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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 49)

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
I just started reading the ff...I did like some updated but i never got rime to read till now.... And it's just wow... Kinza I must say this is truly the best ff u have written... I'ts just wow... I' feel so sorry for Nupur.... Ouch 
 
LOoking forward to next update....
 
btw is ur name Mehak or Kinza? would it be okay if i could call u Kinza? Embarrassed 
 
-Laiba


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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwesome
Update soooooooooo=oooooooooooooooooooooooo=oon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
thanxxfor d pm

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Amazing update Mehak. Beautifully written. You have shown Nupur as a very strong woman and I was hoping she would react like this. I don't want her to forgive Mayank easily. I feel sorry for Mayank but he deserved this.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for the pm Mehak.

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
nice one continue soooooooooon

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 6:00pm | IP Logged
hi!!!
part 10 was shockin...
mayank deserved all the anger from nupur!!
i felt bad that nupur's hurt very badlyCry
continue soon
thnx for pmSmile

divya

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 6:22pm | IP Logged
i loved the way you handled this part mehak......the dialogues were awesome....and i loved that nupur took control over the entire situation without being caught up by her emotions....such an incident can only leave you cold....the fact that mayank couldnt hear her say anything about priya and nupur telling him that she was someones daughter too.....nothing can make up for nupurs pain.....but im sure priya will be the source of magic in this story....naina

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
loved the update mehak..............OMG nupur's reaction ........loved reading it.......... now cant wait to read wat happens next.............

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
Mayank got a slapDancingPartyso so happy.LOL he seriously deserves it though. Love the way you're portraying Nupur, she is a strong headed woman and thats a really good thing. She definitely shouldn't forgive him so easilyApprove
Keep up the great work and thanks for the PMHug

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