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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 53)

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 7:15am | IP Logged
mehak i know har story ka end happy ending nahi ho sakta but mayur par ye acha nahi laga ........... Cry
i thought u would do u r magic in the end ........Cry

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 7:15am | IP Logged
ok this was a shock Shocked
first u  killed mayank n then this ff ended.....
to b frank i dint want them to b togather coz watever mayank did was a wrong n cnt forgive him for it
but this was a shock like i feelt  bit sad for him poor guy 
i did hate him for wat he did but thisending was gr8888 shock
BUt anyways u ended this ff baddddd yaar goono miss it
BUT nevertheless GR88888 ending he did get punished even if i feel a bit sad it ok
yaar do rite more ffs like this diffrent one i such diffrent stories not like normal stories
thanxxxxx 4d pm

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 7:32am | IP Logged
shocking update Kinza ShockedShockedShocked
u ended it Cry
m gonna miss this ff
plz come back soon with a magical mayur ff nd pm me about it Smile

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 7:42am | IP Logged
mehak that was really shocking 
as always beautifully written
indeed it was dark magic
though i like happy endings 
but loved this end really touching 
thanks for the pm
please continue ur mayur magical series 
will be wtg for the next one 

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:09am | IP Logged
part 11!!!
shocker update mahek!!!Shocked
haayee... mayu.. no more!Broken HeartCry
i never expectd.. he wud try 2 sucide!CryCry
kudos 2 u mahek... such a brave, social, realsitic issue u brought in ur story!!!ClapClapClapClapClap
though i ws expectin a happy ending but.. har bhar happy ending.. aisa jarrori nahi!!Ouch
i totally luvd it!!
& i'm waitin 4 sum more magical ff's 2 cum!!WinkBig smile

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:14am | IP Logged
beautiful.....
dat was painful story bt it toched my heart...am nt able to control my tears
i loved nupur in dis ff very much....she was such a strong woman n loved mayank letter...he truly loved her
n atlast.....HATS OFF TO UClap
tnx fr dis dark magic

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
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Cry Cry i am crying mehak .this part was really heart touching.
I thought this ff would have happy ending but i agree every cant end happily
u wrote this part beauifully Clap .mayank deserve this but still it hurting .feeling sorry 4 nupur and priya also.
Write more ff.ofcourse with happy ending

u dont know how much i cried.if mom see me she will be shocked
Ouch LOL

Edited by .rumki. - 10 January 2011 at 9:04am

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