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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 51)

dbr_kmichi IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 6:30am | IP Logged
hi!!!
u ended it?!
i m shocked readin it!!Cry
u have written it beautifully!!
come bac soon with another ffSmile

divya

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 6:35am | IP Logged
 that was the best story mehak, and it is so much painful it touched my heart..and seriously i am not able to control my tears..
thanx for writing this wonderful piece of writing...

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 6:48am | IP Logged
shocking one!!!
but amazingly written...
thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 7:12am | IP Logged
*phew* kinza that was .... WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Clap ClapClap

too good for words/... somehow i knew u will end it this way but the special thing is i still was shocked at every part...every dialogue deserves applaud yar!!!!!!1
mind blowing....... dark magic it was............
sometimes you really cant et go and forgive............
loved it yar!!!
this is ur best ff soo far among the ones i read..........
i have no words to describe what you have done!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 7:15am | IP Logged
mehak i know har story ka end happy ending nahi ho sakta but mayur par ye acha nahi laga ........... Cry
i thought u would do u r magic in the end ........Cry

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 7:15am | IP Logged
ok this was a shock Shocked
first u  killed mayank n then this ff ended.....
to b frank i dint want them to b togather coz watever mayank did was a wrong n cnt forgive him for it
but this was a shock like i feelt  bit sad for him poor guy 
i did hate him for wat he did but thisending was gr8888 shock
BUt anyways u ended this ff baddddd yaar goono miss it
BUT nevertheless GR88888 ending he did get punished even if i feel a bit sad it ok
yaar do rite more ffs like this diffrent one i such diffrent stories not like normal stories
thanxxxxx 4d pm

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 7:32am | IP Logged
shocking update Kinza ShockedShockedShocked
u ended it Cry
m gonna miss this ff
plz come back soon with a magical mayur ff nd pm me about it Smile

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Posted: 10 January 2011 at 7:42am | IP Logged
mehak that was really shocking 
as always beautifully written
indeed it was dark magic
though i like happy endings 
but loved this end really touching 
thanks for the pm
please continue ur mayur magical series 
will be wtg for the next one 

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