....and i completely agree with nupur's pov.....but i wanted mayank to be a changed person......in the end too he ran away.....just like the way he always had been running away throughout his lifeOuch
but anyways.......maybe this is how it was supposed to end....i liked ur story......it was really different frm all ur previous onesSmile......do write moreSmile

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AmritaReddy Senior Member
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 9:00am | IP Logged
last part looks sad pain full one
bt this was a correct ending of  this story 
n thanks 4 the pmTongue

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